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My very-first complete level: Piranha Jungle! (Feedback needed)

Posted: Sat Dec 12, 2020 11:07 am
by Lucario
https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/ ... sp=sharing

Also, I know there's a bug on a Green Wild Piranha sry

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Shoutouts to the creator of Wild Piranha Plant and Annoying Green Needlenose-Spitting Wild Piranha Plant...


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idk how to get my images biggers once again, sry :cry:

People seemed to dislike dev exits, so I'm taking it away. I realized how unfun it is to place a dev exit after I posted, sry everyone...

Re: My very-first complete level: Piranha Jungle!

Posted: Sat Dec 12, 2020 5:38 pm
by Lucario
Do you like the level? Do you found the secret exit?

Re: My very-first complete level: Piranha Jungle!

Posted: Sun Dec 13, 2020 7:42 am
by Lucario
Does anyone even played my level? :(

Re: My very-first complete level: Piranha Jungle!

Posted: Sun Dec 13, 2020 10:34 am
by SergioZen25
Only one day has passed, wait a bit and people could play it. Also, maybe posting a couple screenshots can make people interested in it.
One more thing, for what version of SMBX is it?

Re: My very-first complete level: Piranha Jungle!

Posted: Sun Dec 13, 2020 3:41 pm
by Lucario
Ok, then... I have to remember this isn't active as fandom or something :lol: I'm waiting! :D

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Screenshots coming on!

Re: My very-first complete level: Piranha Jungle! (Feedback needed)

Posted: Tue Dec 15, 2020 9:07 am
by Lucario
Welp. That's how it goes... If this doesn't get at least ONE feedback until Saturday 19, I'm reposting this... (oh no, what happened to cute Cheep-Cheep rank lol)

Re: My very-first complete level: Piranha Jungle! (Feedback needed)

Posted: Tue Dec 15, 2020 9:28 am
by Sonya Sanchez
Lucario wrote:
Tue Dec 15, 2020 9:07 am
Welp. That's how it goes... If this doesn't get at least ONE feedback until Saturday 19, I'm reposting this... (oh no, what happened to cute Cheep-Cheep rank lol)
Reposting it won’t help you, this will make you be viewed as a annoying member then.
The activity in feedback and playing stuff by others has decreased over the years, mostly people will post stuff but never get any replays in months.

Re: My very-first complete level: Piranha Jungle! (Feedback needed)

Posted: Tue Dec 15, 2020 9:29 am
by Lucario
OK thx for letting me know... but why does the SMBX forums suddenly got so inactive?

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Also, do you played my level, Idunn? Just asking...

Re: My very-first complete level: Piranha Jungle! (Feedback needed)

Posted: Tue Dec 15, 2020 9:43 am
by Sonya Sanchez
A lot of the people that used to be more active here have become adults by now thus they have to work during the day and others are studying so they don’t have that time like before. And some of them also left some time ago.


Haven’t played it yet, but I will try it out later okay.

Re: My very-first complete level: Piranha Jungle! (Feedback needed)

Posted: Tue Dec 15, 2020 9:45 am
by Lucario
OK thx for the information

Re: My very-first complete level: Piranha Jungle! (Feedback needed)

Posted: Thu Dec 17, 2020 8:30 am
by Lucario
Yay! My level was chose by Eclipsed to be on its level-showcasing video! Now I think I'll finally have the feedbacks I'd been waiting for!

Re: My very-first complete level: Piranha Jungle! (Feedback needed)

Posted: Fri Dec 18, 2020 4:42 am
by Radiance
It seems you haven't included your level in the download link. Please fix it

Re: My very-first complete level: Piranha Jungle! (Feedback needed)

Posted: Mon Dec 21, 2020 11:04 am
by Lucario
Oh I'm very, very, very sorry

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Re: My very-first complete level: Piranha Jungle! (Feedback needed)

Posted: Mon Dec 21, 2020 6:55 pm
by AlanLive2020
Okay. I just started playing it and I noticed one big red flag: A dev exit.
Another red flag: Some of the pipes are randomly positioned and may take you to a piranha plant, which hurts you.
At least there is a set theme for the level, but I've gotten 2 errors so far, and I don't hear any music.

Review:

This is my opinion. I'm not that good at reviews, but I'll try

I know it's your first level, but most things seem like they are placed randomly and they look kinda out of place. Also the level sometimes seems unfair. Try to not have pipes take you to death. Also, don't use secret exits at the beginning that skip the whole level, especially if it's random hidden blocks. It isn't bad for a first level though.

4/10

Try checking other people's levels, and try to learn from them, so that next time you can create a better level. You can improve with some practice! Remember to take people's advice, as long as they are not biased (Example: If someone hates water levels, that doesn't mean you shouldn't make them)

Also, be patient when posting, this game isn't that popular, so don't expect to get a reply fast. It might take days for someone to reply to your post. If it's been too long, I think it's allowed to bump up the post by posting a reply, but don't do it too much.

Re: My very-first complete level: Piranha Jungle! (Feedback needed)

Posted: Tue Dec 22, 2020 11:23 pm
by Archived
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Re: My very-first complete level: Piranha Jungle! (Feedback needed)

Posted: Wed Dec 23, 2020 3:36 pm
by Archived
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Re: My very-first complete level: Piranha Jungle! (Feedback needed)

Posted: Wed Dec 23, 2020 7:17 pm
by Lucario
Updating rn:
- I will take the dev exit
- I will fix the music dilemma

Re: My very-first complete level: Piranha Jungle! (Feedback needed)

Posted: Thu Dec 24, 2020 9:34 pm
by Archived
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Re: My very-first complete level: Piranha Jungle! (Feedback needed)

Posted: Fri Dec 25, 2020 8:45 am
by Lucario
Eclipsed wrote:
Thu Dec 24, 2020 9:34 pm
You didn't give people access to the download
Gave access now

Re: My very-first complete level: Piranha Jungle! (Feedback needed)

Posted: Fri Dec 25, 2020 5:55 pm
by Hatsune Blake
Hey there! I've recorded some gameplay / a review of your level, Piranha Jungle. I hope this video is useful! I apologize about how quiet my microphone is.
YouTube Video: show