Touhou Comic ; Cold-Blooded

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Touhou Comic ; Cold-Blooded

Postby RPG_Magician » Sun Jul 30, 2017 8:06 am

Story Summary ; Cirno is sick of being the world-class fairy idiot and treated like a joke, and decides to change it for the good. And fortunately, violence is the only thing that these youkai and humans understand.

Warning;
This comic series has a little bit of swearing, blood and death.

Page 1 - Cold-Hearted.: show
ImageThe battle between two are closing to an end.
Page 2 - See you in Hell.: show
ImageThe barrier fails...
Page 3 - Witness.: show
ImagePatchouli witnesses the death of her friend.
Page 4 - Strange Chills.: show
ImageReimu senses a strange chill in the air.
Page 5 - Her Motive.: show
ImageDaiyousei has concern.
Page 6 - What you are.: show
Released Tomorrow.
I'll be updating these often. I would be happy to accept any tips to improve this further, and as further I go into this series, the art style will improve. I will also be re-editing any pages I deemed too rough or unsatisfactory. I mean, they're already roughly drawn already, but I can fix up many of the lines when I return to them. A problem I will not be able to fix, is how I can't draw Touhou clothes to save my life, so I'll be alternating them to make it easier for me to draw. Backgrounds most likely will not be a thing, since it will just continue cluttering up the panels and create confusion on the action and scenery.

Pages WIP ; 5,6,7

Also thanks to Ryaa and Bossedit8 for helping me with tips and pointing out my mistakes (Like Cirno doesn't have her wings!, But she doesn't normally have glasses either.) and also giving me motivation.
And thanks for Waddle Derp for helping clarify some things before I posted this thread.

So for now, Enjoy!
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Re: Touhou Comic ; Cold-Blooded

Postby FireyPaperMario » Sun Jul 30, 2017 8:09 am

Wait wait wait... Since when does Patchouli care about Marisa in this comic, where in the actual canon, Patchouli hates Marisa?

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Re: Touhou Comic ; Cold-Blooded

Postby RPG_Magician » Mon Jul 31, 2017 7:39 am

MarioRPGExpert93 wrote:Wait wait wait... Since when does Patchouli care about Marisa in this comic, where in the actual canon, Patchouli hates Marisa?
Not sure where in the Canon that Patchouli hates Marisa (But I think she's only upset about Marisa because of stolen books), but they definitely have a form of friendship. But this comic isn't canon anyways :P
And if you don't think of it like that, imagine having an ally die in front of you.


Anyways, Page 5 is here.
Page 5 - Her Motive.: show
ImageDaiyousei has concern.


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