Rise of the Shadow Kracko (SMBX community related)

[Alagirez]

THe next chapter was pretty funny because you took some dialogues from those joke levels

[Ness-Wednesday]

The next chapter was pretty funny because you took some dialogues from those joke levels

True, true.
This is why it took a while to finish, I loved getting the quotes from the joke levels. XD

[Ness-Wednesday]

Final part of chapter 6 is here, check on the last post of page 4 to read it.

[Alagirez]

Animal Jamobile
10/10
I thought you made a story about aiseramonater, that's my favorite joke level in ToB5
also

Templet sea.

Are you trying to make templets great again?

[Ness-Wednesday]

Animal Jamobile
10/10
I thought you made a story about aiseramonater, that's my favorite joke level in ToB5
also

Templet sea.

Are you trying to make templets great again?

Nope, just for something to go over.
And it's interesting to hear you like aiseramonater, if it was littch instead of Snifitguy I would've made it even farther.

[Alagirez]

---------- Eagerly waiting for Chapter 7 -------------

[Ness-Wednesday]

------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Chapter 7: The visit to butt city!--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Spoiler: show

Ness-Wednesday and the four travelers, hopped on the Animal Jammobile.
Camacho and Sailor Catastrophe were quite familiar with the Talkhaus community.
In fact, Camacho submitted a level to MaGlx2 last year, which got 75th place out of 272 contestants.
Anyways, on with the screen when Ness-Wednesday looks out of the window, seeing bgo spam everywhere.

"Oh no, there's trees!" he started.
"And too many bushes! ... It's bgo spam!"

Everyone was laughing from the young prince's quote.

"Hey, the SVLC 2016 entry you made was fun." said Camacho.
"Will you be doing more fun things in future events?"

"Oh boy, I do hope the judges don't go blind and say intense visuals are blinding them." replied Sux.

"What are intense visuals anyway?" asked Wraith.
"Does it mean the colors of the tilesets don't mix well together?"

"Maybe I can say, it's better not to mention CC12, that contest made me salty through the entire month of March!" Ness-Wednesday replied.

"Okay, okay you don't like CC12 so what?" replied Skyler.

"Wei, stel hav untl summr to wat for te nex cc." Spinda followed Skyler's quote.

"Why, you can enjoy some SVIC in the back." said Sailor Catastrophe as only one vanilla ice cream cone appeared, however prince Northern-Western grabbed it before everyone else.

"I'm on a diet anyway." said Skyler, although Captain 5-3 thought of this in his head along with the ride.

"Also, Camacho why are people treating you badly over your levels?" Ness-Wednesday asked.
"I love the design on most of you Mix world 2 and newer levels."

"Oi, ets bcaze of peeple..." Spinda spoken as Sux continued it.

"Thinking it's fun that people make such boring, linear and ugly levels." I can preach what Sux just said.

"Good point Sux." Camacho started, "They always annoyed me over the bgo spam and switch blocks, they even did that in my SVLC 2016 woodfall breeze thread, and thankfully Joey had stopped it."

"You see I think I've figured-" as the Animal Jammobile stopped, Ness-Wednesday got interrupted as Spinda was launched and crashed into his glasses.
"Man, these are my favorite glasses, now I can't see heavy visuals!"

"Oh stop..." said Skyler, turning towards the boy.
"So this must be the talkhaus eh?"

They finally arrived to the Talkhaus, it wasn't long until they entered the big building which nearby, docked was the Yatch of opinions.
The five travelers entered, there were several people staring at such weird beings.

"What's this, a teenage princess, three clones and a snail with a blue dry bones head?" said MeeleWizard.
The group stepped up, seeing unfamiliar faces.

"I've never seen such users in a big place." said Ness-Wednesday.
He took off his crown and started to explore the place.

"Hello there." Zyglrox Odyssey stepped forward noticing the prince in purple leaping to a bedroom.
"I'm the kaizo man, Zyglrox Odyssey is the name!" he stated.

"You mean the dude who only submitted kaizo levels to official contests?" asked Skyler.

"You sound like a pretty good legendary pokemon to me." said Ness-Wednesday.

"How about, you don't?" replied Sux.

"Anyways, may I ask why you have come, need to book a room?"

"Of course not..." Captain 5-3 sighed.
"We are looking for someone, to warn them about a particular invasion."

"But the designers are barley working on the invasion 3!" Zyglrox was confused.

"No, he means the Shadow Kracko is sending his army to invade the Talkhaus." Skyler answered.

"You mean the kirby enemy clone Marina, Emral and Snoruntpyro rumored a while back?"

"Who were we making rumors of?" Snoruntpyro stepped up, Pikabread followed.

"You're a Ppichu?" Ness-Wednesday teased.
"I'd prefer Thyplosion out of the other Johto pokemon."

"Can you explain, your appearance isn't ready for my streams." Pyro stated, staring at the prince.

"Butt you never caught a Raichu, my favorite Kanto pokemon." Ness-Wednesday revealed some drawings in his pocket.

"Erm, look at the date, 2012?" Skyler wondered.

"Why do I love the past other than 2015?" Ness-Wednesday replied.

"That has no conlcusion oh how were there drawings from you when SMBX wasn't a fame fanfare thingy?" Sux answered.
"Despite, I wasn't in the community that time, and my designing skills were never great until the birth of the SMBX forums."

"Ay, you know now that we are in the Talkhaus that means I get to meet-" Wraith was stopped by a drawn 1x1 boy.

"Why who are you golden people?" raocow noticed the five travelers.

"Oh it's raocow!" Ness-Wednesday said similar to Enjl's quote "Oh it's Waddle Derp!", from the Bald Toad's Peak stream.

"Yes is it I the one and only!"
"Oh, a prince and a deviantart user, Wraith the judging wrath, Temmie and a Snail with a blue dry bone's head!"

"At least he didn't call us clones." Captain 5-3 whispered to Spinda.

"Why Ness-Wednesday, I heard your name in two contest threads, one being our annual Kaizo contest!"

"True, and I suppose you chosen your kaizo remix?" Zyglrox Odyssey asked the boy.

"Why, can we get to the point here?" Skyler begged.
"It's is beginning to get hot in here!"

"No, it's the weather, today's like in the 80's." raocow supported her words.

"You mean we traveled to the 1980's?" Prince Northern-Western is truly the boy who'd whish time travel.

"No, check the temperature big genius!" Skyler replied.

"Can we get with the idea already?" Wraith yelled.

"Okay, well I just want to know when is the hype train arriving?" Ness-Wednesday asked, "We need to go to the Heavnly Ancesion."

"Why sure!" raocow began, "The hype train will be arriving back at 3:50 pm."
Spinda looked at the clock.

"Teh tim es ony to." making Ness-Wednesday look at the clock, and the quote 12 seconds ago made him think.

"My train left at 3:50, how lucky I was that I made it there and my 2013 vacation was lucky to be saved."
Skyler patted his forehead, making him shout- "2013 is the best year in human history!"

"True that..." Sux sighed, "when my fav design was the best..."

"Tell me, what other years do you like?" raocow asked.

"Let me explain." Ness-Wednesday began, "2001 was a unexpected tragedy, 2002 is one of my favorites to be introduced to the new world, 2003 and 2004 are quite lovely beginning on learning, 2005-2006 is hard to explain, 2007 is a big favorite of mine, 2008-2009 were very good!"

"And now comes the 2010s." Wraith rolled his eyes sacrastically.

"Exactly, however 2010 was weird, 2011 was WAY too short, 2012 was okay and weird in sync, but holy whack-a-monty was 2013 prefect and thus the best year yet, 2014 was the last okay year because 2015 turns in the end to be utter Tauroscrap!" Ness-Wednesday was finished.

"Alright, you don't like 2015, so?" Skyler stepped close to him.

"I don't, by the way where can I order tickets to the next ride?" Ness-Wednesday asked.
Soon the train arrived, after ordering the tickets Mabel gave him a small book about the Talkhaus 2015.

A one-eyed, hoodie man was spying on them, in this case it would be the Shadow Doo.
"I've got to follow them, before they reach the Heavnly Ancesion!" he said as he ran to the caboose of the train, jumped and the train flew.
Ness-Wednesday looked up in the sky as they flew, sighing thinking about something that seemed unfotunate.

"What's wrong?" raocow stepped behind?
Ness-Wednesday looked behind him seeing a 1x1 pixel boy.

"Wait, why are you riding with us?" as the boy stepped into the six bed room.

"Well.... you see, I've thought that this force was very intense thing for a giant against four guys and one gal..."
Skyler walked up to him with an angry face and jabbed like Roy (not the purple koopaling guy, he's too lazy).

"I point is, it seems to be that you are missing one spot in your party of six and that one person would be me I guess..."

"Why sure." Ness-Wednesday scratched his back, "but if you excuse me."
He walked to the bathroom, getting ready to shower.

"So, how old is he?" raocow wondered.

"A little bit too young for an intense adventure he's only 14 last time I recalled." Wraith replied.
"But that was back in 2015, he's improved every year."

"It's first me who was stepping behind him, then we met Wraith along after Spinda and Sux, now it's you, yes I saw what you did there." Skyler pouted.
After the prince's shower, he slept for a few, however he woke up early, wanting to get Skyler for some help.

"What?" Skyler's back hurt, but she wanted to help her friend on what favor he had, "It's 1am why are you bothering me?"
Ness-Wednesday grabbed her, while holding a flashlight he ran to an old room, with some Steins objects, that were really appealing to his glasses.

"Now I'm gonna go to sleep, however you will have to check on me in case of any sudden mishaps." Prince Northern-Western fell asleep, with the electric helmet on his big head.
Skyler was confused, but was stood onscreen was Ness-Wednesday in a SMW like forest.

Find out what happens next time when chapter 8 is realeased!

[Alagirez]

The first part of this chapter inspired me to make Cotton Sky Collosus 3 and Woodfall Breeze Remastered :p
Nice fanfic, I enjoyed this.

[Ness-Wednesday]

The first part of this chapter inspired me to make Cotton Sky Collosus 3 and Woodfall Breeze Remastered :p
Nice fanfic, I enjoyed this.

Thanks, I'm glad o hear that this fanfic inspired you to make more levels, I can't wait to see them when you finish them!

[Alagirez]

Let me guess :
The Temmie character supposed to be Spinda
the Captain 5-3 supposed to be as303298
the Princess devianart thing supposed to be Princess Skyler(?)
and a Snail with a blue dry bone's head supposed to be Sux, right?
and what i'm supposed to be? a Moonlight Wolf?

[Ness-Wednesday]

Let me guess :
The Temmie character supposed to be Spinda
the Captain 5-3 supposed to be as303298
the Princess devianart thing supposed to be Princess Skyler(?)
and a Snail with a blue dry bone's head supposed to be Sux, right?
and what i'm supposed to be? a Moonlight Wolf?

You're correct on every question you've asked me.
And according to the way the story goes yeah, since in reality this was started at on the first day of 2016.

[Alagirez]

Ok thanks for that, i'm waiting for chapter 8.

[Muyoko]

Wowie, I returned here to see a fan fiction based on the SMBX community? This is so weird. This is super weird. This is really REALLY REALLY weird. I feel so mixed right now. Like I'd really want to be a part of this but I don't know at what costs.

Keep it up I guess?!

[Alagirez]

--- Eagerly waiting for chapter 8 ---

[FireyPaperMario]

The quality got downhill so quickly I'm cancelling my dramatic readings.

It's for the best...

[Ness-Wednesday]

From now on I'm going to be asking permission on events of the story.

It's for the best...

In a nice way NintendoOtaku93, did you read the next two chapters?
I wonder how did you think after the poor 5th one.
I'm salty again....
Afterward I learned my lesson and know what I shouldn't do for the sequel (next year?).

Well anyway, I'm going to release the next chapter soon I wanted to make Ness-Wednesday's dream based off one of the level I just finished, but something came in mind so there is not much to wait for.

[Hani]

I read some of the chapters, umm... okay.
I'm just gonna go read anime fanfictions.

[Ness-Wednesday]

.... Heh heh ....

Chapter 8: What are you trying to tell us screen?

Spoiler: show

It looked like Marina's CC11 level, but it was inverted.

"Um, this isn't really interesting to me?" Skyler stood there for a moment.

The screen began to change, it was starting to a different level now.
In the holorgramic like screen, a visionary space level that look similar to Steins; lab appeared.
There was a dark/green Mario instead of him being in normal colors.
Robotic Villagers, some Kirby enemies that were based on classical stories and Tin Mammoths.

"That looks like something 2017 like." said Skyler.
She continued to stare at the screen.

"This message goes to the travelers who have come far from the grasslands." which was written on a sign.
"A Gray and Gold chaser shall come to your path, beware thy whose heads start with P."

"Is that some kind of giant Phanto?" Skyler wondered.

"It's original form orginates from 7/10/1987 which was 14 years and 2 days before the birth of a pruple clothed Ness like crowned prince."
Meanwhile Spinda woke up, he was thirsty but when he got a glass from the fridigit, he saw two empty beds.

"Ow boi, thei ded?" he grew evily.
He ran off to find them.

Skyler was curious on what was this meaning, was this the past or the future away from 20xx?
This was confusing, but for one it started to make sense.

Next was a group of Villainous characters, Shadow Kracko, Ultimate Rinka, and Ultimate Phanto were there.
In experience, there was also a 15 year old girl who looked familiar to an old friend but was wearing a black coat.

"Wait..." Skyler stopped for a moment.
"Jan... Jan...." was this what Ninten was referring to?

Next was a Malamar, Dark Marina clone, a Dark eyed Bloody red shirt king, Spiky lion, Purple lined big humanoid bat, and two clones of the more common rivals of Kirby.
Ness-Wednesday started to shake on his side as the ten villains were together, Skyler shook him all about.
In result, the screen changed to Enjl soda subcon place.
The placed looked like a creepier halloween story as in, creepier than a kids show.
As the player entered the door, Spinda came by.

"Oi, whas goin on?" he wondered.

"This might be something we didn't know yet?" Skyler answered.
"Or maybe something going on in his mind, it's just changing constantly."

Next came a SMB level called W-2, which made the player hop non stop, it was completely empty.
Welp, not too empty it at least contained some blocks and bullet bills.

"Cananananana...." Skyler snickered sarcastically.

As then the screen changed now viewing a place which was lovely and peacful, also what showed was a big waterfall, in a small crowd she saw Pixelpest and what was Ness-Wednesday in, a white shirt, that's rare.
He stepped up and walked by exploring what he called paradise, "Oh boy I already love Candaiana over Underited Stakes of Anairica.", he explored until he saw some people talking one girl spotted the boy and said hi.
With him replying back, he knew he might make better friends than the ones he had who he finds dark.

"So maybe it reads what's going on in our minds sending Prince Northern-Western our thoughts to show up on the screen." Skyler understood.

Sux and Captain 5-3 stepped out of their beds, leaving Raocow the last one sleeping in the room.

"Did they just stepped out of the room without us knowing?" Wraith asked Sux.

"Why wonder, if a young prince will take two friends with him, that's just sneaky of him." Sux replied.

As the two others walked off, Skyler did say...
"inb4 the other three walk in fiding us here." Skyler was correct as Wraith and Sux stepped in.

"What's going on?" Wraith whispered.
"It's so damn early in the morning!"

"I don't think it's that early we're probably up in the substance sky." Sux corrected him.
"But I do wonder the same thing."

"This machine records our words and movement and sends it to Ness-Wednesday so it can show it's visuals." Skyler replied.

At that moment Ness-Wednesday woke up, shaking his head twice.

"Well, you see does that tell you where we are going?" Ness-Wednesday asked.

"Absolutely not!" Sux crept closer.

"Erm, I only know were stopping at this heaven place." Skyler cleared.
"But the stop shouldn't be far from now."

Meanwhile the Shadow Doo was hiding from the six, trying to blend in like infamous intense visuals.
"And when you say intense visuals you go dull and picture Sonic saying-"
Okay, I get it I see strange stuff when I look at quotes.

"Now, to stop them from reaching their destination!"
If you want we could share some hot dogs while-

"Erm, may.. I" Ness-Wednesday slid the screen because looks like no ones wants to have hot dogs with me while listening to-
"Anyway, I don't think you guys understand the villains in the dark shot."

"I want to know why the fourth one looked like a friend I knew." Skyler stepped forward.
"Who was that?"

Raocow stepped in, shocked that everyone was inside already.

"Why, why?" Raocow was confused.
"Did you guys discover this?" he stopped.

"Well, he found it first, the other three and I were sort of dragged here." Skyler jumped as the train shook.

"Who set the earthquake through Lunalua?" Ness-Wednesday slipped.

"Oi, were dying!" Spinda twirled in circles.

Prince Norther-Western and Sux dashed forward out of the placed, the other four dragged along them.
Shadow Doo laughed as he ran out of the interior of the steam locomotive, in result Skyler looked back but refused to speak as the more dangerous event was better to finish.
Ness-Wednesday slid into the seat, pulling the throttle upward, saving the six travelers and the talkhausers from damage.
Shadow Doo was suddenly hanging from the edge of the caboose, close to the buffer.

"Why was there a Waddle Doo running away?" Skyler asked.

"That must be a minion via Shadow Kracko." Ness-Wednesday replied.

"What?" Um, the other five who else?

"He was from the Shadow Kracko, don't you guys understand?"

With Skyler raising her hand quietly, no one spoke it was silent throughout a minute ofthe ride.

"Well, we are nearly there so I guess we can start packing up in five minutes or so." Sux crawled.

"Is anyone else hungry?" Wraith asked.

"Why I am, I packed myself a san..., there's only one in the bag!" Ness-Wednesday shimmered.

The four batttled it out, Raocow and Skyler watched.

"This isn't really reasonable is it?" She cringed.

"Why, this train has a diner so no it isn't, or it was if we've just been saved by a purple shirt boy." Raocow shook his head turning back on the cab.

"NO! MY SANDWHICH!!!" The sandwhich fled off the train and landed down to earth---- (Why what's the second part that stsrt's with B and it was from a name of an SNES game?), down to Candaiana.
In surprised, the sandwhich literally fell down in front of a girl Skyler thought of, who was on the screen.
Laughing quietly, she picked it up and sniffed it smelling like it was from a boy who traveled to stop a Kracko.

"That smell, I know it..." she stepped 11 inches away from the specific distance from a similar kid, Ninten.

"Ninten, called the rest of the team and tell them we are going to strike next year when the sky explodes like Deoxys being killed." she requested.

"Why, everyone?" Ninten quivered and shaked as he started to call them all one by one.

Meanwhile, Ness-Wednesday looked down at the space not caring.

"Well, it looks like that will never get to see the light of day." he turned around.

"Are you kidding, you only packed a sandwhich there and you could've packed a mushroom or something for us six to share?" Wraith grabbed him from the collar (hollar) and slapped him, suddenly sending him don to the floor.
"And no, no Tomatoes thanks." he crossed his arms.

"Why, I guess everyone respects my love of Tomatoes?" Ness-Wednesday shrugged as he came close to a trio out of five followers.

"I don't think that's why we don't want to eat tomatoes when you're around." Skyler starred.

"Oh yeah, and did you know that Fox Mikkracko is a disgusting animal?"

No one cared, and the four just smirked with their faces covered.
Meanwhile, the prince spotted a colorful red Sky palace which he knew would be similar to Shadow Kracko's color.

"That dosen't look so heavenly to me, it looks a little like one of Camacho's newer levels, but with Emral's Rinka sky castle tileset." Skyler was right behind the boy.

"At least I can say, this is starting to look like something more of a normal contest not a challenge contest." Wraith sighed.

"What do you mean you were going to say a bloody ancesion has conclusion to your SVLC 2016 reviews?" Sux asked.

"Well, this is your stop, good luck." Mabel came across.

The boy ran to the bridge, no one was there, in his sight at least, he twisted his back and jumped.
Skyler and Spinda stepped behind him, the temmie was holding a fire flower on his back.

"Am I missing some kind of idea here or am I seeing what I'm seeing, I mean this would probably have like five floors like a tower right?" Ness-Wednesday turned around.

"Come on, it's going to be fun, don't try to run away from the place where crime might have began!" Captain 5-3 teased him.

"Who in the world said that, FYI you aren't making any proper sense yet no one has died yet, meaning you literally said he's a bad thug, or psychopath..." Skyler lost her mind.

"Well, I only see this being 7 stories long if you asked me!" Sux slid toward Ness-Wednesday.

Decding to go forward, they were suddenly stopped by some robotic beings... "Halt!"

Find out what happenss next in chapter 9!

[Alagirez]

Wait i never release any red sky levels :/
Btw nice story as usual (im sorry i can't make a dramatic reading).....

[Ness-Wednesday]

Wait i never release any red sky levels :/
Btw nice story as usual (im sorry i can't make a dramatic reading).....

Thanks, also I mistaken one of newer levels you made for your project because it looks more like red to me.
However, I'm not sure when chapter 9 will be released since I'm starting off with vacation pretty darn early this year.