SMB3 World 1-1

[yellow yoshi]

the original smb3 1-1 level i made

this is my first level

Spoiler: show

this is the full level

DOWNLOAD LINK : http://www.mediafire.com/file/6d8u5bdi7 ... 1.lvl/file

GoodBye

[TheNightingale]

Lol did I encourage you to upload it again?

Looks decent so far

[yellow yoshi]

Lol did I encourage you to upload it again?

Looks decent so far

not really

[Cedur]

Editing posts exists. Both for fixing accidental mistakes and generally adding something to your recent post instead of double-posting.

[yellow yoshi]

My new Level

pictures from the level

Spoiler: show

download link |

Spoiler: show

http://www.mediafire.com/file/p255xz5ic ... d.lvl/file

Enjoy buddy

[Eri7]

Nice, you are finally being original, i am so happy for you!
In which version should this level be played in? I want to try it out.

[TheNightingale]

Looks very loyal to SMB3

[kr4k1n]

This looks very much like Super Mario Bros. 3

[Eri7]

So here are my thoughts of playing the level.
I figured out this is for 2.0 and not for 38A.
The beginning forced you into an action which is bad because you don't have a breathing room and a power up so one mistake, slow reflexes and slow pc will result into an annoying death.
I don't understand why did you put a 1-up generator near the beginning of the level wide open, you are giving the player free lives without making him earn them which is bad level design.
There was a random roto-disc and a random magic koopa there for no reason other than to slow you down and the length of the level was way too short, the main gimmicks ended up being very underused (goombas/koopas/pirahna plants).
I don't get why did you use the SMB3 clouds background when you could have just used the SMB3 Block background which will fit way more with the theme of the level but i guess you might have done it to provide more variety?
Also there is a not so secret pipe which leads you to a bonus room to give you a hammer suit which is again, uhh bad, because you haven't earned the power up and the level just kinda gives it to you for free.
So overall, the level resembled a level from SMB3 minus a lot of flaws but i like that you are starting to be original and i hope you can improve in the future because i really think you can make some good levels once you dedicate yourself towards achieving this goal and remember to have fun, even if my review makes you sad, please understand that you can use my perspective and my opinions to improve your level or to make your next level better!

[MegaDood]

Perhaps I'll try this, it sure does look very SMB3 esc.

[MegaDood]

So this is a remake of the first level of SMB3? Cool.

[Eri7]

So this is a remake of the first level of SMB3? Cool.

Well the name of the topic clearly says that it's 1-1 so its kinda really obvious its a remake.

[MegaDood]

So this is a remake of the first level of SMB3? Cool.

Well the name of the topic clearly says that it's 1-1 so its kinda really obvious its a remake.

Eh, I wasn't really questioning it, I was just stating that I thought it was neat. (Even though we've probably seen it lots of times before.)

[ElectriKong]

Please keep all your levels in 1 thread.

[yellow yoshi]

Nice, you are finally being original, i am so happy for you!
In which version should this level be played in? I want to try it out.

1.4.4 thx

[yellow yoshi]

Another Amazing Land

Another Short-Level by me

i hope you enjoy this

Level Features

-Nintendo Levels Style

2-SMW Texture

3-One Bonus Room

and this Images for The Level









Download Link : http://www.mediafire.com/file/epcrswp0c ... d.lvl/file

Enjoy Buddy ( : !

[ElectriKong]

Please put all your levels in 1 topic.

[yellow yoshi]

Please put all your levels in 1 topic.

i tried , but how?

Added in 1 minute 45 seconds:

Please put all your levels in 1 topic.

i tried , but how?

[Cedur]

Edit button exists to keep all of your levels in one post, and additionally you can also post new levels directly in the thread

[sammerbro]

Please put all your levels in 1 topic.

i tried , but how?

Added in 1 minute 45 seconds:

Please put all your levels in 1 topic.

i tried , but how?

By editing the post