Super Mario's Star Journey: The Miracle Stars (WIP)
Posted: Sat Jun 23, 2018 7:50 am
by SuperPacMario75
SuperPacMario75 presents...
A brand new adventure:
Super Mario's Star Journey: The Miracle Stars!
Story
Oh no! Bowser has stolen Princess Peach...yet again. But this time,he has also stolen all the
Miracle Stars, making him almost invencible. You have to get back all the stars and save the princess and the Toads from Bowser's evil claws. Help Mario save his princess and defeat the evil Koopa king!
Levels
Gallery
Re: Super Mario's Star Journey: The Miracle Stars (WIP)
Posted: Wed Aug 22, 2018 1:01 pm
by Devan2002
Does this include a world map? If so, you need a screenshot for each world, otherwise, you need screenshots for 20% of your levels. Fail to do so and this project gets locked until you have proof of progress.
In your first screenshot, it's known that lacking scenery is bad, but overusing scenery (especially the same BGO) is just as bad as lacking it.
As for your second screenshot, the second leaf block is too low to be hit by Super Mario (unless you crouch under with speed). Also, what's with a few Toads being in the air for? There's no reason for them to start that high.