[SMBX 1.3.0.1] Green Day

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[SMBX 1.3.0.1] Green Day

Postby krychonafide » Sat Nov 25, 2017 7:26 am

I made the level to smbx, it's pretty short but i think this is my first level which is good :)
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I had only one screenshot :/
Have a nice game!
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Re: [SMBX 1.3.0.1] Green Day

Postby xDestroy » Sat Nov 25, 2017 8:17 am

Download link is broken :/

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Re: [SMBX 1.3.0.1] Green Day

Postby krychonafide » Sat Nov 25, 2017 8:36 am

xDestroy wrote:Download link is broken :/
Try now.

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Re: [SMBX 1.3.0.1] Green Day

Postby FireyPaperMario » Sat Nov 25, 2017 9:01 am

Liking the name of the custom level rn. Named after a famous band named Green Day

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Re: [SMBX 1.3.0.1] Green Day

Postby krychonafide » Sat Nov 25, 2017 9:09 am

MarioRPGExpert93 wrote:Liking the name of the custom level rn. Named after a famous band named Green Day
Hmm... I do not understand.

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Re: [SMBX 1.3.0.1] Green Day

Postby xDestroy » Sat Nov 25, 2017 9:10 am

TheToad89 wrote:
MarioRPGExpert93 wrote:Liking the name of the custom level rn. Named after a famous band named Green Day
Hmm... I do not understand.

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Re: [SMBX 1.3.0.1] Green Day

Postby krychonafide » Sat Nov 25, 2017 9:15 am

Anyway, I called this level because it's so green, I did not know there was such a band :/

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Re: [SMBX 1.3.0.1] Green Day

Postby TheBossCDA » Sat Nov 25, 2017 1:00 pm

Very standard world-1 style level, but for your first level in SMBX, this is a pretty good start.

Gameplay
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As a world-1 level, I think it does enough to guide new players in the right direction. Water is used where bottomless pits are to give players a second chance if they fall, enemies are spaced nicely, and powerups are used relatively liberally. That being said, the level isn't really designed around the raccoon leaf, which to my understanding is the primary powerup in the stage. There are no wide open areas or secrets that involve flight/tail spin that I know of. I think throughout my playthrough, there was only one instance where I found it useful other than getting out of the bonus room, and that was combat based.


The risk and reward in the level was very hit and miss. On one hand, coins are placed in nice spots, and the encounter with the volcano lotus on the semi-solid was a great early-game challenge. On the other hand, you get coin clutter:
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Packing tons of coins into question blocks like this, especially when used frequently can disrupt the flow of the game, and may entice people to skip collecting the coins that they've earned out of boredom. It's a lot more fun for players if coins are spaced in the world for them to run around and collect rather than a single block that they have to mash a button to reap anything from.


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Yup. It's a huge difficulty spike that comes out of nowhere and is placed so accessibly in the world. I'd add an escape pipe so people don't have to complete the challenge to get back to the level, and maybe hide the entrance somewhere harder to get that only a more seasoned player would be able to find.
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The level is very balanced aesthetically. The scenery has a nice flow to it, with background objects being neither underused nor overused, and slopes being used in a pleasing way. The SMW grass palate looks nice as always, and goes alright with the background. The trees were a nice idea, but I'll get to that in a moment. Anyways, onto the nitpicks:


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These pockets could be used to add some contrast and detail to the level without using a secondary tileset, but since the exact same block used in the normal ground is used to fill them, they just look a bit weird in my opinion. To add contrast and depth, I would use a background object like
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and replace it with something like
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and maybe add some other BGOs like bushes or flowers to the pockets while you're at it.


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These staircase trees just look bad. From the ground it's a lot less noticeable, but that doesn't stop Raccoon Mario. I would connect their leaves at the top of the screen and make them branch out a bit more.

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Re: [SMBX 1.3.0.1] Green Day

Postby krychonafide » Sat Nov 25, 2017 1:19 pm

Thanks for the opinion! :)

...with this exaggerated.

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Re: [SMBX 1.3.0.1] Green Day

Postby Great_Papyrus123 » Sun Nov 26, 2017 12:46 pm

good level bro!

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Re: [SMBX 1.3.0.1] Green Day

Postby krychonafide » Sun Nov 26, 2017 1:30 pm

Great_Papyrus123 wrote:good level bro!
Thanks!

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Re: [SMBX 1.3.0.1] Green Day

Postby Kley » Sun Nov 26, 2017 1:33 pm

Great_Papyrus123 wrote:good level bro!
Cool post man!

... ;) constructive criticism or general substance is key!


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