I wrote a story Part 1

Inspirited · Postby **Inspirited** » Wed Mar 29, 2017 10:41 pm

One day a beautiful woman is become the leader of an organization of magical thiefs. They were special because in can use magic spells to steal pupils moneys. She is calling Lissy. The next day Lissy found a new member of the organization calling Thomas. He didn't know the special magic secret but Thomas killed the military so Lissy likes him. She teached the stealing. Now Thomas wants to try out his new power by walking away a few miles and casting the spell on Lilly. It worked! He got her money without him noticing even the slightest bit. But then he slipped up and accidently told Lissy that he stole her. But Lissy don't mind. She appreciates the courage of Thomas. The next day something incredible happened. The organization betrays Lissy and Thomas is nowhere to be viewed. Where is Thomas? What happened within the organization? And what is happened to the town? Find out all these things in Part 2.

(If you liked the story please leave a comment and if not tell me what I could been do better for Part 2!)

krakin · Postby **krakin** » Wed Mar 29, 2017 11:32 pm

Do you have any art to go with this story?

FireyPaperMario · Postby **FireyPaperMario** » Thu Mar 30, 2017 6:37 am

practicalshorty014 wrote:Do you have any art to go with this story?

Writing is allowed, just do you'll know...

TDK · Postby **TDK** » Thu Mar 30, 2017 1:09 pm

Inspirited wrote: (If you liked the story please leave a comment and if not tell me what I could been do better for Part 2!)

What's with the intentionally bad grammar?

Inspirited · Postby **Inspirited** » Thu Mar 30, 2017 2:08 pm

TheDinoKing wrote:
Inspirited wrote: (If you liked the story please leave a comment and if not tell me what I could been do better for Part 2!)
What's with the intentionally bad grammar?

Thanks for liking it, also sorry about that. I think this gives the story more impact.

TDK · Postby **TDK** » Thu Mar 30, 2017 2:15 pm

Inspirited wrote:
TheDinoKing wrote:
Inspirited wrote: (If you liked the story please leave a comment and if not tell me what I could been do better for Part 2!)
What's with the intentionally bad grammar?
Thanks for liking it, also sorry about that. I think this gives the story more impact.

I see what you did there.
Well, I didn't completely hate it, so you might be right.

Inspirited · Postby **Inspirited** » Mon Jun 12, 2017 7:42 pm

Sorry, the series is cancelled. I spend all my time working on my smbx episode Nessie the Toad Queen instead.

Snessy the duck · Postby **Snessy the duck** » Wed Jun 14, 2017 10:53 am

But you say in your sig that you don't make episodes.

Mable · Postby **Mable** » Wed Jun 14, 2017 12:08 pm

Snessy the duck wrote:But you say in your sig that you don't make episodes.

He tricked us!!! He said that to hide that he works on one

Knux · Postby **Knux** » Wed Jun 14, 2017 12:28 pm

This is an extremely thrilling anime. i'm sad to see you don't want to continue it.

Black Mamba · Postby **Black Mamba** » Wed Jun 14, 2017 6:20 pm

Mable wrote:
He tricked us!!!

WE'VE BEEN BAMBOOZLED!!

Postby **Julia Pseudo** » Wed Jun 14, 2017 6:30 pm

We've been smeckledorfed!

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