Postby PixelPest » Wed Jan 25, 2017 8:43 pm
Well, um. The scribble shading and use of line weight is very poor. There are also a lot of white spaces where I feel there shouldn't be any. It's also very difficult to see what some drawings are since there really isn't much of a clear outline and as I mentioned before, the use of line weight isn't proper. The figure in the second drawing is also very stiff, poorly shaded, and unrealistic and the brush strokes on the mountains could be done so much better to have a much better effect of form. The direction of the brush strokes and shading of the abstract, bright, painted one is also very poorly done since it looks rushed due to some of the colours meeting where they shouldn't and overlapping with others. The shading is also the opposite of smooth--it's very inconsistent and the brush strokes are blatantly obvious (which really isn't a good thing in this case). I like the idea of the stems on the fourth one though with the mix of red and black, since the transition between them is relatively rough, yet there is a clear style and expression and it's still relatively orderly until the stems combine, where it loses that effect. Anyway, there's some interesting ideas here, but you should learn more about shading, line weight, and how to do brush strokes properly and how to use them to give different effects