This may, or may not be taken seriously
in other words no this is not serious unless you make it out to be serious
Reader "desgresstion" is advised. YES FUCKING DESGRESSTION
M:whatever
Insert your generic name that people like and will always vote for here
Name: WHY IS THIS REAL?
Overly blantant screaming millennials
Elsa: Can freeze people, stopping from talking/ and doing anything the next night and day, usable during the day only. Can be unfrozen by flames. If Carmander votes on them or visits them then they are unfrozen
President Hair Clip-on: Can look and see who is visiting who during the night, up to 2 people and self.
DIO: You were expecting no DIO memes but it was me DIO! Can stop time for the night, stopping all and any abilities from happening. In turn, skipping a whole phase. Since he FUCKING DIES AFTER PART 3 he can only use it once. Oops spoilers... Anyways he can alternatively kill a person a night with a road rolla da. there is no limit to killing but can only be done every other night only if all of his teammates are dead..
The Moe Loli: Can not die at night, if targeted by a night action, they learn the color of said person. (Not everyone that visited them just one single person i.e. the first person who chose to visited you the loli. At most this single ability, can be used up to 3 times. )
LOVE IS SO BLUE GUYS FTW
Editing of the Bosses: Can protect someone during the night. Can bring a person back from the dead only once during the game.
TheDanianfruitman: Has a long name... Thats about it... Other then the fact that if someone one votes for them they learn thier color.
Carmandar: Gen 8 pokemon. Is charizard, WITH A CAR! SO WOW. Can do flamethrower during the day to end it without having a lynch. Can only do this every 2 day (done day 1 can do it day 4 but not day 2 or 3). Can only do so twice in game. After flaming them they will learn your role you next night(not the night after the day, just the next next night, i.e. dont day 1,message is sent night 3 not night 2. Can not do it to save self from said lynch. can unfreeze people visiting them. (can visit day and night) If they are not frozen they get the message they were met by a guy on fire (with song included)
TheEEM of the O: Is edgy, can suicide to kill to others(up to 2 of choosing). can only be done at night after 2 nights of the game starting. (in game nights)
People in who went to the court of the crimson king
Pro Fighting Game Player: Can protect self at night for about 3 times. There will be a message that someone protected themselves playing against scrubs
Dolphin: This Motherfucka can swim, on LAND. WHOA TECHNOLOGY!!! Can investigate a player and learn their color.
Dio: You were expecting DIO but it was me Dio! Can be a holy diver and fake death during the night. Can only be done if Brando is alive.
Brando: This is a high schooler, he stole your memes. He can control someone and make them use their role on someone else. They will know they have been controlled. Is in contact with Dio
WE GOT TO STOP BULLYING
Cowboy Bebop: Can avoid death once. ONLY ONCE, THEN YOU MIGHT DIE
Susano'o: Can play his edgy theme making the lynch targets voted on the them not count. (Ex. susan uses ability on p1. p2 has 3 votes, p1 has 5, p2 is lynched instead.) More or less protects the player from a lynch. can only be done once.
TIFFANY: Wants to get lynched. if lynched can bring a team together. can decide which them. or reveal 2 player's who voted for TIFFANY their roles to the public.
Stomping fetish terumi: can surive a night or two, depending on who he killed. if he killed his own teammate he lives throught another night or once lynch. can kill someone every other night just to let you know
Everything the light touches is Anime
Anime person man.: they must mention a sort of anime in their posts. must post once a day and night, unless they are dead you butt. Since they do this they can learn a color of who posted below them or quoted them(first quote). They can kill someone who does not mention anime once within their posts. They can copy of someone who quoted them or was the post below them, but the they lose the role they have originally. they dont change teams though.
The Nientendo Switch'o'2: can take a role from the dead and join that team. in turn if they dont choose they live through one night. ONLY ONCE. People know that you changed teams but not who you are.
A.I. Yandere youtuber: can check three people at night to see if they they are Nientend'o' Switcher2. If they are they can choose to kill them if they changed teams. If someone kills Nientend'o' Switcher2 then this role gains the ability to kill every night. If apart of the lynch that killed Nientend'o' Switcher2 can kill someone from that lynvh along with self, or die alone.
The drunk guy: is immune to lynchs until he is the last person on his team. can not talk during the day, but can lynch people in pm and talk in pm only. (discord and irc only for image posting sadly, that's all you can do) is immune to night role abilities that dont kill. can be killed at night. can talk at night. Can choose who to be next to at night (3three people) and learn their pm messages. Every other word will be missing. (Ex. mesg1 : we will kill bobby boo hoo and then go after the player 44, mesg will look like: We kill boo and go the 44) Can choose not to drink at night in order to talk during the day but can not learn pms, and is able to be lynched and is effected by all roles but killing roles will have no effect! (is immune to killing). Can choose not to drink only 2 times. A message will pop up though say the scent of alcohol is gone. Can choose to drink more if your team mates die. can not use the ability to not drink anymore if you are the last one alive
Pseudo wrote:Oh my.
OK, so going to make up some shorthand here:
Red team = Team Millennials
Blue team = Team Blue
Yellow team = Team People
Green team = Team Bullying
Purple team = Team Anime
alright? ok, here we go...
Is the drunk guy intentionally a different color different from the rest of Team Anime? It's a bit redder as is in case you didn't notice.
What "flames" are able to unfreeze those frozen by Elsa? Please clarify.
Carmandar is very overpowered and would discourage activity by existing. I would suggest changing what this role does entirely, I don't think it'd work out well.
A.I. Yandere Youtuber doesn't really work with Mafia mechanics... It's very hard to actually know that someone is who they say they are. I would give the role an inspection ability that only works to check if another player is the Nientendo Switch'o'2 or not.
Overall,
Team Millennials seems too powerful. President Hair Clip-on, DIO, and The Moe Loli together are very very strong. I would suggest nerfing some of these a bit or switching them out with underpowered teams (see below)
Team People and Team Anime seem underpowered on the other hand, since they don't have consistent killing roles or otherwise powerful roles like the other teams (and Team Anime is just really gimmicky)
Stylistically, I approve. But I do not approve the game, yet. I do think this could be acceptable with changes, though.
Edit: Approved, but with the same warnings as Danny. I think this game would be very difficult to run as well as understand given its complexity and writing style, but it's fairly balanced theoretically.
Syndrilevosse wrote:Even with the changes, there's just this inconsistency that isn't entirely the game's fault, but the fault of the writing style that makes it hard to follow rules. When you are working on a game like this, at least give it an air of seriousness and consistency despite it being a joke game, this will help people (especially the gamemasters) better understand the rules and the mechanics of the game.
I will approve this game for now, but the inconsistencies and writing style really throw me for a spin, and I can't put it at the fault of the roles. It just makes it really hard to determine whether or not something is unbalanced.
Syndrilevosse wrote:Honestly, Jacob, as much as your game is interesting (to say the least), I feel that there is just so much going on at one time that it definitely would not be an enjoyable game. I can't speak on everyone's behalf, but even if you do manage to get it up and ready for voting, I can't expect the game to be taken seriously at all.