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Well, it's good for a first attempt, but the animation is just all over the place at some points, as the Buzzy Beetle isn't walking straight. Also, some of the acting is quite bad, especially in the lines being used.

This would probably work a little better if this was a complete comedy also I am assuming you got insperation from SMG4

HeroLinik wrote:Well, it's good for a first attempt, but the animation is just all over the place at some points, as the Buzzy Beetle isn't walking straight. Also, some of the acting is quite bad, especially in the lines being used.

It's not animated it's a game I think and he carrying the characters with some sort of thing in that game.

DJFMHD wrote:This would probably work a little better if this was a complete comedy also I am assuming you got insperation from SMG4.

well yeah. but i don't know who put a dislike in my video?

Tbh it's very poorly done. Spelling mistakes, poor voices, bad-looking animation, and weird camera movement

HeroLinik wrote:Well, it's good for a first attempt, but the animation is just all over the place at some points, as the Buzzy Beetle isn't walking straight. Also, some of the acting is quite bad, especially in the lines being used.

well i walking straight ain't that easy.
the acting is funny.
the lines ? i did that people who will understand.

PixelPest wrote:Tbh it's very poorly done. Spelling mistakes, poor voices, bad-looking animation, and weird camera movement

well is hard to camera.

What you use and whether it's difficult or not doesn't justify poor quality. And also why are the characters always floating?

Tarkan809 wrote:

HeroLinik wrote:Well, it's good for a first attempt, but the animation is just all over the place at some points, as the Buzzy Beetle isn't walking straight. Also, some of the acting is quite bad, especially in the lines being used.

well i walking straight ain't that easy.
the acting is funny.
the lines ? i did that people who will understand.

YouTube isn't a place to share videos to your age group, it's a place to share videos with the world. You can't control who watches your videos on YouTube.

PixelPest wrote:What you use and whether it's difficult or not doesn't justify poor quality. And also why are the characters always floating?

well poorly i accidentally destroyed the table so yeah.

HeroLinik wrote:

Tarkan809 wrote:

HeroLinik wrote:Well, it's good for a first attempt, but the animation is just all over the place at some points, as the Buzzy Beetle isn't walking straight. Also, some of the acting is quite bad, especially in the lines being used.

well i walking straight ain't that easy.
the acting is funny.
the lines ? i did that people who will understand.

YouTube isn't a place to share videos to your age group, it's a place to share videos with the world. You can't control who watches your videos on YouTube.

well ok.

Looks like something made with MMD models imo

Tarkan809 wrote:

PixelPest wrote:What you use and whether it's difficult or not doesn't justify poor quality. And also why are the characters always floating?

well poorly i accidentally destroyed the table so yeah.

What is that even supposed to mean

PixelPest wrote:

Tarkan809 wrote:

PixelPest wrote:What you use and whether it's difficult or not doesn't justify poor quality. And also why are the characters always floating?

well poorly i accidentally destroyed the table so yeah.

What is that even supposed to mean

oh. well that when i broke the table

Tarkan809 wrote:well poorly i accidentally destroyed the table so yeah.

Breaking the table is no excuse to make poor animation, it's a mark of poor skill. If anything, you really should wait until you get the hang of GMod before you make your own videos based in it.

HeroLinik wrote:

Tarkan809 wrote:well poorly i accidentally destroyed the table so yeah.

Breaking the table is no excuse to make poor animation, it's a mark of poor skill. If anything, you really should wait until you get the hang of GMod before you make your own videos based in it.

ok.

Tarkan809 wrote:

PixelPest wrote:Tbh it's very poorly done. Spelling mistakes, poor voices, bad-looking animation, and weird camera movement

well is hard to camera but i used gmod.

Careful not to double post.
just edit your previous one to include more substance next time.
Also, this was comedic as hell haha

Kley wrote:

Tarkan809 wrote:

PixelPest wrote:Tbh it's very poorly done. Spelling mistakes, poor voices, bad-looking animation, and weird camera movement

well is hard to camera but i used gmod.

Careful not to double post.
just edit your previous one to include more substance next time.
Also, this was comedic as hell haha

ok.

People are giving him a hard time about the characters walking. He is using Gmod it not easy the make the characters walk right but this still is kinda poorly made.

Also I realized you can't speak with good English.