Level 1-1 Original Mario Bros (Mario Maker Editon) My First Level

ShadowTreecko · Postby **ShadowTreecko** » Sat Mar 12, 2016 4:47 am

This is my first SMBX level so don't hate!

I also want to add that I didn't add the underground part because I'm a bit of a noob and it defeats the purpose of the level

Toad = Wario
Peach = Waluigi

Credits:
Mario Maker Beta Tiles by DarkMecha
Wario And Waluigi By Shocker
Small Mario World Mario And Luigi By Nat The Porcupine
Big Mario World Mario And Luigi By Squishy Rex

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Cedrik · Postby **Cedrik** » Sat Mar 12, 2016 5:05 am

My (short) review (NOT official):

gfx: 3 out of 5

The gfx are fine, (I think from the Super Mario Maker gfx pack).
The custom players are good.
Only the hill-background isn't so good, because you can the pixels next to the green, and I don't mean the LS-background.

leveldesing: ... out of 5

No score, because it is a remake.

music: 2 out of 5

The music is fine, but the gfx are 8-bit,
so I would use the 8-bit soundtrack. (custom-music)

Final score: 5 out of 10 (2 out of 5 + 3 out of 5 = 5 out of 10)

[Good first level!]

ShadowTreecko · Postby **ShadowTreecko** » Sat Mar 12, 2016 6:29 am

My (short) review (NOT official):

gfx: 3 out of 5

The gfx are fine, (I think from the Super Mario Maker gfx pack).
The custom players are good.
Only the hill-background isn't so good, because you can the pixels next to the green, and I don't mean the LS-background.

leveldesing: ... out of 5

No score, because it is a remake.

music: 2 out of 5

The music is fine, but the gfx are 8-bit,
so I would use the 8-bit soundtrack. (custom-music)

Final score: 5 out of 10 (2 out of 5 + 3 out of 5 = 5 out of 10)

[Good first level!]

Thanks for the support! I really appreciate it that you took your time to review the level!

Zipper · Postby **Zipper** » Sat Mar 12, 2016 8:05 am

....What do I even say about this? It's literally 1-1 except less. No starman, no underground area, no flagpole.

The cyan of the mountain BGOs overlaps the cyan of the sky, so they create an awful parallax. You should just make the cyan of the mountains transparent instead.
Other than that, the tileset does give off a Mario Maker vibe, so try to use that to your advantage and create an original level instead? We really don't need "yet another 1-1", in a literal sense.