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my arts

Postby arcade999 » Mon Jan 23, 2017 5:36 pm

I let you judge.
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Re: my arts

Postby Amine Retro » Mon Jan 23, 2017 5:44 pm

comparing to some other art this looks good. i like the second and third picture, you should just give us a description of the drawings so we could understand them, like the last one.
keep it up.

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Re: my arts

Postby FireyPaperMario » Tue Jan 24, 2017 7:29 am

I find your arts to be quite a interesting one! :D
P.S. You should actually draw some people for this thread, like I am with my chibi drawings of SMBX members! :mrgreen:

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Re: my arts

Postby Snessy the duck » Tue Jan 24, 2017 11:44 am

NintendoOtaku93 wrote:P.S. You should actually draw some people for this thread, like I am with my chibi drawings of SMBX members! :mrgreen:
Except you haven't done anyone yet (aside from yourself) and lots of people are still waiting for them.

Also, that seems like an overly specific thing for him to do.

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Re: my arts

Postby PixelPest » Wed Jan 25, 2017 8:43 pm

Well, um. The scribble shading and use of line weight is very poor. There are also a lot of white spaces where I feel there shouldn't be any. It's also very difficult to see what some drawings are since there really isn't much of a clear outline and as I mentioned before, the use of line weight isn't proper. The figure in the second drawing is also very stiff, poorly shaded, and unrealistic and the brush strokes on the mountains could be done so much better to have a much better effect of form. The direction of the brush strokes and shading of the abstract, bright, painted one is also very poorly done since it looks rushed due to some of the colours meeting where they shouldn't and overlapping with others. The shading is also the opposite of smooth--it's very inconsistent and the brush strokes are blatantly obvious (which really isn't a good thing in this case). I like the idea of the stems on the fourth one though with the mix of red and black, since the transition between them is relatively rough, yet there is a clear style and expression and it's still relatively orderly until the stems combine, where it loses that effect. Anyway, there's some interesting ideas here, but you should learn more about shading, line weight, and how to do brush strokes properly and how to use them to give different effects

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Re: my arts

Postby arcade999 » Thu Jan 26, 2017 11:41 am

amine_retro wrote:comparing to some other art this looks good. i like the second and third picture, you should just give us a description of the drawings so we could understand them, like the last one.
keep it up.
The first one is some sort of halloween stuff, the second one is a mountain troll warrior, the third one is just abstract, the fourth one is a tree growing fishes ( :?: :!: ) the fifth one is the roof of a cathedral with gargoyls and the last one is like zebras (in an artistic way), but you must Watch that one from the side.

And by the way, thanks for encouraging! :)


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