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here I drew Gaster
this is the Great Papyrus
A Circle Guy doing a thing
(sorry i drew it in white)
undertale stuffs
circle guys
idk

hope u like i will take suggestions but keep it simple also color is hard for me
also im not using ms paint

What tool do you use? If it's a mouse, I suggest using a tablet instead, because it looks a little wobbly if not sloppy.

Also, try using the line tool for straight lines and the curve took for curved lines if you are using MS Paint with a mouse. Remember also to erase anything making it hard to see where the item is as well. I can't tell if Papyrus's hand is supposed to be on the front or behind him. Same with his scarf.

Muyoko wrote:What tool do you use? If it's a mouse, I suggest using a tablet instead, because it looks a little wobbly if not sloppy.

Also, try using the line tool for straight lines and the curve took for curved lines if you are using MS Paint with a mouse. Remember also to erase anything making it hard to see where the item is as well. I can't tell if Papyrus's hand is supposed to be on the front or behind him. Same with his scarf.

well they're just sketches so the lines were a little bad (im better on paper)
also i am using a tablet
ill try to get better with lines
also

Circle Guy wrote:

Muyoko wrote:What tool do you use? If it's a mouse, I suggest using a tablet instead, because it looks a little wobbly if not sloppy.

Also, try using the line tool for straight lines and the curve took for curved lines if you are using MS Paint with a mouse. Remember also to erase anything making it hard to see where the item is as well. I can't tell if Papyrus's hand is supposed to be on the front or behind him. Same with his scarf.

well they're just sketches so the lines were a little bad (im better on paper)
also i am using a tablet
ill try to get better with lines
also

You should post your scanned art for a comparison then.

Muyoko wrote:

Circle Guy wrote:

Muyoko wrote:What tool do you use? If it's a mouse, I suggest using a tablet instead, because it looks a little wobbly if not sloppy.

Also, try using the line tool for straight lines and the curve took for curved lines if you are using MS Paint with a mouse. Remember also to erase anything making it hard to see where the item is as well. I can't tell if Papyrus's hand is supposed to be on the front or behind him. Same with his scarf.

well they're just sketches so the lines were a little bad (im better on paper)
also i am using a tablet
ill try to get better with lines
also

You should post your scanned art for a comparison then.

here's a pic

This looks much better. Then again it is Napstablook but at the same time, let's look at the critiques here.

1) Try drawing with different line weights. It might make the leaves look more like leaves.

2) Explore color more since it might help you guys out! Do not be afraid to post an image or two in color.

3) Explore more of that favorite artist.

look i drew more undertale
and yes i made the heights a little off

Circle Guy wrote:look i drew more undertale
and yes i made the heights a little off

Looks good, i guess... Don't worry, I sometimes get the characters' heights off.

I'm so bored

what am i even doing lol

I'm not sure what program you're using but I'm certain it has an Ellipse Tool