Japanese SMBX Contest - With Prizes! Judging HAS BEGUN!

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Re: Japanese SMBX Contest - With Prizes! Judging Begins Soon!

Postby Alagirez » Tue Mar 21, 2017 7:42 am

Well, My level "Haven Frost" got 16.5 and it's pretty accurate imo bc it was not my best work xd

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Re: Japanese SMBX Contest - With Prizes! Judging Begins Soon!

Postby iguzamini » Tue Mar 21, 2017 8:20 am

two thirds was finished
lets look back to easy
It may be slightly harsh
fogive me

part1~10
Spoiler: show
[01]-Darkness switch tunnel:okome
・fun to get dark,but no mid, distance is too long to retry
・The atmosphere is not bad

[02]-Hop! step! swamp!:okome
・balance of the enemy is so so, but no mid
・interesting to hide it with front oblects,but some parts are too hidden

[03]Key!!:okome
・The world view is crazy
・good distance

[05]Dark Yoshi's Tower:Rsuper
・The boss is too long
・The story to help Yoshi's egg was abrupt

[07]Raining Grassland:Rsuper
・good smw atmosphere,but usually

[08]Gimmick purgartory :by 7namesam
・nice left and right gimmicks
・Forced running area is difficult

[09]Scaffolding of reality:by 7NameSam
・this gimmick is not too burden to play

[14]Old temple:by Bowswer is Ded
・Mission regulation is good idea
・good atmosphere temple

[18]Hilly Park:by DanteHelmore
・good smb1 atmosphere
・better change the midpoint to left

[32]Green Gringo Grassland:by Molefight
・not dislike the Bulldoze of graphics
・waiting time of the prelude is long,its hard to retry

[33]One day at the Sunny Beach:by molt
・time change is nice, but place midpoint

[34]Dream Land:by Molt
・Kirby elements such as hidden doors are used a lot
・small mario hard to see wispy wood

[36]Wild trip:by Ness-Wednesday
・Peaceful

[37]Toad's Christmas Medly:by Ness-Wednesday
・The idea of clearing the four stages is interesting
・good smb2 feeling

[39]An Unexpected Foe:by PixelPest
・good distance to boss battle
・boss mario is nice devised

[40]Veggie Pile:by Sanct
・I think this is joke lvl
・Gimmick is funny but messed up
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Re: Japanese SMBX Contest - With Prizes! Judging Begins Soon!

Postby Cidro » Tue Mar 21, 2017 8:32 am

To tell you the truth, I'm surprised my level got 18.5... Besides, not many of these reviews were pretty harsh. ( [40] is the most harshest of them all )

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Re: Japanese SMBX Contest - With Prizes! Judging Begins Soon!

Postby MacDuckBeat » Tue Mar 21, 2017 8:57 am

alright so my second level review is cleaned for now as I read his review that got editted. so question solved
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Re: Japanese SMBX Contest - With Prizes! Judging Begins Soon!

Postby Emral » Tue Mar 21, 2017 9:02 am

darkmewd31 wrote:( [40] is the most harshest of them all )
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VEoKw9PshS8

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Re: Japanese SMBX Contest - With Prizes! Judging Begins Soon!

Postby Valentine » Tue Mar 21, 2017 10:09 am

If it's garbage then why the fuck did it get a 12???? you could've given it like a 2
you might as well be rating levels out of like 5 with how little variance there is in the scores of the levels.
It seriously feels like you're just taking a random number generator from 15 - 17 and then distributing points through that randomly

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Re: Japanese SMBX Contest - With Prizes! Judging Begins Soon!

Postby PixelPest » Tue Mar 21, 2017 9:55 pm

These reviews are extremely short and not very helpful. Like things such as "peaceful" and "good distance" don't justify your scores at all. For example, you said nothing negative/constructive in the review of my level yet you scored it less than 20

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Re: Japanese SMBX Contest - With Prizes! Judging Begins Soon!

Postby King of GETs » Wed Mar 22, 2017 3:34 am

As I've said before, this is iguzamini's contest, so he can score it however he wants to.

However, once the final product has been released, LPers can go through the game and assign their own scores and create their own lists.

At the end of the day, it's not the score that matters but how much you enjoyed making your level and how much others enjoyed playing your level.

Speaking of the final product, do we know how this is going to be released? Will an overworld be created, a map with the levels, or will it just be released immediately after judging has finished in one giant level pack?

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Re: Japanese SMBX Contest - With Prizes! Judging Begins Soon!

Postby Cedur » Wed Mar 22, 2017 5:18 am

PixelPest wrote:These reviews are extremely short and not very helpful. Like things such as "peaceful" and "good distance" don't justify your scores at all. For example, you said nothing negative/constructive in the review of my level yet you scored it less than 20
I guess these short sentences are meant to be reactions only and not reviews.

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Re: Japanese SMBX Contest - With Prizes! Judging Begins Soon!

Postby Thehelmetguy1 » Wed Mar 22, 2017 5:52 am

In my opinion, iguzamini is being quite harsh with the scores

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Re: Japanese SMBX Contest - With Prizes! Judging Begins Soon!

Postby krakin » Wed Mar 22, 2017 6:26 am

thehelmetguy1 wrote:In my opinion, iguzamini is being quite harsh with the scores
I guess that's his way of saying "do better". It probably also has to do with how good he is at completing levels.

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Re: Japanese SMBX Contest - With Prizes! Judging Begins Soon!

Postby Snessy the duck » Wed Mar 22, 2017 12:17 pm

PixelPest wrote:These reviews are extremely short and not very helpful. Like things such as "peaceful" and "good distance" don't justify your scores at all. For example, you said nothing negative/constructive in the review of my level yet you scored it less than 20
I agree, the reviews basically just seem like he/she picked 1 or 2 random words and made a review out of it. Reviews need to go more in-depth and explain what elements exactly makes the level good or bad, and not just use 2 words that explain literally nothing about the level.

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Re: Japanese SMBX Contest - With Prizes! Judging Begins Soon!

Postby Cedur » Fri Mar 24, 2017 5:16 am

So how many levels are left to be played?

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Re: Japanese SMBX Contest - With Prizes! Judging Begins Soon!

Postby iguzamini » Fri Mar 24, 2017 5:43 am

part11~20
Spoiler: show
[22]Perilous Peak:by FrozenQuills
・Tricks are well thought out
・Difficulty is not bad

[26]Random Grassland is so Random:by litchh
・The stage was simple, so it was hard to understand random.

[27]Urban Ping:by litchh
・like factory-like design
・lift is difficult

[15]Serious Tank :by Bowswer is Ded
・It is easy to recover, so stage is very hard

[19]Underground Factory: by Darkmewd31
・like the atmosphere of the factory and the event to escape

[17]Precambrian Subcon:by DagekiSquare
・There is USA feeling, balance is not bad

[49]Sixteen-bit Stroll :by SuperMarioChannel
・A gimmick like a Mario maker is making an goog atmosphere

[44]Ninji's Oriental Forest:by Shinbison-Kof
・There is an idea of a ninja house, there is a story nature
・good of the characteristics of the link

[50]Classic Arcade:by Supershroom
・Various elements of SMBX are included

[31]Laser Factory :by MECHDRAGON777
・It is configured to use one screen well
・Laser spacing is slightly faster

[28]Negative Space :by Lunatic Quark
・There is affinity for black and white graphics and BGM
・consideration for the player to put a white border on a black object

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Re: Japanese SMBX Contest - With Prizes! Judging Begins Soon!

Postby Snessy the duck » Fri Mar 24, 2017 11:45 am

Again, these reviews only mention one or two aspects of the level, and don't go in-depth about why the levels deserve the score they have. Also, "It's easy to recover, so the stage is really hard" makes no sense.

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Re: Japanese SMBX Contest - With Prizes! Judging Begins Soon!

Postby Cedur » Fri Mar 24, 2017 12:02 pm

Again, are those meant to be reviews?

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Re: Japanese SMBX Contest - With Prizes! Judging Begins Soon!

Postby Ness-Wednesday » Fri Mar 24, 2017 3:30 pm

I don't get too much from the reviews below:
[36]Wild trip:by Ness-Wednesday
・Peaceful

[37]Toad's Christmas Medly:by Ness-Wednesday
・The idea of clearing the four stages is interesting
・good smb2 feeling
Now usually, I go into contests to improve, however all I can see here are some pieces of texts.
This is another example, now I wouldn't try to go up on anyone but honestly, I would want a bit more than just this since I'm not any smbx master or anything godly like.
I got to admit I do like the positives things being mentioned here, but I know it's not perfect so therefore I'd ask what doesn't make it perfect so I can improve for what's coming up.

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Re: Japanese SMBX Contest - With Prizes! Judging Begins Soon!

Postby ElectriKong » Fri Mar 24, 2017 3:46 pm

Hopefully there is are actual reviews. Though I did not participate in this so it does not exactly matter to me.

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Re: Japanese SMBX Contest - With Prizes! Judging Begins Soon!

Postby krakin » Fri Mar 24, 2017 5:56 pm

Supershroom wrote:Again, are those meant to be reviews?
The more I look at iguzamini's "reviews", the more I begin to think they're actually his reactions and not a legitimate review.

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Re: Japanese SMBX Contest - With Prizes! Judging Begins Soon!

Postby JupiHornet » Fri Mar 24, 2017 10:46 pm

iguzamini wrote: [17]Precambrian Subcon:by DagekiSquare
・There is USA feeling, balance is not bad
what


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