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Re: woah look at this trash

Postby Zipper » Fri Jun 03, 2016 7:30 am

consistency what's that
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Re: woah look at this trash

Postby aero » Fri Jun 03, 2016 7:50 am

The right hand looks a bit... off... but those are pretty good hands nonetheless. Nice drawing, Zipper.

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Re: woah look at this trash

Postby Zipper » Fri Jun 03, 2016 7:51 am

oh yeah I should mention that the gloves are supposed to be comically huge

though if you were talking about the finger outlines and stuff you got me there, I messed up

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Re: woah look at this trash

Postby aero » Fri Jun 03, 2016 7:55 am

Yeah it was the finger outlines. They looked like clown gloves so I assumed they were supposed to be huge lol.

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Re: woah look at this trash

Postby ragont » Fri Jun 03, 2016 9:05 am

i like the coloring, but the linework needs a bit more practice
keep working and you'll make masterpieces in no time mwah youre so gorgeous

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Re: woah look at this trash

Postby Zipper » Sat Jun 04, 2016 1:52 pm

aaaaaa speedrunning again

lines are still total jank, but hopefully someone will throw me a pick-me-up and help me someday?
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Re: woah look at this trash

Postby ragont » Sat Jun 04, 2016 3:18 pm

i actually love your coloring

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Re: woah look at this trash

Postby YellowMe » Sat Jun 04, 2016 5:24 pm

Whoa! That colouring is really proffesional looking. The shading is smooth and the colours are nice to look at. That thigh gap though.

Not to be nitpicky, but... The hand position looks uncomfortable and it doesn't look like she wants to give you the heart. I'd suggest you also practice drawing 3D symmetric shapes, because that heart looks awkward.

Nevertheless, your art is great! It looks like you know your way around the drawing program and know human anatomy.

Also, is this an original character? If not, where is she from?

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Re: woah look at this trash

Postby Zipper » Sat Jun 04, 2016 6:05 pm

Feedback is much appreciated. I'm aware that the hands/item aren't.....exactly the best. After about 45 minutes of unsuccessful attempts (even after getting a reference picture, sheesh) I went into a sort of "screw it" mood and bumrushed it. Perspective and angling is one hell of an obstacle to me for whatever reason, I'm utter trash at those. Will keep trying though!

Also, the character is Neptune/Purple Heart from the Hyperdimension Neptunia series.

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Re: woah look at this trash

Postby Zipper » Sun Jun 05, 2016 10:08 am

I got a little tired of doing full-on works, so have this jojo meme instead
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Re: woah look at this trash

Postby Zipper » Tue Jun 07, 2016 3:01 pm

heroes never die etc. etc.
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this is really starting to bore me, knowing these drawings mean nothing to the general audience

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Re: woah look at this trash

Postby ragont » Tue Jun 07, 2016 4:57 pm

do you not enjoy drawing

you're actually improving on your linework though

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Re: woah look at this trash

Postby Zipper » Tue Jun 07, 2016 4:58 pm

not if they're doomed to obscurity, no

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Re: woah look at this trash

Postby ragont » Tue Jun 07, 2016 5:00 pm

how long have you been doing sketching?

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Re: woah look at this trash

Postby Zipper » Tue Jun 07, 2016 5:10 pm

like maybe 1.5 years I dunno, only started digital a year ago

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Re: woah look at this trash

Postby FireyPaperMario » Wed Jun 08, 2016 7:24 am

Good drawing of Waluigi! P.S. I can even see the second drawing rn! :shock:


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Re: woah look at this trash

Postby aero » Wed Jun 08, 2016 9:00 am

Zipper wrote:this is really starting to bore me, knowing these drawings mean nothing to the general audience
Zipper wrote:not if they're doomed to obscurity, no
Diversify your platforms. Most people just make a tumblr and post there and on a few obscure sites such as this one without making a home for their work and moving outward.

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Re: woah look at this trash

Postby Zipper » Wed Jun 08, 2016 9:10 am

Where exactly do I post them though? Tumblr, twitter and obscure forums are the only places I can comfortably post to. Deviantart is a big no-no, and stuff like pixiv has too high of an entry barrier to join in.

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Re: woah look at this trash

Postby aero » Wed Jun 08, 2016 10:32 am

Honestly I don't know any places myself because I don't make art. I'd say start by making a home for your work on your own platform, and then find wherever else you can to share it.

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Re: woah look at this trash

Postby FireyPaperMario » Thu Jun 09, 2016 9:37 am

Zipper wrote:Where exactly do I post them though? Tumblr, twitter and obscure forums are the only places I can comfortably post to. Deviantart is a big no-no, and stuff like pixiv has too high of an entry barrier to join in.
Have you tried comfortably posting your art on other forms of social media? Like for say... Facebook, or Instagram? :idea:


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