Here's some constructive criticism: What the hell. "Simplified Edtion"
Story
You are brought here by an invitation to a perfect utopia where it is not influenced by the other major powers and has everything you would want, power, electricity, Mario kart, food, and murder! Wait, murder? it appears that someone has died. You find out that the mafia has been aboard this cruise to take this perfect utopia for themselves. There is also an arsonist and a Cereal killer! NOT THE CEREAL! You must take the mafia in insure you have a nice and peaceful life on these lands.
The hell are these d00ds - Mafia, must have the town at half their pop count along with the arsonist dead. Along with their normal nightkill they can inspect a player every other night. (They must have killed 1 blue or 3 greens and they get one free inspection the first night only)
Godfather - Cardflips blue on inspection and death during the night. Otherwise cardflips Red. Visiting a player will silence them. Once throughout the game, can visit a player, if they are the Cereal killer then they are recruited and become a Mafiaso. If they are not a Cereal Killer the Godfather's role is revealed. Could recruit the Special Person if the consort died.
Consort - Can visit a player a during the night to roleblock them. Is immune to nightkills
Disguiser - Can visit a player at night to trade colors with said player for one night. Colors return to normal the following night.
Mafiaso - Can visit a player a night to learn who visited that player.
Look at these nerds - Town, wins by killing all the third parties and the mafia.
Detective - Can inspect a player at night learning their color. Once the Detective dies a new one will be picked out of the townspeople at random after 2 nights of the detective's death once.
Mortician - Can inspect a dead player at night. Inspecting them will learn the give you the dna of the killer or say killers. Considering you are underpaid, and you have inefficient equipment, you will only get the first letter of their name or last letter along with 3 other people who are not involved or may be involved.
Doctor - Can protect a player at night from death. Said player will be inactive for the next day i.e. silenced if was attacked. Negates roleblocking and color swapping, does not silence the person if this is the only thing they were targeted for.
Nurse - Takes over the Doctor's role after their death.
Bodyguard - Protects a player at night. if protected player was meant to be slain then they take down the person who was meant to kill them. Can not be negated by roleblock. Once the bodyguard is slain, a new bodyguard will be picked from the townspeople at random once.
Vigilante - During the night they can preform a night kill. If it was a townsperson, they are sent to jail the next night not being able to preform their nightkill that night. I.e. 1 night block.
Person - Normal person, can visit a player at night to confuse the mafiaso.
Person - Normal person, can visit a player at night to confuse the mafiaso.
Person - Normal person, can visit a player at night to confuse the mafiaso.
Person - Normal person, can visit a player at night to confuse the mafiaso.
Person - Normal person, can visit a player at night to confuse the mafiaso.
Special Person - Normal person, can visit a player at night to confuse the mafiaso. Their vote counts for double. Does not know they are special.
Where these Wiibs come from - Third party, have different win conditions.
Arsonist - Can gas a player's house at night. This house will remain gassed (or say oiled I guess?) throughout the game. Can gas other players houses every night. Once throughout the night with there being at least 2 houses gassed they can set a match lighting the houses on fire along with everyone in it killing them. Can win with the Cereal killer. Is immune to night kills and can not be silenced nor roleblocked. Can win alone. Wins by all the town's blues slain, the person role group cut in half, and the mafia all slain. Or all died.
Cereal Killer - Can kill a player a night. Is immune to night kills, silences and roleblocks. Works with the Arsonist to kill the mafia. Can be converted to win the mafia under the Godfather visit, in turn they lose all their previous role abilities and become a Mafiaso. Siding with the mafia and losing their win condition with the arsonist. Will be automatically gassed if they become a Mafiaso. Town will need to rid this one to win still, but does not count as 1+ for the mafia even though they are now sided with the mafia.
Also please note that the only the first night will have no night kill abilities. Just to make sure others are actually have a chance to do something useful or uneventful at the day. All other abilities can be used along with the arsonist's gassing.
Blah blah mafia knows each other, and they are the only group to know who others are.subscribe
Changelog
- Gave win conditions to town
- Gave win conditions to Mafia
- Gave win conditions to the arsonist
- Gave win conditions to the Cereal Killer
- Gave the Mafia team an extra ability
- Revised the Cereal killer's win condtions
- Gave a new ability to the Godfather.
- Changed the colors of the Mortician, Arsonist, and Cereal Killer.
- Added Special Person
- Revised the Cereal killer in general
- Removed constructive criticism
You are the Godfather You lead your group to take control of the town and slay the outsiders. By visiting one person you instill fear into them. You can give a threatening, persuading speech to sway either the Cereal killer or Special Person to become a Mafiaso. Your waifu is Consort, your snek man is Disguiser and your fresh member is Mafiaso
You are the Consort, second in command of the mafia. By visiting someone you actively disable their role by defeating them in mario kart, why are you so good? Disguiser is the sneaky player of the group and Mafiaso is brand new.
You are the Disguiser, you take other players color and trade it with your own. You don't get get to keep (as that means balance issues) Your best friends and they obliviously trust you are the Godfather, Consort, and the Mafiaso
Mafiaso, you are brand new, fresh, still young. You work to see who is visiting who. The Persons will try and confuse you so take note. Your leader is the Godfather
, and fellow members are the
Consort and the
Diguiser
Detective is what you are see, you investigate people and find their color see. Once in the game see, you get replaced after your death see. So someone might be your deputy back there see.
You are the underpaid, unequipped, and bored Mortician, When someone dies you can collect some DNA and find the killer, if you could. Instead you get the first letters or last if you want of the killer and 2 other people that were not or were not included.
You are the Doctor, you work to save lives, but they need to rest so they are silenced for the day, if they were targeted for being killed. If they were meant to play mario kart or lose their color then the you tell them to go outside and get some air. You have a Nurse, but you don't know where the hell they are.
You are the Nurse You don't know where your Doctor is, but you take over their role after their death. Other wise you can act as a Person and visit people for the time being.
You are the Bodyguard You protect a person a night from roleblocks and silences along with color changing. If they were meant to be gassed or killed then you are gassed or slain. A new bodyguard will come forth after your death
You are the Vigilante , you dress in all black with a cowl that looks like a bat. You can kill a person during the night. If you slay an innocent, then you put yourself in jail for the night although no one runs said jail, for your crimes. You look shady thats why you are red.
You are a Personor the Special Person, you don't know which, but either way you can visit someone at night to throw off the Mafiaso. If you are the Special Person they you gain one extra point to your vote along with being threatened by the Godfather.
You are the Arsonist, you can douse a player in gas at night. When you decided that it is enough gassing then you can set a match on fire. Killing all those that are gassed. In turn you can no longer gas or light the match. You can work with the Cereal killer, but if they are swayed by the godfather's words then they are gassed.
You are the Cereal killer, You were put in jail for killing Cereal, UNIRONICALLY THEY DID NOT PUT YOU IN FOR KILLING ALL THE PEOPLE IN YOUR NEIGHBORHOOD. So killing cereal is a major crime, what can ya do? Anyways you can kill a player at night. You could win with the arsonist. If you are swayed by the Godfather's words they you become a Mafiaso, but you are doused by the arsonist in turn
Pseudo wrote:So there are no kills on the first night? If so I might recommend just starting the game on Day 1 since it otherwise gives the town a pretty big advantage, what with the sheriff getting an essentially free inspection and stuff.
Would recommend changing the light blue cardflip to orange or another color just for further contrast from the main blue cardflip.
What is the Cereal Killer's exact win condition? Does it need to actively ally with the mafia or arsonist or does it just win when the town is defeated?
Allowing the Cereal Killer to ally with the mafia is really strong in any case, and probably overpowered since it gives them a powerful new ally and effectively 5 members, to an already strong mafia.
Edit: looks good now.
Danny wrote:Still the same concerns as Pseudo.
Approved.
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