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I put my drawings here.

I draw them on paper before I take a picture, then i put it on the computer (resizing it to 200x200 for profile pictures) and then drew over it. (If you do want proof or if you want to see what they look like in pencil form, then just Private Message me.)

Hecatia Lapislazuli (Touhou 15 - Legacy of the Lunatic Kingdom)


Team Plasma 'Grunt' (Pokemon Black and White 2)


More coming soon. (I do these whenever I feel like it and I'll update with more in the future.) (Pictures are posted in order of time of creation.)

I do not mind if you can tell me what to improve on. (Except hands. Fck off. I know)

The shape is pretty much there, but there's a severe lack of shading. The ball on the left in the top picture also looks like it's floating, not being held (not sure if it's intentional or not). With the second image, you should change the colour of the skin because it looks like she's transparent

Your drawing looks okay.... I would recommend practicing a little more.

PixelPest wrote:The shape is pretty much there, but there's a severe lack of shading. The ball on the left in the top picture also looks like it's floating, not being held (not sure if it's intentional or not). With the second image, you should change the colour of the skin because it looks like she's transparent

They're suppose to be floating, but I'll see what I can do with the perspective. The shading is something I will have to work on for a while since It's not my strongest point.

NintendoOtaku93 wrote:Your drawing looks okay.... I would recommend practicing a little more.

I don't mind if you gave me more... 'constructive criticism'. While my drawings are not the best. I do appreciate if you actually pointed out the things what I could practice more on. (Except for hands. Already working on those.)


I decided to improve the second picture, this time using a Tablet instead of hand drawn with a mouse. Although It's not that improved from the previous one.

Ey so I decided to get a scanner. Although I'm trying to improve my drawing alot.

Meet Suki. A character that I will be using in the future. (Leave the imagination up to you and keep it to yourselves please -_-)
And I decided to stop drawing people and start working on something completely different.
Anyways. I really need someone to point out my flaws and how to improve on them. Although the thing I don't find appealing about the scannings, are the lighting. It's stupidly bright for some reason and that kinda hurts the eyes.

Like the new drawing! And good luck on your next work!

....Hi!

I'll be moving towards Digital Drawings once I've obtained a better tablet. For now, have some poorly scanned drawings that are not as good in comparison to the original pencil drawings.

Okay so I hope this doesn't rub you the wrong way but I wanna list off a few things you can work on to help you improve

Here's a few things I can come up with off the top of my head:

-The face/head looks really awkward.
1)When giving an expression, it's a better idea to slightly twist the eyes and put the emphasis on the eyebrows instead. As it is you're uh....literally making the EYES themselves angry.
2) The nose seems too uh.....hell I dunno. I guess it "faces sideways" too much? Look at someone from the front to see what I mean.
3) Jaw area seems clean enough, but the mouth is very badly offset. It needs to be centered towards the middle....I think I can say that about the face in general?

-The arms are too short. The forearms even moreso. when fully extended, arms are long enough to reach waist length and then some. Yours currently look like they miiiight reach the stomach, maybe.

-goddamn that neck T H I C C

-The shoulders are too short as well, almost unnoticable. Shoulders are VERY well defined in anatomy, causing arms to be noticably distant from the head itself. Yours seem dangerously close to the neck right now.

-Her(?) chest looks like an inflated balloon. Breasts, even big ones, aren't big enough to apply pressure to the clothing for the entire outline. Also, they start slightly lower anyway. When fixing the shoulder length you might somehow fix this in the way too.

-The body seems to be too thi- okay you know what just please fix the shoulders and re-do everything accordingly it'll fix like half your issues I promise

-I like the spicy onion rings


I'm sure you can get much better, keep up the good work.

Zipper wrote:Okay so I hope this doesn't rub you the wrong way but I wanna list off a few things you can work on to help you improve

Here's a few things I can come up with off the top of my head:

-The face/head looks really awkward.
1)When giving an expression, it's a better idea to slightly twist the eyes and put the emphasis on the eyebrows instead. As it is you're uh....literally making the EYES themselves angry.
2) The nose seems too uh.....hell I dunno. I guess it "faces sideways" too much? Look at someone from the front to see what I mean.
3) Jaw area seems clean enough, but the mouth is very badly offset. It needs to be centered towards the middle....I think I can say that about the face in general?

-The arms are too short. The forearms even moreso. when fully extended, arms are long enough to reach waist length and then some. Yours currently look like they miiiight reach the stomach, maybe.

-goddamn that neck T H I C C

-The shoulders are too short as well, almost unnoticable. Shoulders are VERY well defined in anatomy, causing arms to be noticably distant from the head itself. Yours seem dangerously close to the neck right now.

-Her(?) chest looks like an inflated balloon. Breasts, even big ones, aren't big enough to apply pressure to the clothing for the entire outline. Also, they start slightly lower anyway. When fixing the shoulder length you might somehow fix this in the way too.

-The body seems to be too thi- okay you know what just please fix the shoulders and re-do everything accordingly it'll fix like half your issues I promise

-I like the spicy onion rings


I'm sure you can get much better, keep up the good work.

omg constructive criticism finally

Thanks for the advice and such, because the more you pointed out my flaws, the more I can see it and start to fix it.

Also fucking spicy onion rings lol.

Hmm. Maybe I should've draw someone else that has their neck and shoulders visible.

Legendary Hero Melissa from Crusaders Quest is drawn!
How is it? Anything I can improve on?

I will be working on a digitally drawn version, any feedback is appreciated.

RPG_Magician wrote:Legendary Hero Melissa from Crusaders Quest is drawn!

Bunny Magician Melissa + SoulBound: show

How is it? Anything I can improve on?

I will be working on a digitally drawn version, any feedback is appreciated.

Looks nice, thought it'll be a actual bunny girl for a whole 3 seconds!

The open hand looks like it's bent VERY inadequately. You're trying to show off all the fingers in a pose where some fingers would clearly be hidden. Doing that pose IRL is a great way to see how you can fix it.

The head seems slightly too big? Or maybe the neck is too small, I dunno.

The arm lengths don't match. Also, arms get thinner and thicker at points. I'm horrible at arms as well so I just suggest you look at muscle structure.

The rest looks fine tho, keep it up!

MarioRPGExpert93 wrote:

RPG_Magician wrote:Legendary Hero Melissa from Crusaders Quest is drawn!

Bunny Magician Melissa + SoulBound: show

How is it? Anything I can improve on?

I will be working on a digitally drawn version, any feedback is appreciated.

Looks nice, thought it'll be a actual bunny girl for a whole 3 seconds!

It... is a bunny girl + magician, kinda?

Here is the original I tried to draw from, since it was just pixels and I had no other art to reference from, I was mostly drawing blind for the clothes.

Zipper wrote:The open hand looks like it's bent VERY inadequately. You're trying to show off all the fingers in a pose where some fingers would clearly be hidden. Doing that pose IRL is a great way to see how you can fix it.

The head seems slightly too big? Or maybe the neck is too small, I dunno.

The arm lengths don't match. Also, arms get thinner and thicker at points. I'm horrible at arms as well so I just suggest you look at muscle structure.

The rest looks fine tho, keep it up!

I'm working on poses with a whole bunch of art references, I'll fix the hands right up.

The neck is hidden by the bow so I can't really say if it is or not, but I think the head is definitely a little too big.

My perspective on the arms are awful, I tried to make the right one closer to the camera but that was a poor attempt on my part. I think I have art references for muscle structures so I'll look over those.

Thanks for the advice ^u^

Many, MANY thanks to Ryaa for helping me with this drawing! Particularly with the shading and the lighting.

The boobs look weird :/, however i really like the way you drew the railings and the buildings

xDestroy wrote:The boobs look weird :/, however i really like the way you drew the railings and the buildings

Might be because i'm not good at drawing symmetrical. But thanks for the feedback