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That's a small screenshot... but alright.

By the looks of the screenshot, this might be a wild ride.

..Oh my

i smell item and enemy spam comming up

Wtf did I just play, I can't even tell if this is a joke level or not

To reduce clutter in the Levels section, I'm posting this here so the Levels section won't be flooded with one-off levels from the same person.
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I've played both of these, and they are both terrible. They're filled with enemy spamming, almost uncompletable, and are filled with cutoffs and are just generally ugly to the eyes. These can be easily fixed though, and you probably should if you want to make better levels

Alright, I took your criticism and decided to make a simple two-phase boss fight. Normal enemies are used only for throwable props and objects to jump off of. The level now uses a more subdued, thematically consistent scheme.
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I played your new level, and I gotta say, it's a big improvement compared to your other 2 levels! Firstly though, thank you for being a good sport from my criticism. Sorry if I came off a bit harsh as well, but it was really cool to see you take it and improve instead of whining. Are there still a few problems with the level? Yes, but they are easily fixable.
Firstly, slow the shy guy generator down just a bit. Like maybe 4-5 seconds instead of rapid,as it makes the battlefield a bit cluttered. Secondly, I would make Mother Brain a bit more interesting, like having it move around a bit instead of staying still. It'll make the battle more interesting!
Great job with this!

hey i made a video

I like joke levels.

The shit is real.
Seriously, what the actual fuck is this. I dunno what to say.

KekBrother wrote:The shit is real.
Seriously, what the actual fuck is this. I dunno what to say.

Someone will be banned or warned

Critiques are supposed to be constructive even if the level is horrible, not just throw random insults instead of say what you don't like

Pop Yoshi Bros wrote:

KekBrother wrote:The s*** is real.
Seriously, what the actual f*** is this. I dunno what to say.

Someone will be banned or warned

Critiques are supposed to be constructive even if the level is horrible, not just throw random insults instead of say what you don't like

Preach it, brothuh, preach it! XD
(... yeah, I might have some experience with horrible "criticism". this would be the perfect explanation to give to anyone *cough cough* SFGHQ *cough cough*)

I guess it's true, There is a thing called a "SMBX Hell"

MarioRPGExpert93 wrote:I guess it's true, There is a thing called a "SMBX Hell"

you might not like the level but please specify why so that the creator may learn from it rather than insulting them

Waddle Derp wrote:

MarioRPGExpert93 wrote:I guess it's true, There is a thing called a "SMBX Hell"

you might not like the level but please specify why so that the creator may learn from it rather than insulting them

It looks like a "SMBX Hell", because of the random enemy placement & spam.

MarioRPGExpert93 wrote:

Waddle Derp wrote:

MarioRPGExpert93 wrote:I guess it's true, There is a thing called a "SMBX Hell"

you might not like the level but please specify why so that the creator may learn from it rather than insulting them

It looks like a "SMBX Hell", because of the random enemy placement & spam.

Ahem, it exists since the SMBX creation... no, it exists since Lunar Magic creation...