Brickroad Gardens

Levels that have good quality and are worth playing.
Marina
Cecil
Cecil
Posts: 2343
Joined: Sun May 25, 2014 7:01 am
Flair: Pachinko
Pronouns: she/her/they/them

Brickroad Gardens

Postby Marina » Sun Jun 08, 2014 10:00 am

Greeeeeen

A relatively short level I made for the first world my Episode that currently doesn't have a name yet.

It's SMB3 Wood themed with lots of greens.
The secret exit/stars requires you to collect all eight red coins and then talk to Toad, the coins shouldn't be too hard to find.

Screenshots:
Spoiler: show
Image
Image
Image
Old Screenshots:
Spoiler: show
Image
Image
Video:

by bossedit8

Download: Credits:
Spoiler: show
Redigit for the piranha plants and the chest
The grass was made by me
Last edited by Marina on Fri Jun 13, 2014 12:11 pm, edited 3 times in total.

RudeGuy
Fry Guy
Fry Guy
Posts: 4991
Joined: Fri Dec 27, 2013 7:36 am
Flair: local guy

Re: Brickroad Gardens

Postby RudeGuy » Sun Jun 08, 2014 2:11 pm

It seems a good level. I've seen no flaws, apart for the pipe under the sizable block in the 1st screenshot.

Marina
Cecil
Cecil
Posts: 2343
Joined: Sun May 25, 2014 7:01 am
Flair: Pachinko
Pronouns: she/her/they/them

Re: Brickroad Gardens

Postby Marina » Sun Jun 08, 2014 5:48 pm

Christian07 wrote:It seems a good level. I've seen no flaws, apart for the pipe under the sizable block in the 1st screenshot.

I know that it was a bit risqué to use pipes in combination with sizeables, and on second thought I might change that, but thanks for the feedback :)

Edit: I changed up the parts with the pipes on the sizables and replaced them somehow. Download link is updated, as well as the screenshots.

bossedit8
Banned
Posts: 6838
Joined: Fri Dec 20, 2013 12:35 pm
Contact:

Re: Brickroad Gardens

Postby bossedit8 » Thu Jun 12, 2014 9:13 am

My Playthrough:



Original YouTube Video Link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=L8fe8INGT9g

Maruiki
Hoopster
Hoopster
Posts: 106
Joined: Thu Apr 17, 2014 12:33 pm

Re: Brickroad Gardens

Postby Maruiki » Fri Jun 13, 2014 1:18 am

Level Review: Brickroad Gardens

Summary: Wow, this is an excellent level. It kind of reminds me of the first Super Mario Bros 3 level. Yes, KIND OF. Enough rambling on, let's get to the first thing. The blocks were placed very nicely. I don't really see anything wrong with them. Also, I love the Bob-omb Battlefield music. It's really fitting. There were about just enough power-ups to beat the level which was really nice. I'd say there's only one con. Here's a screenshot:
Image
As you can see, there's a red Koopa just walking right through mid-air. Or so the hills make it seem like it is. You should probably do something about this to make it look more realistic. There really isn't much more to say about this section, so now that we're done here, I'd say we move on to the custom graphics! Err, that is if there are any.

Graphics: There are no custom graphics for this level.

Well, I guess I'd say that wraps it up. This is a nice level. Keep up the good work!

Level Score: 7.5

Level Status: Pretty Good

Marina
Cecil
Cecil
Posts: 2343
Joined: Sun May 25, 2014 7:01 am
Flair: Pachinko
Pronouns: she/her/they/them

Re: Brickroad Gardens

Postby Marina » Fri Jun 13, 2014 5:21 am

Cool! I just have one question, doesn't the level scoring system say that levels with scores of 6/10 to 8/10 belong in the "Pretty Good" section? I'm not 100% sure how the judging system all together works, I'm just wondering :D

RudeGuy
Fry Guy
Fry Guy
Posts: 4991
Joined: Fri Dec 27, 2013 7:36 am
Flair: local guy

Re: Brickroad Gardens

Postby RudeGuy » Fri Jun 13, 2014 6:14 am

GLuigiX wrote:Cool! I just have one question, doesn't the level scoring system say that levels with scores of 6/10 to 8/10 belong in the "Pretty Good" section? I'm not 100% sure how the judging system all together works, I'm just wondering :D
Yeah, that's right. Mauriki, you should move this into the pretty good section.

zlaker
Birdo
Birdo
Posts: 2842
Joined: Fri Dec 20, 2013 1:46 pm

Re: Brickroad Gardens

Postby zlaker » Fri Jun 13, 2014 10:14 am

Moved to the right sub-forum.

Maruiki
Hoopster
Hoopster
Posts: 106
Joined: Thu Apr 17, 2014 12:33 pm

Re: Brickroad Gardens

Postby Maruiki » Fri Jun 13, 2014 1:51 pm

GLuigiX wrote:Cool! I just have one question, doesn't the level scoring system say that levels with scores of 6/10 to 8/10 belong in the "Pretty Good" section? I'm not 100% sure how the judging system all together works, I'm just wondering :D
Sorry about that. Ice moved it to the right sub-forum.
Ice wrote:Moved to the right sub-forum.
Oh, yeah. Sorry about that.

zlaker
Birdo
Birdo
Posts: 2842
Joined: Fri Dec 20, 2013 1:46 pm

Re: Brickroad Gardens

Postby zlaker » Fri Jun 13, 2014 1:56 pm

Maruiki wrote:
Ice wrote:Moved to the right sub-forum.
Oh, yeah. Sorry about that.
Yeah it's okay. Everyone does a mistake. I remember when moved a level to the General forum xD


Return to “Pretty Good”

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 1 guest