SMB3 remake 1-1 [1.3.0.1]

[Great_Papyrus123]

HI i made an level in smbx 1.3.0.1 i shared it with someone and he said it was soo good and with it's secrets so after that i wanted to share it with everyone here!! also it's my first level!

link for download:
https://www.mediafire.com/file/nv5xfror ... 0level.lvl

Screenshots: show

thanks if you downloaded it

[5QU3L3T0N]

I hate it, bad level disign... Bad npc placement... Death traps... Is that your first level?

[RTisBack]

I hate it, bad level disign... Bad npc placement... Death traps... Is that your first level?

It's creative.

[xDestroy]

screenshots please

[HackPlayer7]

I'm going to be honest, the level isn't really great.
Sure, the graphics are fine.
But the level design is just flawed.
There are many things that have no reason to be here, such as the random invisible blocks and 1-up farm.
Only having the top of the pipe use-able looks ugly.
The invisible tanooki block is unreachable, and there's absolutely no way one can find out about the invisible spiny blocks on purpose.

Luck Choosing =/= Good Gameplay
The pipe section brings nothing to the level but frustation.

Overall, here are the things that should be fixed:
-The random invisible blocks
-The pipes (Make them longer)
-The way to reach the goal (Not only does the player have no idea they had to enter previous pipes, but they shouldn't hug themselves against all of them to find the correct one.)
-The two random dragon coin
-The graphics (Lot of cut off)
-The turnips (they don't damage the boss at all.)

If you fix these things, then the level won't be as unfair.

[Great_Papyrus123]

okay i cant fix the turnips and the dragon coins are a trick to make the player to go in the orange pipe and tanooki block is reachable with an shell or goomba and the goal is just to go straight and then into yellow pipe and then fight the secret boss done!

[FireyPaperMario]

dude, I think you're just want us to try your level to see what it looks like instead of providing some preview proof of your level. No offense

[HackPlayer7]

okay i cant fix the turnips and the dragon coins are a trick to make the player to go in the orange pipe and tanooki block is reachable with an shell or goomba and the goal is just to go straight and then into yellow pipe and then fight the secret boss done!

1.You can, just remove the turnips or use something stronger.
2. That's not the point. Having two Dragon coins right next to each other is too easy to get. Use regular coins.
3. That doesn't excuse the fact the tanooki block's randomly in the open. At least tell the player it's there.
4.Again. That doesn't excuse it. Relying on luck isn't a good gameplay, even then you shouldn't punish the player for trying to find the right pipe, it makes the level longer.

[Great_Papyrus123]

okay i fixed all time to update the link

[Turret 3471]

okay i fixed all time to update the link

you think you could add screenshots too?

[HackPlayer7]

okay i fixed all time to update the link

You didn't fix all of it, there's still issues left.
If you want to, I can edit your level, correct the mistakes and send it back to you so you can take notes.

[Quill]

Since the thread has had a fair amount of discussion already (I'm not going to comment on the quality of the discussion here), I'll lock this instead of deleting it until screenshots are ready. PM me with them when they're available.

[Great_Papyrus123]

okay i fixed all time to update the link

You didn't fix all of it, there's still issues left.
If you want to, I can edit your level, correct the mistakes and send it back to you so you can take notes.

nah

[Turret 3471]

hmm... you think you can use something different for images, like Imgur? the discordapp url never seems to work for me... at all...

[Great_Papyrus123]

hmm... you think you can use something different for images, like Imgur? the discordapp url never seems to work for me... at all...

hmm ok

screenshots please

screenshots are done

hmm... you think you can use something different for images, like Imgur? the discordapp url never seems to work for me... at all...

imgur wont show screenshots idk why when i press show nothing pops up


so i wont add imgur screenshots srry

[Turret 3471]

hmm... you think you can use something different for images, like Imgur? the discordapp url never seems to work for me... at all...

imgur wont show screenshots idk why when i press show nothing pops up


so i wont add imgur screenshots srry

I don't think you put them in correctly. The links worked, images came up fine, but in order for them to show up on the forums, the code should look something like this:

Easiest way to do this is to just upload you images, right click on them after they're done uploading, and click View Image. If the URL doesn't look correct, try going back to the last page and wait a few seconds.

[Great_Papyrus123]

hmm... you think you can use something different for images, like Imgur? the discordapp url never seems to work for me... at all...

imgur wont show screenshots idk why when i press show nothing pops up


so i wont add imgur screenshots srry

I don't think you put them in correctly. The links worked, images came up fine, but in order for them to show up on the forums, the code should look something like this:

Easiest way to do this is to just upload you images, right click on them after they're done uploading, and click View Image. If the URL doesn't look correct, try going back to the last page and wait a few seconds.

that is what i did

[Turret 3471]

imgur wont show screenshots idk why when i press show nothing pops up


so i wont add imgur screenshots srry

I don't think you put them in correctly. The links worked, images came up fine, but in order for them to show up on the forums, the code should look something like this:

Easiest way to do this is to just upload you images, right click on them after they're done uploading, and click View Image. If the URL doesn't look correct, try going back to the last page and wait a few seconds.

that is what i did

Actually you didn't. The URLs you used were https://imgur.com/a/RL0U9, which don't work with the [img] command since it isn't the actual image file, but rather the URL to the Imgur page.

[Great_Papyrus123]

I don't think you put them in correctly. The links worked, images came up fine, but in order for them to show up on the forums, the code should look something like this:

Easiest way to do this is to just upload you images, right click on them after they're done uploading, and click View Image. If the URL doesn't look correct, try going back to the last page and wait a few seconds.

that is what i did

Actually you didn't. The URLs you used were https://imgur.com/a/RL0U9, which don't work with the [img] command since it isn't the actual image file, but rather the URL to the Imgur page.

i didn't do that i put it like dat


https://i.imgur.com/OYevegy.png

[Cedur]

viewtopic.php?f=89&t=19944&p=302953#p302953

you made the same mistake (it's a very common mistake).