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Firstly, i just want to credit Kley for the Jungle tileset.
This level is not the biggest level, but it is certainly better than. *sigh* my last creation.


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I like how this is giving me a Donkey Kong 64 vibe. I do see a couple cutoffs on the pipes, mushrooms, and bushes, but I guess those are barely visible to anyone else, And I'll have to deal with it. Good job!

practicalshorty014 wrote:I like how this is giving me a Donkey Kong 64 vibe. I do see a couple cutoffs on the pipes, mushrooms, and bushes, but I guess those are barely visible to anyone else, And I'll have to deal with it. Good job!

Thanks!

I want to rewiev this level but keep in your mind its not official!

Here we go!

1- Looks like you just messed up with the fireball's codes. Changing codes are good and makes some levels unique in it's own but in this kind of level it just feels too wrong.



2- In the cave if you fall down here, you are unable to get up and you need to kill yourself to continue.



3- This place looks too empty. Maybe you should place some blocks/backgrounds on it.



4- It's not a %100 approved thing but I don't recommend you to put jumping enemies in a tight area.You could get hurt pretty easily.

5- The most important thing is... it just didn't feel like a jungle level. It felt more like a mountain level. Maybe you should add some vines to go up instead of walking to the top. Or maybe instead of pipeline you can create a swamp-cave-thing or even a cave with bunch of plants! You can imagine everything about forest/jungle and put it in your level. Just don't go too far or you are gonna get cought by spam cops

These are all my opinions about this level. Please don't get upset about my criticism I'm just here to show your mistakes about this level. Hope you fix them. Also while doing them hope you enjoy!

It's kind of cool, but..... it's looks pretty decent at least the jungle is unique.

Nice, but in the screen with pipes and water there's green lines and they look kinda bad. I assume they're supposed to be micro pipes, but it's odd that they go through the other pipes.

Alrighty, I'll just make a list of notes for the OP and your level, LevelSins style:

-Kley didn't make the grass tileset, Ivy did. Ivy's not around anymore so I don't think it matters.
-Cutoff all around from the BGOs. Don't forget turning off auto-align is a thing. +40
-No coins aside from about 4 question blocks. +4
-3 powerups in 30 seconds, but after the halfway point, 1 fire flower right after it and then no more. +30
-Why use SMW cheep-cheeps when you can use the SMB3 ones? This is an SMB3 level. +19
-+5 sins for every point BonzaiBean brought up. +25 total
-I laughed at this: blob:http://imgur.com/347a445c-7d3f-4fb1-a327-3ba445ccb2bd +10
-Piranha plant coming out of the ground. +1

-Overall it has inconsistencies in style, gameplay, and themes +80

Total Sins: 209

Don't feel bad. It's far from the worst I've played. I at least liked the music.

practicalshorty014 wrote:I like how this is giving me a Donkey Kong 64 vibe.

Not really relevant, I didn't get a DK64 vibe.

Also, get rid of the screenshot in your signature, or put it in a spoiler.

TLtimelord wrote: Also, get rid of the screenshot in your signature, or put it in a spoiler.

That's not really your problem is it?

Can be ;v

Dersen wrote:Can be ;v

Please don't make meaningless posts like this.

Okay.

Dersen wrote:Okay.

...And you just did it again.