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SMB3 World 1-1

Posted: Mon May 06, 2019 4:14 pm
by yellow yoshi
the original smb3 1-1 level i made

this is my first level
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this is the full level Image
DOWNLOAD LINK : http://www.mediafire.com/file/6d8u5bdi7 ... 1.lvl/file

GoodBye :D

Re: SMB3 World 1-1

Posted: Mon May 06, 2019 4:16 pm
by TheNightingale
Lol did I encourage you to upload it again? :lol:

Looks decent so far

Re: SMB3 World 1-1

Posted: Mon May 06, 2019 4:33 pm
by yellow yoshi
VanillaDude wrote:
Mon May 06, 2019 4:16 pm
Lol did I encourage you to upload it again? :lol:

Looks decent so far
:lol: not really :D

Re: SMB3 World 1-1

Posted: Tue May 07, 2019 3:23 pm
by Cedur
Editing posts exists. Both for fixing accidental mistakes and generally adding something to your recent post instead of double-posting.

Great Land

Posted: Wed May 08, 2019 3:59 pm
by yellow yoshi
My new Level :roll: :!:

pictures from the level
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Image Image

download link |
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Enjoy buddy :lol:

Re: Great Land

Posted: Wed May 08, 2019 4:55 pm
by Eri7
Nice, you are finally being original, i am so happy for you!
In which version should this level be played in? I want to try it out.

Re: Great Land

Posted: Wed May 08, 2019 4:56 pm
by TheNightingale
Looks very loyal to SMB3

Re: Great Land

Posted: Wed May 08, 2019 5:05 pm
by kr4k1n
This looks very much like Super Mario Bros. 3

Re: Great Land

Posted: Wed May 08, 2019 6:43 pm
by Eri7
So here are my thoughts of playing the level.
I figured out this is for 2.0 and not for 38A.
The beginning forced you into an action which is bad because you don't have a breathing room and a power up so one mistake, slow reflexes and slow pc will result into an annoying death.
I don't understand why did you put a 1-up generator near the beginning of the level wide open, you are giving the player free lives without making him earn them which is bad level design.
There was a random roto-disc and a random magic koopa there for no reason other than to slow you down and the length of the level was way too short, the main gimmicks ended up being very underused (goombas/koopas/pirahna plants).
I don't get why did you use the SMB3 clouds background when you could have just used the SMB3 Block background which will fit way more with the theme of the level but i guess you might have done it to provide more variety?
Also there is a not so secret pipe which leads you to a bonus room to give you a hammer suit which is again, uhh bad, because you haven't earned the power up and the level just kinda gives it to you for free.
So overall, the level resembled a level from SMB3 minus a lot of flaws but i like that you are starting to be original and i hope you can improve in the future because i really think you can make some good levels once you dedicate yourself towards achieving this goal and remember to have fun, even if my review makes you sad, please understand that you can use my perspective and my opinions to improve your level or to make your next level better!

Re: Great Land

Posted: Thu May 09, 2019 1:55 am
by MegaDood
Perhaps I'll try this, it sure does look very SMB3 esc.

Re: SMB3 World 1-1

Posted: Thu May 09, 2019 1:58 am
by MegaDood
So this is a remake of the first level of SMB3? Cool.

Re: SMB3 World 1-1

Posted: Thu May 09, 2019 3:20 am
by Eri7
MegaDood wrote:
Thu May 09, 2019 1:58 am
So this is a remake of the first level of SMB3? Cool.
Well the name of the topic clearly says that it's 1-1 so its kinda really obvious its a remake.

Re: SMB3 World 1-1

Posted: Thu May 09, 2019 6:52 am
by MegaDood
Eri7 wrote:
Thu May 09, 2019 3:20 am
MegaDood wrote:
Thu May 09, 2019 1:58 am
So this is a remake of the first level of SMB3? Cool.
Well the name of the topic clearly says that it's 1-1 so its kinda really obvious its a remake.
Eh, I wasn't really questioning it, I was just stating that I thought it was neat. (Even though we've probably seen it lots of times before.)

Re: SMB3 World 1-1

Posted: Thu May 09, 2019 3:47 pm
by ElectriKong
Please keep all your levels in 1 thread.

Re: Great Land

Posted: Sat May 11, 2019 7:10 pm
by yellow yoshi
Eri7 wrote:
Wed May 08, 2019 4:55 pm
Nice, you are finally being original, i am so happy for you!
In which version should this level be played in? I want to try it out.
1.4.4 thx

Another Amazing Land

Posted: Mon May 20, 2019 7:46 am
by yellow yoshi
Another Amazing Land

Another Short-Level by me

i hope you enjoy this

Level Features

-Nintendo Levels Style

2-SMW Texture

3-One Bonus Room

and this Images for The Level ;)




Image

Image


Download Link : http://www.mediafire.com/file/epcrswp0c ... d.lvl/file

Enjoy Buddy ( : !

Re: SMB3 World 1-1

Posted: Mon May 20, 2019 8:04 am
by ElectriKong
Please put all your levels in 1 topic.

Re: SMB3 World 1-1

Posted: Mon May 20, 2019 3:19 pm
by yellow yoshi
Electriking wrote:
Mon May 20, 2019 8:04 am
Please put all your levels in 1 topic.
i tried , but how?

Added in 1 minute 45 seconds:
Electriking wrote:
Mon May 20, 2019 8:04 am
Please put all your levels in 1 topic.
i tried , but how?

Re: SMB3 World 1-1

Posted: Mon May 20, 2019 3:26 pm
by Cedur
Edit button exists to keep all of your levels in one post, and additionally you can also post new levels directly in the thread

Re: SMB3 World 1-1

Posted: Mon May 20, 2019 3:39 pm
by sammerbro
yellow yoshi wrote:
Mon May 20, 2019 3:21 pm
Electriking wrote:
Mon May 20, 2019 8:04 am
Please put all your levels in 1 topic.
i tried , but how?

Added in 1 minute 45 seconds:
Electriking wrote:
Mon May 20, 2019 8:04 am
Please put all your levels in 1 topic.
i tried , but how?
By editing the post