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(I'm sorry if my English is bad)
Hello. I'm posting my graphics here. If you use it then please write me so I know.



https://yadi.sk/d/3bvoRRKv3PL6vh

Looks nice. Well done.

MegaDood wrote:Looks nice. Well done.

I'm thinking of making a winter version of this graphics.

Better if you post screenshots, of that way we'll know if the GFXs calls our attention

Pop Yoshi Bros wrote:Better if you post screenshots, of that way we'll know if the GFXs calls our attention

Screenshots of the winter version?

This is looking pretty good considering it most likely is one of your first graphics. I do have some contructive critisism though.
The green colour is way too bright and there is too little contrast between the different shades aswell. I suggest you darken the darker shades of green more and desaturate the whole thing to get rid of the brightness. I also recommend you to change this lime green to more of a leaf green colour. Since grass is never that vibrant. The fill tile (dirt) is looking pretty good though it needs some modification. As it is right now the fill tile is totally symmetrical, which would be fine in a castle but not in a grassland since dirt never looks exactly the same. This can be fixed easily by adding some random pixels of the other colours into the lines of one colour.

Witchking666 wrote:This is looking pretty good considering it most likely is one of your first graphics. I do have some contructive critisism though.
The green colour is way too bright and there is too little contrast between the different shades aswell. I suggest you darken the darker shades of green more and desaturate the whole thing to get rid of the brightness. I also recommend you to change this lime green to more of a leaf green colour. Since grass is never that vibrant. The fill tile (dirt) is looking pretty good though it needs some modification. As it is right now the fill tile is totally symmetrical, which would be fine in a castle but not in a grassland since dirt never looks exactly the same. This can be fixed easily by adding some random pixels of the other colours into the lines of one colour.

Well, I think I can fix all the mistakes.

I tried to view the picture and this happened

arcade999 wrote:I tried to view the picture and this happened

Spoiler: show

i cklicked it and its fine for me...

MegaDood wrote:Looks nice. Well done.

Praise is welcomed, but let's try to be constructive or at least have more to say about the graphics

Here's my constructive advice:
I could believe you used the Mario 3 palette to make these graphics.... But they look Too original to be Mario 3 graphics imo

Kley wrote:

MegaDood wrote:Looks nice. Well done.

Praise is welcomed, but let's try to be constructive or at least have more to say about the graphics

Sorry, I guess it looks good because it looks simple enough to be in any first world. My only real criticism is that the grass is a little bit too green for the dirt underneath. But, hey, that's just how I feel. Feel free to disagree.

Ok now that there's screenshots...

I kinda like what you did here, I'll like to see this tileset but now with BGOs, only if you can of course

I really don't like the fill. It repeats too quickly and looks ugly IMO. It gave me a headache looking at it since the full itself is very colorful