Nightmare

[Star]

A pretty intense level with pretty out of place music.
The music is pretty funny, It is meant to give you a feeling that you should get out of your dream fast.

So the level is about a Whomp taking Mario into a Nightmare, Mario needs to get out fast collecting the '9 Dream Shards' Which are stars which will break the seal and free you.

Spoiler: show

The music also should annoy the HELL out of the player too, Making it harder to concentrate. (Its a nightmare, What do you expect?)
The best thing? Its hard. No custom Graphics.

Its also a puzzle game where you need to think where the stars are gonna be.
And you need to thing outside the box to GET to the star.
Hidden blocks? Fake doors? Random Coins?
Fail to collect all stars and you will have no choice but to suicide.
Its a nightmare! Its a real Scream!

Download Link:
http://www.mediafire.com/download/uvl9d ... htmare.zip
Fixed Ending:
http://www.mediafire.com/download/uvl9d ... htmare.zip
THIS IS NOT A JOKE LEVEL.
This is serious and it isn't fun. its like my Episode.

I cannot fix the loud music. Sorry

Check below please

[Star]

Updated.

Now the ending is a SMB3 Star and nothing else.
Please check first post,

[Murphmario]

*hears the music* What is this!?

Anyways, playing.

[Star]

Updated

-Changed Storyline
-Changed Music

http://www.mediafire.com/download/axyfw ... pdated.zip

[HeroOfRhyme]

Lets see what we got here, Star.

[HeroOfRhyme]

So this level was really really laggy...and I mean really. It's more laggy than any other level I've played so, that will be nabbing .5 of your score.

On with the review.

Graphics: 10/10
You really seemed to use al the graphics sets.. Each section stayed to its own, that's what I like about this level. Good job. Can't really argue with the graphics choices in this.

Enemies/Placement: 6/10
Enemies in most sections...either felt void, or completely spammed. Which is bad. Your first room however was okay, try to spread your enemies out more like that. Other then that, the enemies also stays to their own section. Cool stuff, Star.

Style/Aesthetics: 4.5/10
Honestly, some of the level design was alright, and some was bad. The spikes in the bonus room, as well as the slipperiness was.. kind of Kaizo like. As well, the jumping in there to reach the door was horrible. Especially with the lag, it took forever to finally get out of that room. The idea for the propeller was cool, though. Fixing the lag would give this a 5, as well, fixing the level design up a bit would get this back up to a ten. I know you have it in you Star.

Items/.etc: 8.5/10
Items weren't really any problem at all. The stars placement was a little weird. Other then that I never really had much problem with the items. Perhaps you could think of placing the stars better.

Overall: 7.25/10
I really didn't expect it to get this high of a rating overall...since I go out of a 1.000 ratio, this getting .725... I really enjoyed the level. The music was wacky as well. Nice touch though. I didn't really catch the dreamy feel of it though. But as I said fix the lag, and the level stuff up an you'll be good.