New World: "Luigi vs 'The Dark Order'

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New World: "Luigi vs 'The Dark Order'

Postby assasinjack » Mon Dec 14, 2020 11:20 am

For many years I was thinking about making my own world of SMBX, but with a different touch, something more serious, with a more mysterious or depressing atmosphere.
The story is simple: Luigi receives a mysterious call from Dr. Toadley summoning him to the frozen kingdom to entrust him with a mission: to find Mario, who has disappeared. However, he discovers a conspiracy involving Princess Peach, Bowser, Wart, and others. It turns out that all of them are being manipulated by a very dark superior force, which will do everything possible to make the world burn.
I hope you like the story. Here are some screenshots, and the progress of the world. The content is in Spanish, but you don't lose anything by taking a look.

World 1 - Completed
World 2 - Completed
World 3 - Not

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[Update] The world 2 is finished. There the plot develops a bit. Next I send you some captures.
I saw some of your comments about the map and yes, I understand them, but my creativity when making maps is null.

There are two new bosses:

- Mr. L
- King Deedee.

Another thing, last two levels of the first world are complicated. Now I pass you the file to try the first two worlds and help me to correct some mistakes.

NOTE: It's in Spanish, but I'll translate a little bit what happened so far.
Dr. Toadley sends Luigi a letter to go from the forest to the frozen kingdom to give him a mission.
When he arrives at his house (they will have to look for a secret way out in the previous level), he tells him that Mario has disappeared and Princess Peach is locked in her castle and never goes out. He investigates and apparently Mr. L, located in a castle at the end of the second world, knows something. When you defeat him, he will tell you that King Deedee, located in a Ghost House at the end of the world, will know what to tell you.
After killing Deedee, he will tell you that you must go to the desert and look for Meta Knight.

NEW LINK: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1WgCXE9 ... sp=sharing

New Pictures:
Spoiler: show

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Re: New World: "Luigi vs 'The Dark Order'

Postby BroccoliRampage » Tue Dec 15, 2020 3:51 pm

Looks very cool! I am always interested in a game which includes an engaging story and tries something more daring with it. Best of luck to you! If you're almost two worlds in, might I suggest releasing a demo so that people can play a few levels and get fired up about it?

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Re: New World: "Luigi vs 'The Dark Order'

Postby Cedur » Tue Dec 15, 2020 3:56 pm

Seems like you took the world map from The Invasion 2?

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Re: New World: "Luigi vs 'The Dark Order'

Postby glitch4 » Tue Dec 15, 2020 6:03 pm

assasinjack wrote: Image

This is actually a World 6 map from The Invasion 2 with some edited details. Please make your own world map.

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Re: New World: "Luigi vs 'The Dark Order'

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Re: New World: "Luigi vs 'The Dark Order'

Postby Sonya Sanchez » Wed Dec 16, 2020 9:20 am

So I’ve read the story but after reading killing dedede it sounds kinda edgy lol.

Screenshots should rather be in a spoiler so the post looks better.

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Re: New World: "Luigi vs 'The Dark Order'

Postby Cedur » Wed Dec 16, 2020 3:46 pm

Also you misformatted the link.

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Re: New World: "Luigi vs 'The Dark Order'

Postby FireyPaperMario » Wed Dec 16, 2020 5:59 pm

Hey Jack, I clicked on the download link to your Google drive file containing your SMBX version 2.0.0 episode, and it freaking asked me to sign in to 1 of mah accounts see it. :\

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Re: New World: "Luigi vs 'The Dark Order'

Postby Sonya Sanchez » Thu Dec 17, 2020 1:29 am

FireyPaperMario wrote:
Wed Dec 16, 2020 5:59 pm
Hey Jack, I clicked on the download link to your Google drive file containing your SMBX version 2.0.0 episode, and it freaking asked me to sign in to 1 of mah accounts see it. :\
Doesn’t matter if you log in, you still need authorization from the owner to get the files.

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Re: New World: "Luigi vs 'The Dark Order'

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