SMBX University by Aero

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Re: SMBX University by Aero

Postby MarioOverlord » Tue Jun 06, 2017 3:53 am

This went downhill with the introduction of those bad new characters

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Re: SMBX University by Aero

Postby krakin » Tue Jun 06, 2017 5:50 am

thehelmetguy1 wrote:Yay Pyro was saved.
Also is it bad that I want to see Sanct try to kill more people?
i want to see Sanct get killed

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Re: SMBX University by Aero

Postby Mable » Tue Jun 06, 2017 6:12 am

practicalshorty014 wrote:
thehelmetguy1 wrote:Yay Pyro was saved.
Also is it bad that I want to see Sanct try to kill more people?
i want to see Sanct get killed
Too far

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Re: SMBX University by Aero

Postby krakin » Tue Jun 06, 2017 6:13 am

Mable wrote:
practicalshorty014 wrote:
thehelmetguy1 wrote:Yay Pyro was saved.
Also is it bad that I want to see Sanct try to kill more people?
i want to see Sanct get killed
Too far
Too slow

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Re: SMBX University by Aero

Postby aero » Tue Jun 06, 2017 11:38 am

I'm starting ep5 now, you'll all see.

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Re: SMBX University by Aero

Postby Knux » Tue Jun 06, 2017 11:47 am

Aero wrote:I'm starting ep5 now, you'll all see.
at least take your time with it for once because all 4 previous entries are like a 12 year old's deviant art journal. it's so cringe with all the cheesy and poorly thought-out lines.

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Re: SMBX University by Aero

Postby aero » Tue Jun 06, 2017 11:50 am

Knux wrote:
Aero wrote:I'm starting ep5 now, you'll all see.
at least take your time with it for once because all 4 previous entries are like a 12 year old's deviant art journal. it's so cringe with all the cheesy and poorly thought-out lines.
I learned it from watching you, dad.

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Re: SMBX University by Aero

Postby Knux » Tue Jun 06, 2017 11:51 am

Aero wrote:
Knux wrote:
Aero wrote:I'm starting ep5 now, you'll all see.
at least take your time with it for once because all 4 previous entries are like a 12 year old's deviant art journal. it's so cringe with all the cheesy and poorly thought-out lines.
I learned it from watching you, dad.
i don't get it

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Re: SMBX University by Aero

Postby FireyPaperMario » Tue Jun 06, 2017 11:53 am

Aero wrote:
Knux wrote:
Aero wrote:I'm starting ep5 now, you'll all see.
at least take your time with it for once because all 4 previous entries are like a 12 year old's deviant art journal. it's so cringe with all the cheesy and poorly thought-out lines.
I learned it from watching you, dad.
Knux is Aero's dad?!? :o

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Re: SMBX University by Aero

Postby Knux » Tue Jun 06, 2017 11:56 am

aeromatter may or may not be my son but i either way sorry for i am as free as a bird now and this bird you cannot change

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Re: SMBX University by Aero

Postby Thehelmetguy1 » Tue Jun 06, 2017 6:09 pm

*Eating popcorn*
Don't mind me, continue fighting.

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Re: SMBX University by Aero

Postby aero » Wed Jun 07, 2017 4:05 am

Episode 5 – Little Pieces of Time

Enjl peered into Officer Aristocrat’s eyes. They stared back as if they were security cameras themselves, monitoring Enjl’s every move. The furrow in the officer’s brow and beaming attention he gave Enjl meant this was serious business. Enjl swallowed, looked down, and then back at Officer Aristocrat and reported the events in the bathroom.

“Sir, I pulled the fire alarm.” Enjl said.

“What? Why the hell would you do that? Do you want to be kicked out of this university, boy?!” Officer Aristocrat shouted.

“Not in the slightest! I did it to protect this girl! I saw Sanct pull out a gun an–“ Enjl began.

“Wait a minute slow down… slow down. What girl?” Officer Aristocrat asked.

“Pyro. Her name is Pyro, I recognized her and when I saw that Sanct had pulled out a gun on her the only thing I could do was pull the fire alarm to scare him off.” Enjl answered cordially.

“You’re sure about this?” Officer Aristocrat asked.

“I saw it with my own two eyes, sir.” Enjl said.

“I will let the rest of the school administration and the local PD know. Thank you for telling me. Now get outside with the rest of the students until I can get this damn alarm off.” Officer Aristocrat said.

The halls were completely vacant. Enjl made walked briskly to the front entrance towards the school’s lawn when he passed by Superiorstar’s class door once again. From the outside of his classroom, Enjl heard Superiorstar’s end of a bizarre phone conversation.

“Yes, right.
Mhm.
I und- I understand. Can we tal-
Mhm.
I know this is a big deal but can we please talk about this later? There was a fire alarm and I need to be outside.
Yes.
We will talk about this later. Okay?
We will talk about it later.
Okay, I know. I know! Let’s talk about this later please. I have to –
I have to go now.”


The fire alarm was shut off though Enjl remained inside and hidden outside of Superiorstar’s class eavesdropping. He had no idea what Superiorstar could have been discussing or with who, but Enjl continued past toward the school’s entrance doors. He breathed in the autumn air, and walked down the steps still wondering about the strange phone conversation and still dazed over Sanct’s attempted murder being stopped with time powers.

SMBX University’s lawn was littered with frustrated students waiting around. Enjl scanned everyone outside, looking for Pyro. He took a few more steps forward, dragging his feet along his path. Pyro was nowhere to be found, nor Sanct. Enjl wandered around looking for his friend, and still she was nowhere to be seen. There wasn’t any sign of her and just when Enjl was beginning to turn around and return to class when he heard the school’s intercom buzz on.

“Attention students: due to an emergency, all remaining classes have been canceled until further notice. Also, Sanct please come to my office.” Mr. Daniel said into the intercom.

Enjl was too far into the crowd to check if Sanct was entering the university again. He merely hung out with some of his friends in the campus lawn, and talked while trying to get his mind onto something else. Enjl kept a close eye on the crowd however. Not once did he see Sanct, nor Pyro. Furthermore, Superiorstar was the only teacher not in the crowd either. The crowd grew thinner and thinner until eventually Enjl himself departed from the lawn and back towards his dorm.

Before Enjl could even take a few steps away, his phone buzzed. Enjl retrieved his phone from his back pocket and checked it.

1 new message from Sorel.
2 new messages from Unknown Number.


Enjl opened the message from Sorel first. Avoiding the cracks from his carelessness, he punched in his passcode and went into his messages. When Enjl tapped onto Sorel’s name his message history came right up.

Sorel: hey hey, hope you didn’t forget about movie night
Enjl: nope, heading over in a few
Sorel: awesome sauce! Cya soon!
Enjl: blocked
Sorel: lol
Sorel: u there?
Sorel: hello?
Sorel: wtf did u seriously block me?
Sorel: I hate you
Enjl: new phone who dis
Sorel: blocked
RECENT
Sorel: hey are you still outside? I’ve got your flash drive ready to go, I’m over in the parking lot. See you there?


Enjl turned around and went to the parking lot instead of his dorms. As he walked, Enjl texted Sorel that he was on his way. Finally, Enjl walked into the parking area and saw Sorel leaning on the hood of his beat-up used car. Sorel waved, and Enjl returned the gesture and walked towards him.

“Hey man, I got the flash right here.” Sorel said handing the drive to Enjl.

“Thanks, I appreciate it.” Enjl said.

“No problem dude. Heh, hey you look pretty good with your hair all fluffed up from the wind.” Sorel said.

“I don’t feel that good.” Enjl said while touching up his hair with Sorel’s side view mirrors.

“What’s going on?” Sorel asked.

“If I tell you, you have to promise not to tell anyone. Deal?” Enjl said.

“Deal.” Replied Sorel.

“I was in Superiorstar’s class. Everything was pretty much normal. I took a selfie, I got put on the spot, the class ended, and then I went to bathroom. While I was there, I saw Sanct and Pyro come in and start arguing. The argument escalated, and Sanct pulled out a gun and shot Pyro.” Enjl explained.

“Holy shit!” said Sorel.

“I’m not done.” Enjl said.

“As soon as I jumped out when Pyro was shot, I woke up in Superiorstar’s class again. It was the same lecture. I took another selfie, prepared myself to be put on the spot that time, and then went right to the bathroom. Everything happened again exactly as it did before. I could answer Superiorstar’s question this time, so I could change time. That’s when I hid in the bathroom to find a way to change time again to save Pyro’s life.” Enjl explained further.

Sorel nodded his head along paying close attention to Enjl’s every word. He could tell that his friend was being serious from the breathlessness in his voice, and the worry in his eyes.

“I looked for anything I could do. Intervening directly was suicide, so instead I tried my luck with pulling the fire alarm.” Enjl said.

“That was you?” Sorel asked.

“It was.” Enjl said.

The duo remained quiet for some time. The silence consumed the mood, and Enjl brought his phone back out while Sorel was processing what he heard. Enjl scrolled to the two texts from the unknown number. Before he could tap into it, he heard a car’s engine roar down the road. It appeared to be Superiorstar’s black impala. Strangely, one of his tail lights was out. Enjl shrugged it off and looked back down at his phone and opened the messages.

34.9686444587 135.753718652
You should mind your own business.


Enjl looked up his from phone haunted by the vague message. He showed it to Sorel and they exchanged worried glances. Neither of them knew what to make of the coordinates nor the ominous and threatening message attached to it. Everything seemed to be getting worse and when Enjl thought he just finished saving a friend’s life, it was only the beginning it seemed of things to come.

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Re: SMBX University by Aero

Postby Knux » Mon Jun 12, 2017 10:57 pm

Innacurate portrayl of uni life. wheres the crippling debt, weekday drinking, proscrastination, political rallies, gender study classes and poor life choices?

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Re: SMBX University by Aero

Postby aero » Wed Jun 14, 2017 1:41 am

Episode 6 – Lost and Found

The sun was setting at the end of a grim day. Sorel and Enjl parted ways from the University’s parking lot, and went to their dorm rooms. Enjl went to bed, however Sorel remained awake researching time phenomenon. Books littered Sorel’s room, with sticky notes scattering across their covers. Sorel thumbed through a book on chaos theory while taking notes. In a fog from the cross checking and analyzing Sorel looked at his alarm clock then back to his notes, and back again seeing that it was the early hours of the next morning.

Sorel yawned and closed his book and wiped his mess of notes from his bed. As he adjusted his sheets to get into bed, Sorel was interrupted by a set of headlights beaming from his window and a car engine turning off. Sorel peered through his window and saw Superiorstar’s idle car parked outside. A figure obscured by the night’s shadows exited the car quietly and then turn off the headlights. Sorel kept looking out at the sight. Confused, Sorel looked at his alarm clock again and it was still several hours until morning classes began.

Sorel took out his phone and texted Enjl. Even though dawn was far ahead Sorel needed to get to the bottom of this or he wouldn’t sleep. He squinted at the screen’s brightness, and then looked up Enjl in his contacts. Sorel tapped his name and began typing.

Hey man, I know it’s late but I need to know something. Saw some weird shit outside and I’ve been reading into your situation. Please get back to me ASAP. I need those coordinates.

Sorel sent the message and then quietly left his dorm room. He used his phone’s flashlight to illuminate the path ahead of him to leave the dorm building. Sorel crept his way to the exit attempting not to alert anyone else that he was leaving past curfew. Finally, Sorel left the building and quietly followed the path to the parking lot. The entire lot was vacant except for Superiorstar’s car sitting idly. Sorel approached the vehicle cautiously and looked in through the dingy side windows. Nothing looked odd so far. Sorel looked at the driver’s seat, followed by the passenger’s seat, and then the backseat. He continued looking through into Superiorstar’s car but couldn’t see anything amiss.

Sorel eventually halted his effort, and moved away from the car. He turned around and looked for the path back to his room. He took a few steps and then noticed two figures walking in his direction towards the parking lot. Sorel quickly sheltered himself among the bushes to hide from whoever could possibly be out at this hour. His heart pounded as the steps of the two figures approached and grew ever louder. The footsteps entered the parking lot, and finally Sorel could hear their voices. Superiorstar and Sanct seemed to be in mid conversation.

“You can’t be having your tantrums. I can’t have you fucking things up.” Superiorstar said.

“Are you going to be repeating yourself all night?” Sanct asked.

“Officer Aristocrat informed the administration of a student – you - with a gun in the bathroom. The police department informed the faculty that an investigation was being opened. I don’t think you’re getting what shit you’re attracting.” Superiorstar said.

“I fucked up. She got away from me –“ Sanct began.

“Us. She got away from us. Our plan. Our money. Our deal.” Superiorstar interrupted.

“Sure.” Sanct said.

“Do you think I’m fucking around here?” Superiorstar said while motioning towards his back pocket, with a handgun holstered.

Sorel could not believe what was happening in front of him. He kept watching the argument until his phone released what seemed like a deafening tone, alerting him of a text message from Enjl.

“What the fuck?” Sanct and Superiorstar said in unison.

“Who the hell are you?! Get out from those bushes.” Superiorstar commanded.

Sorel’s heart felt like it was going to pound right out of his chest. His damn phone blew his cover. There was no escaping this one. Sorel gulped and then slowly revealed himself with his hands splayed openly. He tried his best to hide the fear from his face Sorel stepped from the bushes to both Superiorstar and Sanct staring him down.

“How much did you hear?” Sanct asked.

“I’ll ask the questions here, Sanct. Clearly you don’t know how to handle situations.” Superiorstar said.

Sanct looked off, furious with Superiorstar’s pretentious tone.

“How much did you hear?” Superiorstar asked.

“I- nothing. I didn’t h-hear anything.” Sorel said, stammering.

“Nice try Sorel. What did you hear?” Superiorstar asked once more.

“S-something about a plan. That’s it, I swear.” Sorel said.

“You do know it’s way past curfew, right? You’re supposed to be in your dorm. It’s pretty dangerous to be wandering around at such an hour.” Superiorstar said.

Superiorstar took out his weapon and pointed it at Sorel. Sorel began to panic. This was it. Sorel clenched his eyes shut in an anticipation when he heard the unmistakable sound of a polaroid camera. The flash disoriented Superiorstar and Sanct, while Sorel’s eyes were closed. Sorel opened his eyes to see Superiorstar looking around confused at the sound and looking for the cause of the flash. Sorel ran as fast as he could from the danger. He ducked into the first hallway he could find and hid away, until he could plan his path outside of the school grounds. He climbed into a hiding spot in a corner of a rarely used room. Sorel checked if the coast was clear and then checked the message from Enjl that almost cost him his life.

Your text didn’t wake me; I’ve been up too. I’m seeing some weird stuff too. I’ll get a picture for you from my angle. Oh, and those coordinates are 34.9686444587 135.753718652.

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Re: SMBX University by Aero

Postby Mable » Wed Jun 14, 2017 6:15 am

This sounds like some kind of crime movie. I like how it fits with the whole University also.

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Re: SMBX University by Aero

Postby krakin » Fri Jun 16, 2017 9:34 pm

I have a feeling this is gonna go south real quick in next couple episodes

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Re: SMBX University by Aero

Postby IAmPlayer » Mon Jun 19, 2017 8:10 am

dem nice. It's still in the first page. GG!


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