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Posted: **Fri Sep 06, 2019 7:59 am**

So i just made a level with a custom graphic. I need your help, can someone download this level, try it, and tell me if every custom texture is in there? It would be cool to also have a screenshot.

Caution: I didn't make this custom graphics, I just found them and thought that it is very cool so i made a level with them, please don't eat me lol.

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Level download: http://www.mediafire.com/file/ugab5rs4y ... l.rar/file

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Snow-Fire level

So i was bored and I made this level, nothing special, let me know what you think!!

Download: http://www.mediafire.com/file/gl9s75b26 ... e.rar/file

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Dead World

So, this is my third level, nothing special I guess.. enjoy!! ( SMBX2 IS REQUIRED )

Download link: http://www.mediafire.com/file/ruud0s3bb ... d.rar/file

Posted: **Fri Sep 06, 2019 3:52 pm**

Nice levels, but I'd like to know what version of SMBX is required for each level tbh. But other than that, keep it up

Posted: **Fri Sep 06, 2019 4:33 pm**

FireyPaperMario wrote: ↑
Fri Sep 06, 2019 3:52 pm
Nice levels, but I'd like to know what version of SMBX is required for each level tbh. But other than that, keep it up

How can you say they are actually nice if you haven't played them lol

Posted: **Fri Sep 06, 2019 4:47 pm**

I played the second one and it's indeed well-done. I'd recommend a few more tree decorations and also having the ground one or two blocks higher towards the end. Also it's playable in SMBX2

Posted: **Fri Sep 06, 2019 4:59 pm**

Cedur wrote: ↑
Fri Sep 06, 2019 4:47 pm
it's playable in SMBX2

Thanks! ^_^

Posted: **Sat Sep 07, 2019 5:17 am**

FireyPaperMario wrote: ↑
Fri Sep 06, 2019 3:52 pm
Nice levels, but I'd like to know what version of SMBX is required for each level tbh. But other than that, keep it up

thx! I use SMBX2

Posted: **Fri Sep 13, 2019 11:26 am**

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Posted: **Fri Sep 13, 2019 11:31 am**

Eclipsed wrote: ↑
Fri Sep 13, 2019 11:26 am

Pane wrote: ↑
Fri Sep 06, 2019 7:59 am
Ping
Just a quick heads up, you should post a new post in the thread once you make a new level. Otherwise no one will know about it since he thread won’t be bumped.

ohhh thanks a lot to let me know that!!

Posted: **Sat Sep 14, 2019 5:39 pm**

Level Reviews (Im not an official level judge btw)

sandy level:

Atmosphere/theme
Im assuming this is a desert/Temple theme right? You captured the theme decently but you could have had more variety in BGOS. Seeing the same trees and hills throughout the level made it feel a bit bland. And some areas where empty as well. The music fitted alright but More work could be put into this. It still resembles a desert nothing less.
5/10

Gameplay:
The gameplay was alright. However the Variety of NPCs could have been increased. Seeing the same reskinned Goombas,Snifits And piranha plants just didn't feel like enough and made the level boring. The length of the quicksand boarders later in the levels was inconsistent. When you reach to the fire breathing statues, The borders in the quicksand pool doesn't completely cover it as shown in the editor making the quicksand in this kinda awkward to move through. I did like how you handled the bonus rooms though.
4/10

Total score
4.4/10
Dont let this score discourage you. You can always make improvements to the level.

Dead world:

Atmosphere/theme:
It sure did look dead. The tileset and background works really great and really did give the feel of a dead barren forest. The music felt a bit out of place for this level. The smw ghost theme or some custom music could have been better. Just a nitpick but I didn't like how you randomly used the smw bone tileset since it stood out in the level. what makes it more weird is that you already have a bones for your tileset but you decided to place the smw ones. The water segment felt out of place too. The water should have been a duller or darker color to fit the level theme more and it stood out just like the smw bone tileset.
5.4/10

Gameplay:
Way more better than the sandy level. More interesting level segments, More NPC variety and challenges. But the biggest flaw in the gameplay is that its possible to get completely stuck in the level and will be unable to complete it. apparently you need to jump on the giant kremling to reach the high ground. but if you accidentally defeat it its impossible to jump over without cheating.
4.8/10

total score
4.9/10
Like I said these levels can be improved a lot. fixing these flaws in your levels would make them much more better.

Screenshots

Posted: **Sun Sep 15, 2019 4:09 am**

Troopa Koopa321 wrote: ↑
Sat Sep 14, 2019 8:56 pm
Level Reviews (Im not an official level judge btw)

sandy level:

Atmosphere/theme
Im assuming this is a desert/Temple theme right? You captured the theme decently but you could have had more variety in BGOS. Seeing the same trees and hills throughout the level made it feel a bit bland. And some areas where empty as well. The music fitted alright but More work could be put into this. It still resembles a desert nothing less.
5/10

Gameplay:
The gameplay was alright. However the Variety of NPCs could have been increased. Seeing the same reskinned Goombas,Snifits And piranha plants just didn't feel like enough and made the level boring. The length of the quicksand boarders later in the levels was inconsistent. When you reach to the fire breathing statues, The borders in the quicksand pool doesn't completely cover it as shown in the editor making the quicksand in this kinda awkward to move through. I did like how you handled the bonus rooms though.
4/10

Total score
4.4/10
Dont let this score discourage you. You can always make improvements to the level.

Dead world:

Atmosphere/theme:
It sure did look dead. The tileset and background works really great and really did give the feel of a dead barren forest. The music felt a bit out of place for this level. The smw ghost theme or some custom music could have been better. Just a nitpick but I didn't like how you randomly used the smw bone tileset since it stood out in the level. what makes it more weird is that you already have a bones for your tileset but you decided to place the smw ones. The water segment felt out of place too. The water should have been a duller or darker color to fit the level theme more and it stood out just like the smw bone tileset.
5.4/10

Gameplay:
Way more better than the sandy level. More interesting level segments, More NPC variety and challenges. But the biggest flaw in the gameplay is that its possible to get completely stuck in the level and will be unable to complete it. apparently you need to jump on the giant kremling to reach the high ground. but if you accidentally defeat it its impossible to jump over without cheating.
4.8/10

total score
4.9/10
Like I said these levels can be improved a lot. fixing these flaws in your levels would make them much more better.

Screenshots

Thank for your review. I actually agree at all you said. Im new at making levels so I need maybe more time to be better.

Posted: **Mon Sep 16, 2019 2:41 am**

Scroll wrote: ↑
Fri Sep 06, 2019 4:33 pm

FireyPaperMario wrote: ↑
Fri Sep 06, 2019 3:52 pm
Nice levels, but I'd like to know what version of SMBX is required for each level tbh. But other than that, keep it up
How can you say they are actually nice if you haven't played them lol

Eh, he probably just was saying they looked nice.

Also this is a late ping from me wow.

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