Rise of the Shadow Kracko (SMBX community related)

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Re: Rise of the Shadow Kracko (SMBX community related)

Postby Enjl » Sun Mar 20, 2016 10:20 pm

The quality got downhill so quickly I'm cancelling my dramatic readings.

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Re: Rise of the Shadow Kracko (SMBX community related)

Postby Alagirez » Sun Mar 20, 2016 10:23 pm

no camacho for this chapter
i'm disappointed

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Re: Rise of the Shadow Kracko (SMBX community related)

Postby Superiorstar » Sun Mar 20, 2016 10:58 pm



I would except it if it were in a better, much less taken seriously context, but it's not, so it comes off to me as weird high school drama.
oh boy I do hope this doesn't end up like Kep X Panda.


Though it would be funny if it did, to me at least.

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Re: Rise of the Shadow Kracko (SMBX community related)

Postby Ness-Wednesday » Mon Mar 21, 2016 7:52 am

Sorry guys, I felt really tired when making this chapter.
I'm going to edit this and fix it, I knew something was wrong with it.

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Re: Rise of the Shadow Kracko (SMBX community related)

Postby Zipper » Mon Mar 21, 2016 9:44 am

I want to do a dramatic reading of this with silly music in the background.

Except there won't be any reading, only the silly music.

I feel like that'll be better for everyone in the end.

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Re: Rise of the Shadow Kracko (SMBX community related)

Postby Mable » Mon Mar 21, 2016 2:25 pm

Superiorstar wrote:

I would except it if it were in a better, much less taken seriously context, but it's not, so it comes off to me as weird high school drama.
oh boy I do hope this doesn't end up like Kep X Panda.


Though it would be funny if it did, to me at least.
Why kep? Wasn't it SMBXXER who made the thread that he doesn't love Panda.

Good study.

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Re: Rise of the Shadow Kracko (SMBX community related)

Postby Waddle » Mon Mar 21, 2016 6:46 pm

Camacho wrote:no camacho for this chapter
i'm disappointed
Stop

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Re: Rise of the Shadow Kracko (SMBX community related)

Postby Alagirez » Mon Mar 21, 2016 7:51 pm

Waddle Derp wrote:
Camacho wrote:no camacho for this chapter
i'm disappointed
Stop
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Re: Rise of the Shadow Kracko (SMBX community related)

Postby Lukas Old Account » Tue Mar 22, 2016 3:30 am

Camacho wrote:
Waddle Derp wrote:
Camacho wrote:no camacho for this chapter
i'm disappointed
Stop
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Plz:
Spoiler: show
On topic, I hope you don't quit this... :(
I like reading these stories of you, but like Enjl said...

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Re: Rise of the Shadow Kracko (SMBX community related)

Postby Alagirez » Tue Mar 22, 2016 3:34 am

Lukas wrote:
Plz:
Spoiler: show
Camacho wrote:
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Lukas wrote: On topic, I hope you don't quit this... :(
I like reading these stories of you, but like Enjl said...
TBH the quality of the story still good.........
and i agreee, pls don't stop making stories, Nessy!

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Re: Rise of the Shadow Kracko (SMBX community related)

Postby Ness-Wednesday » Tue Mar 22, 2016 7:55 am

Camacho wrote:
Lukas wrote: On topic, I hope you don't quit this... :(
I like reading these stories of you, but like Enjl said...
TBH the quality of the story still good.........
and i agreee, pls don't stop making stories, Nessy!
Don't worry guys, I won't quit this, but I'm going to start putting more effort into them from now on so I don't have to just write in one go and edit for reasons like four times.

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Re: Rise of the Shadow Kracko (SMBX community related)

Postby Enjl » Tue Mar 22, 2016 9:11 am

I think a good way to go about things is by completely scrapping the "before the story continues" parts and instead focusing on making the story about shadow kracko by elaborating on the main part of this fanfiction.

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Re: Rise of the Shadow Kracko (SMBX community related)

Postby Ness-Wednesday » Tue Mar 22, 2016 8:23 pm

Enjl wrote:I think a good way to go about things is by completely scrapping the "before the story continues" parts and instead focusing on making the story about shadow kracko by elaborating on the main part of this fanfiction.
I have removed it from the chapters, and therefore they won't be part of the fanfic anymore for good.

Should I have to put this in a spoiler becuase this is the first part and yet it's 15582 characters long.
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------Chapter 6: Well I love to play joke levels! (part 1?)-------------------------------------------------------------------
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"So what's the whole idea of the name being called the department of joke levels?" Sux asked.

"Well, all joke levels submitted to CCs are sent there to keep seriousness separated from joke levels, espically the awful ones." Wraith replied.

"So why are we going to an effortless building again?" Skyler asked.

"To find someone who can help us give directions to the talkhaus." did Prince Northern-Western speak.
"I do know several people who have submitted more than one joke level to the contest."

"They would probably go there alot, if they sent joke levels." Wraith replied.

"At least my first level wasn't a joke." said Sux.

"You know, the five of us are probably gonna have our eyes damaged from clash." Skyler wondered.

"This is why people only use one style in levels." Wraith replied.
"Then people starting complaining about it, unless it's only a specific style."

"And of course my CC11 level should be there." wondered Prince Northern-Western.
"But I usually don't visit that place because I want to do better in the future and let that past level stay there."

"Oi, 8flight haz never escaiped fawm that plaice." said Spinda.

"Who's 8flight?" Skyler wondered.

"8flight is a talkhaus member who comes every CC to try to get his puzzle levels to the contest." Wraith answered.

"I've seen the results of CC12 and he got second to last, A very long puzzle level as what I've heard of." Ness-Wednesday responsed.

He realized something that he could off thought of whenever they tralleved together.

"I've noticed that we are actually having a nice conversation, you know I haven't seen that much nice conversations for a while on the SMBX forums."

"I can preach what you said." said Sux, "During 2015, there were so many fights going on and some led to big disasters."

"I wasn't a level judge until at least February 2016, so yeah it was boring." replied Captain 5-3.

"Anyways, what's that building over there?" Skyler asked.

"That would be the department of joke levels." guessed Captain 5-3.

"If you would guess so, I'd suggest to enter this place to see if we are at the right stop." Sux came forward and opened the door.

The five travelers had found themseleves in a place with a background of clusters of images.

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"Okay, that background clashes into the environment." Wraith began.

"Is this place empty, no npcs?" Ness-Wednesday wondered.

A grey Snifit in a Mario cap stepped up.

"Hey, what are you guys doing here?" he wondered.
"You guys also sent joke levels to the contest?"

"Besides me, no one between the five of us did." Ness-Wednesday answered.
"I did come here to find some directions to the Talkhaus, since I just visited the bad place over the other side."

"Don't you want to play one of the newer joke levels?" the grey Snifit asked.
"Check out Airship's WHAT I SEE FROM EVERY LEVEL OF THIS BULLSHIT COMMUNITY WITH HENTAIS, It's his CC12 entry."

"I guess I'll play something that's not full of effort." Skyler decided to play the level.

The five travelers enter the level being warped to a starry route.

"Well this dosen't seem like a joke level to me." wondered Sux.
"I can't say that much for the enemy placement."

They got up to the yellow star blocks only to read a sign saying, "LOOK, A LEVEL WITH GORGEOUS GRAPHICS, WITH NO GIMMICK CREATIVE, JUST THE SAME IDEOLOGY, DOGE ENEMIES AND GET TO THE END, 10/10."

"Maybe the signs are jokish, and the level is serious?" Skyler questioned.

He entered an orange pipe, and....

Ness-Wednesday stopped and his eyes grew colored white with tears, looking at the debugger.

"Why?....." he grabbed an eraser and destroyed everything in the section only leaving himself defeated and a dumb background.

He quickly caught up with the other four, but his face never changed and he still kept on crying deeply while his face was frozen.

"I'll carry him again." She sighed when she noticed that he saw something that would include losing things while adding even more, she knew that this makes him cry hard.
"I don't think he was this sad before, but I think he is probably frozen if he isn't moving a muscle."
"Let's just take the pipe and see what's this talk about a joke level."

They enter the pipe only to see a casino section, with so many SMB3 bushes in the area.

"Okay, there are too many bushes in this section, they don't really fit with the atmoshpere." Wraith critizied.

"Oh, there's another sign?" Sux read the sign, only to noticed that maybe it was a joke.
"Too much bgo? 7.8/10 What?" Sux was really confused.

"Okay, I don't find this funny." Skyler spoken, "I find these jokes rather idiotic, honestly."

They entered a pipe to the next section, and they were found in a switch puzzle pipe area.

"Oh no, it's the Ultimate Switch Block!" Ness-Wednesday yelled.

"I think this level is trying to make fun of SMBX levels." Skyler wondered.

"This is a switch puzzle, I don't think it's best to talk about them." Skyler had completed the challenge in at least a minute.
"Another sign, again?" she was starting to get scared.
"Of course, all we want id backtracking to activate switches, because THIS IS a complex level design, isn't?, great, beautiful, I want to *censored becuase what the creaotr wrote is mature*, 69/10?"

"Yeah, this is definetely a joke level with that mature joke Airship wrote." said Captain 5-3.

They entered a pipe and found themselves in a jokey section with horribly placed blocks.

"Goomba is dead"

"Oh hey a Toad!" Skyler had spoken to them.

"jokes here" the first one said and, "a**" said the other one, with leaving the third toad giving out a cat face.

"Oh hey, look at the reason why I hate Toads." Wraith said sarcastically.
"Oh and look at this sign; level design? WHO NEEDS LEVEL DESIGN????????? IF THE LEVEL HAVE JOKES? REMEMBER KISD, JOKES > LEVEL DESIGN - Sick Ass Swamp creator words, really. 666/10"

They enter the pipe and go through a similar section.

"Goomba is dead again"

"GG, like this level is a joke level, I'm not sure what SnifitGuy is doing here but I know something isn't right as of now." Skyler spoken to the boys.

"YOU ARE TRICKED =D" the smiley face did grew long, "EMAG VOY FO DNE" and "SMBX LEGACY EDITOR > PGE, JUDGE ME "

"Well I do prefer PGE over the Legacy Editor."

The sign only had strange symbols of font on it, making it useless.

They are suddenly led into a Boom Boom fight, with a sign with bad text once again.

"OOOOOOOOOOOOH NOOOOOOOOOOOOO, IS BOOM BOOM, THE BOSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS MORE USEDDDDDDDDDDD AND GENERIC IN MUSHROOM KINGDOOOOOOOM, WHAAAAT YOU GONNNNNNA DO???"

"Okay, that dosen't make sense." said Skyler.

You do realize that Boom Boom is generic because he takes three stomps, 9 hits from any projectile and 5 stabs right?

"This is way too easy." said Captain 5-3
"One stomp...." "Two stomp...." "Three....?"

"Wow, you just killed him, well, that was quick ..."

...

"Has it ever crossed your mind that this Boom Boom that you just kill, could be a parent family?"

"Such good grammer." Skyler shook her head.

"AND NOW, YOUR CHILDREN NEVER SEE HE AGAIN?"
"Nah, he is one Boom Boom, who cares anyway?"

Syler started to sing..
"You can not say where the-"

"STOP!" Ness-Wednesday shouted and woked up.
"If it would be anything that's my weakeness, it would be that song!"
"Just go down the green pipe, please!"

They went down the pipe only to be found with clash of music.

"Oh hey, apparently music can also clash with 16-bit!" Wraith reacted.

"What am I missing here?" Sux wondered.
"Don't understand why I here 8-bit music and the background is buggy."

"Did you know that judges levels have more chances to win competitions?"
"Just do not tell that to the Enjl. 666/10"

"Okay, he needs to stop using that number." said Skyler.
"It shouldn't be used IMO for a reason."

Next section.... Oh boy....
The music is the overused mature DK meme, you know....

"What?" Skyler wondered.
"I'm not sure what is happening, is this Airship trying to make something against the rules?" Wraith wondered.

"There are three signs, wht do they say?" Sux wondered.

"The first one only has a mature joke, honestly the jokes here are probably being bad on purpose." saod Prince Northern-Western.

"What ? Does not like play joke levels? I understand your point of view, you must be tired of playing this garbage."

"Yes we are!" Skyler shouted.
"This is just plain awful!"

"Okay, I'll create a decent level then."

"I'm not trusting anyone to think it's decent." Wraith thought for a moment.

After the third sign would be an intsant warp to a ghost house section.

"Oh look, a misplaced door!" Sux noticed a door bgo.
"At least we have the checkpoint."

Ness-Wednesday ran to one side and suddenly found himself in an area with more misplaced doors, the rest followed.

"Oi, why ar ther misplaicd dawrs in tha level?" Spinda wondered.

"I think this is supposed to be a joke, people spamming bgos because in many people's thoughts, it looks better that way." replied Skyler.
"If you can do it right...."
"Honestly, I think the enemy placement is fine, but I don't think the rest will look good later."

They found some small cramped areas and floating pipes, if that's what a joke level has.

"Okay, those areas are too small for us to go through." said Sux.

"I think we would have to crouch jump just to go through there." thought Wraith.

"There is bad coin placement and unfitting bushes in this section!" Ness-Wednesday yelled out loud.

He jumped, and made it through the small area, the others did too, I find Skyler and Wraith to be a shocker to go through such a small set.

"This is really dumb!" said Sux.
"Why are we even playing this, sholdn't we go to the Talkhaus by now?"

"Oi, wer that Snefetgi?" Spinda wondered.

"I'm only going to try this out just to see what will happen before you guys... and girl, fall down by mistake." Ness-Wednesday, tested it out.
He was being warped constantly from one side to the other.

"This is honestly exploitable, and really generic for it's type of design." Skyler replied.

It was easy to escape through and they got out of the cramped puzzle.

"But where does the door come from?" Wraith wondered.
"And what good block placement it is, to risk our lives from jumping."

They continued on through random broken pipes, misplaced doors, and such npc placement only to be found by a wall blocking them.

"Why did we have to suffer here, what if...." Sux was stopped as Ness-Wednesday stepped forward and Spinda laughed evily.

"Step back everyone!" said Prince Northern-Western, "I've seen this trick before and I'll never let it fool anyone in my sight!"

Two hidden coin blocks were revealed, showing of the continuation of the level.

"Oh no...."
"There is the old gap thing again."

"Can you let a girl and four guys have a turn to speak?" Skyler stopped him.
"You've said enough about tricks and stuff."
"Besides, you could just idioticly jump and still make it over."

They came across a door, which led them to another section similar to the one they saw prior to the Ghost House section.

"Okay?" Wraith wondered.
"Why am I not surprised we're in another clone section like before?"

"This is probably going to have it's joke revealed in the very end." Sux thought for a moment.
"And I think it's enough with those water bgos, whatever they are..."

Skyler read one of the signs, "What? Do (you) not like spooky levels too? You are a kind of person very hard to please, knew?"
"I'm going to say that's a yes IMO."

"Second sign!" Captain 5-3 yelled, "hahahaha, why the hell am I trying to please you anyway? this level is mine and I do what I want =)"
"Oh boy...."

"Oi, the therd sign." Spinda tried to read it, but they only warped into a jokey area with a background that shows a hentai, Airship ghost giving out the finger, a Cow fish and a image of Airship spam.
The sheep were blocks and it was alot worse!

"Only got one thing to say...." Skyler spoken, "Horrors...."
"BTW, Oni-Chan is da best way to S2."

"I'm going to regret the coin placement being used as a heart." Ness-Wednesday spoken.
"And if...." "What in the?"
"Cat faces, coins and Airship enemies!"
"Continuing on...."
"I'm only going to read it in a way to fit with the meme, Fig the world?"

Wraith yelled, "RRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRROLINGARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRROUND!"
Leading to Ness-Wednesday punching his face with a backward punch.
"You stole my back arieal!"
"Also, the coins that say WOW, are my response to Airship making a joke level."

"Drugs are cool?" Sux knew where this was going.
"I'm really dissappointed with this user, these signs are really bad."

"This sign is literally the truth about Chad." said Ness-Wednesday.
"chad level design is average, JUDGE ME"
"Yes, the fact he treats good levels like shit, is what's making this true."
....

"Oh, man he didn't!" Skyler yelled getting ready to be sick reacing to the mature jokey coin placement.
"Well, this last one says there are: More bad jokes here, and enemies that don't seem to be nicely placed."

They entered the warp pipe and ecountered a yellow haired ghost.

"I've had enough of this, your hear that song?"
"Exactly, now this thng became serious."

"No it hasn't!" yelled Skyler.
"You must be one of the people who were imprisioned arguing against Lunalua!"

"Silence!" Airship hushed the five travelers.
"You want your star, and I want my bed, so, how can we finish this?"
"With an epic battle, obviously, because bosses give more scores. =DDD"

"Unless yor Dankonios." replied Spinda.

"Despite that, bad bosses usually, not pleased very the judges."

"Oh, such good gramm-" Skyler was interuppted.

"Nah, who cares anyway?"

"Warps!" Ness-Wednesday yelled.
"What just happened?"

"Now, I'll be walking to the left and right, in hopes that you do not hit me with these bombs, that are coming from beyond."

The battle is basically just an npc with events, nothing else....

"I can just do this...." Ness-Wednesday got a Super leaf, and his clothes became light blue and blue green.
He crouched, and his eyes glew white, he stared at Airship and teleported.

"Were is he now?" Sux wondered as he and the rest started to jump over Ninji AIs.

Ness-Wednesday came down yelling out "I BAKE SAUSAGE!"
"Wait? That's not what the Lucky Star intro was...."

"A boss without rinkas? UNACCEPTABLE? -1/10"

"Waht just happened?" Skyler wondered.

"The way the enemy AI layer bosses are made can easily be broken, and the new attack I learned just did that."

Unfortunatley there was no star, but Snifit Guy showed up.

"You really love to play these kind of levels don't you?" he wondered.
"I've got another one from CC11 to show you, although there aren't alot of CC11 joke levels out there."

"Oh no, is it that one?" Prince Northern-Western wondered.

"Correct!" Snifit Guy pushed a button taking them to a lava level.
Find npc 71, npc get... Get it because CC11's level got 71rst and Npc 71 is a giant Goomba?

This is going a little far on length so I'll stop it here for now, not sure if it will be a part 2 or will Chapter 6 be a separate chapter and next time will be chapter 7.
But I guess something would happen, but gee did Airship really want to make a joke level in CC12, I feel lucky to wanting to play CC12's Tier 1 levels now.

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Re: Rise of the Shadow Kracko (SMBX community related)

Postby Ness-Wednesday » Fri Mar 25, 2016 11:13 pm

-------------------------------------------------------------------------------Chapter 6: Well I love to play joke levels! (part 2)-------------------------------------------------------------------
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Here's Chapter 6.5, with a selected CC11,

"Huh, this dosen't look bad." Skyler thought, "Although the coins don't look right, and the Waddle Dee should be recolored."

"This isn't the worst part, but you'll reach it really soon." sighed Ness-Wednesday.

They entered a warp pipe and found a section with SMB1 ground and SMW lava.

"Oi, het the swetch." Spinda shouted as he hit a red switch and a block showed revealing, a Dragon coin.

"This dosen't seem like a joke level yet." Sux said.

"I would love to tell you how much of a joke level this really is but, I don't want to spoil it for you." Wraith spoken to Sux.

They left the section, only to find their way through some ironic npcs and suddenly a Toad.

"AAAAHHH! The world is broken!"

"You're broken!" Wraith replied shutting the little one up.

They continued along only to find themselves against a Villager.

Skyler was confused, leading Wraith to stomp on one.
In this cased, she laughed out loud noticing the blurry squished Rex.

"So, TereKuribos, Chain-Chomps, and Villager, also Waddle Dees and Pumpkins?" She asked Ness-Wednesday.

"Apparently so." He replied, sighing.
"Don't you want to see the secret up here?"

"I think I'll slide!" She said sliding down the slope.
They found them stuck near two doors and a familiar face.

"This level aquires you to beat these two bosses in order to proceed to the next level."

"Please use shadowstar...." Ness-Wednesday sighed.

They entered the first door and....

"What?!" Sux was puzzled at first, but laughed out loud with the rest noticing a dummy Barney replacing Boom Boom.
....Stop?
They didn't stop laughing through the whole way, they also laughed at the glitchy death effect.

"Now on to the next door!" Sux yelled entering the door, leading the other four along.

They find a Randall Boggs replacing Mouser, which was always going left.

"Why is he going left?" Wraith asked.

"I think one of the codes I set, must have made him stick to one way." Prince Northern-Western wondered.

They left the area, only to find a Dumb Villager thing that shot Bowling balls.

"What's the idea here?" Skyler asked.

"I wanted to make the npc go through blocks, but because of the collisions, they will get destroyed easily." replied Ness-Wednesday

Sux saw a Villager get killed from the POW effect and poor power-up placement.
"Yep, this is a joke level, I've noticed that ironic death effect there."

They saw a giant Pirhana plant and they reacted by laughing at it.
They just already knew this was a joke level.
They found a small Skull Raft, with a Buzzy Beetle that did nothing.

"Why is this here?" Wraith wondered.

"That's what I was wondereing." Ness-Wednesday thought to himself.

They found an end, leading them to being glitched through the wall.

"How can something like this happen?" Skyler wondered.

"SMBX collisions are really dumb if you ask me." Ness-Wednesday replied.

They found a door entering a room with Dark Ness.

"Dark Ness?" Sux asked.

"Dark...Ness?" Skyler asked as well, she cringed a little.

"I know, it's stupid, don't ask why." Ness-Wednesday answered.
"Anyways, three hits it's too easy so let's go to the last section."

They entered a section where the music changed, making Skyler laugh once again.

"What's this supposed to be?" Sux wondered.

"I think this is based off SMB1." Wraith thought.

Later, they found a sign saying that they will be led to a small island where the boss is located.
Through the skull ride?
They rode on the Skull Raft, only to find more lava, so they didn't glitched through the wall again.

"So what's the most funny part about the level?" Skyler asked.

He stepped close to a red switch ready to hit it.

"LAAAAVAAAAA!!!!" Spinda yelled.

Lava crashed down on the three minibosses making everyone laugh out loud, so loud that it echoed through the hill in the background.
Afterwards, would be a preparation room, which should've been the checkpoint's location.

"So who is this-" Sux was cut when they entered the door.

"Hell there, you must be Ness-Wednesday, PrincessSkyler, Wraith Adamaknight, Spinda and Sux right?"
"Hey, I am Ninten."

"Hi?" Wraith said.

"After I lost Ana and after my ask account died, I got super angry and rampaged."
Skyler laughed at this out loud.
"My leader has told me that you've used her artwork for this level."

"Wait I didn't write that?" no really, he didn't....

"And I'm gonna say it again, because this time I'm being requested for you to...."
"GET REKT!!!"

"Okay, I didn't write this, did Lunadll attack this place?" Ness-Wednesday wondered.

"Only an SMB1 Bowser, come on!" Wraith yelled.
He walked closely as he avoided his notes and fire, leading him to use Knight of fists on him.

"Yep, Lunadll attacked this level." Ness-Wednesday thought.
"Or Wraith is overpowered and must be nerfed in the episode."

"What I died to a clone of Captain Falcon, Snail with a Dry Bones head, a Temmie, a faniliar face and a heavyweught boy?"
"I see...."
"When we meet at Promo 999, you'll won't be smiling about when I kill you there."
"Ana, Lloyd, Pipi, and Teddy are onwards with their lives, I was sent by Janondorf to kill you!"

"Who?" Ness-Wednesday stopped him, "You're not with Shadow Kracko?"

"Of course not, he ignored the first Mother game, but Janondorf found me in 2013 and I was hired."
"Legend has it, if both of their powers matched to each other, the castles of the Earth shall crumble and explode!"
"She'll be mad to know you're trying to sop us, but right now I've been defeated si U shall show off effect-105."
Ness-Wednesday had stopped to see him die, thinking about why did the text change.

They were trasitioned to a SMW area, thinking it was a nightmare.

"I just had a dream that I suffered from all those idiotic obsacles and alot of s***!" Wraith yelled, eventually knocking off the Toad off the screen.

"So the level ends here...." Prince Northern-Western had sighed, leading him to grab it and....

"Hey! You've found my-"

"Who puts a secret hideout in an SMB3 goal?" Skyler yelled.
"You know, this is stupid, I think this was funny enough but this is going way too far, for the record, I think I would want to know on how unfair it is that you didn't even change his color!"

Villager got his axe ready to chop her on the waist, but suddenly Villager was surrounded by purple matter being levitated.

"Northern?" Skyler was shocked.

"Haha!" he laughed.
"Didn't you know I'm also Psychic?" Ness-Wednesday smashed Villager to the ground leading him to get the axe ready to reflect what Villager would've done o her, except on his head.

"Now do you have any right to not let me dorp this axe on you and split your head?" he really wanted to do this.
Villager shook his head.

"Will you leave me alone and go kill the idiotic Animal Crossing characters?"
Villager nodded getting ready to cry for mercy.

"And lastly from rumors from my wife, will you leave her alone and hot try to hurt her?"
Villager nodded.

"Then get the f************* out of here!" Ness-Wednesday sent him flying through the air, eventually landing on a place that was hard to tell from their point of view.

"So, the star is gone once again?" Skyler wondered, and so here come the one.

"Haha, I knew you would laugh!" Snifitguy smirked.
"You're lucky that this isn't EVERY CC, otherwise we'd go too far."

"Too far for what?" Wraith asked.

"Too that one CC6 joke level, not Quill's nor Chill_Pingu's..."

He hit a button leading them to Gltich4's CC10 level, which got last place overall on that contest.

"Why is this level called no?" Skyler asked.

"Well basically, that's what it is when you see a joke level." Wraith answered.

The level if you remeber is basically misplaced blocks and enemies everywhere, especially Toads.

"warning: joke reviews"

"You're pointless!" Wraith kicked him hardly.

"elsa is love, bomber57 x TNTimelord is life"

"This Toad is an idiot if you asked me." Ness-Wednesday whispered to Skyler.

"best level omg Lololoololollololo - Chad 10/10"

"Should there be something better than Shinbison Kof's LC 9 level, then I guess a review like this would be real from him, sort of." Sux thought.

"Yay, dumb placement of coins and another Toad!" Wraith yelled.

"LOLO OMG THIS IS THE BEST LAVAR LOLOLOLOOLO OMGGGG I CAN SEE THE SPAM OF IT I ENJOY IT :DDDDD 1000/1 - Joey"

"If Joey was a judge, I wouldn't dream of it. :P" Sux replied, with Wraith kicking that one as well.

"lol insulted 100000000000000/1 - Quill (srry gotta go finish tob8)"

"Yeah, a reason why CCs aren't seasonal anymore." Sux answered.

"Does anyone think these blocks are supposed to represent something?" did Prince Northern-Western think for a minute.
"They look like Airships."

"omggg 1000000/1 this is the awesome thing what have you done with this level :DDD 111111/10 - TNTimelord"

"Well, since we both love the same classical "good" style, I guess it can depend on the level." Sux repleid.

"OH NO YOU DIDN'T.... omfg you put elsa is love in that text IM SO EXCITED IM BEEN FORWADING MORE OF YOU SO MACH :)))))) 10x9x8x412/1 - Volttery"

"I hope Valtteri is elected next year for what ever that.. council thing I've hears was called.... yeah....." said Ness-Wednesday.

"Pls put joke rews of this s*** and exclude from tob9 Guill im so f****** tired of this s***, it taked me 10 mins to f*** this up - batman"
Sux and PrincessSkyler both laughed out loud.

"Marina: why?"
The level itself was a complete joke!
Snifitguy came up, ready to push a CC9 button.

"Hey, so do you like Pyramid levels, this one is that one!" Snifitguy spoken.

"Oh boy, I think I've heard of this level before, it's the CC9 level that's reasoned why Tier 1 was excluded in ToB8, thus the screamer." Ness-Wednesday thought for a moment.
At that moment, SnifitGuy had pressed the button and they were in a really serious Desert level with nice graphics and bgo placement, but a little cramped.

"Well this dosen't look bad." Sux spoken.
"Can't say much for the bgo and the moving layer."

The layer of a sizeable and a couple of more bgos was able to crush the player on the warp pipe which didn't lead to anywhere special.

"That's was just a stupid place to put a moing sizeable on." said Wraith.
"Also, there's cutoff becuase these two blocks are floating are on top of the lava."

They met with a Toad followed along with some misplaced blocks.
"This pyramid was made by me."
"Destroy it, and I'll---"

"Okay I think I've heard enough from these idiots for one day." Wraith threw him into the lava.
They entered the door, Wraith ignored the Toad that said "lol".

Music was really generic, and the sign only had one word....
"faget"

"AH!" Ness-Wednesday yelled!
Skyler, and Sux laughed at the text.

Items were spammed, one Toad yellled for Tier 6 quallity, and one had a good reason why Tier 1's exclusion.
"CUM BAK 2 THIS LVL EVFERTYM U NEED 1ups AND POERUIPS."

"This is a Tanookisuit and Lakitu shoe farm, fact it's easy to get rid off all the npcs in this section." Ness-Wednesday replied.

After the Weege (rofl, Luigi meme) who spoke for Tier 5 quality (ignore the two other Toads), one had a request for unfair volume to headphone users.
"I'm sorry I put you in all of this misery."
"Go down the pipe to end the level (BTW sorry the next section's music is low, please turn it up on high!)"

They warped down, only to find a SMW background, hard to hear music and SnifitGuy once again.

"You know, this was my best contest, I've got 7th place out of 76 participants!"

"True...." Ness-Wednesday sighed, "The other levels he sent were joke levels."

"This next level from CC8 is approved by Mitt Ronmey!" SnifitGuy pressed a button taking them to Vinyl Scratch's CC8 level.

They were in a small section with a switch puzzle and a curvy hole.

"Why is this a joke level?" Skyler thought.

"Well, you'll find out when we get there." said Captain 5-3.

"How is there no grass on the blocks and yet, trees are growing from them?" questioned Sux.
"Also, that vine is placed badly, it isn't even SMB1 styled, not saying it clashes but it dosen't seem fair if everything else is SMB1 styled."
They climbed the vine and entered a pipe that was below the vine and found themselves in an SMB2 environment.

"So this is SMB2?" Skyler asked.

"Apparently, I guess this would be so...." replied Prince Northern-Western.
He saw a Venus Fire Trap that was replaced by a Cobrat.
"Hey, I've never seen these graphics now these days."
Ness-Wednesday stabbed the npc afterwards for SMBX's sake of crashing.

"Oh no...." said Captain 5-3.
"She literally had to block something with a switch block."

"Well, the switch block isn't far from here." Sux spoken then hitting the yellowish switch block.

"Oi, but tats jus a dorr." Spinda pulled a potion revelaing a door as he said.
They entered the door, only to be found in an inverted area with no background what so ever.

"So this is a fake subcon, with a real switch block and bland area?" Skyler said sarcastically.
"Rofl, the two ways to exit is a warp and not a door!"
She hit the switch and agreed to go through the blue vase while the boys refused and went throught the warp pipe.
They made it first, only to be found with Skyler keeping them waiting for at least 12 seconds.
"Hey, why are there two exits that are different and useless?"

"You're telling me, or you're asking a biased question?" replied Sux memeisticly.

"Woah, PK radicola!" Ness-Wednesday yelled as he noticed the switches were gone and the curvy hole was still there, open.
"I can race really fast through the hole!"

"I suggest you to not try it, because having to break a joke level once is better than twice." said Wraith, Skyler agreed.

They continued on with some basic SMB1 platforming, until there was one Taod who walked to them.
"NO, don't hurt me like the rest of the Toads in the joke levels!"
"It's dangerous to go alone, here take this!"

"I'll take that thank you." said Skyler, stomping on Ness-Wednesday's head slipping him on his side.
They entered a warp pipe where the jokes began, continuing on after the shells of a SMB1 red Koopa being coins.

"What's this music, I've hear it before?!" Wraith ans Sux asked together.

"Oh boy, don't tell Skyler, she'll literally freak!" replied Prince Northern-Western.
"I think I should tell Camacho about this adventure now that this is going to be an explorative trip through joke levels now."

"Woah, there are Valterri enemies?" Sux asked.

"From Knux's Torunament entry, yes...." Wraith replied.

"I think the decency of you guys talking should be surprassed by me trying to get that Luigi-" Skyler was stopped.

"Just don't!" Said Ness-Wednesday.

As an Ace enemey appeared a mature word from the music triggered everyone in the level.

"What?!" The four boys laughed confusingly, leaving Skyler ready to get sick of the boys.

"You know, I've got a better track to listen to, don't bother me until you guys play a CC7 joke level."

They stepped on a TAOK comic strip.
"Oh, this is moving?" thought Wraith.

"Oh no it is, run!" yelled Ness-Wednesday, his feet slipped and slid on the npc, donut platform to be exact.
They got there just in time, followed by a Bully with an npc generator on it's head.

They stepped carefully, it didn't take that long if you tink it didn't and they made it to the warp pipe.
"Oh thank goodness, I thought I would have to listen to this song even more." Ness-Wednesday spoken out loud.
He grabbed the checkpoint, and found some doors that lead to such areas.

"This is the best room!"

"Now if I were to-" Ness-Wednesday was shutted up afterwards.
"No one say anything as this music plays."

Well bascially, the section only has Venus Fire Traps, and moving platforms and suddenly, a platform thingy.
You know, like in SMB3?

"Oh my!" Skyler looked up and found a green switch block.
"I guess we should hit this and go." she did and they left the section, next was another Toad.

"This is the flea market!"

When the music started to play, Ness-Wednesday's eyes began to open.
---Stopping here because this is way too long, see you in Chapter 6.9, obviously.
Chapter 6.9 is the last part of chapter 6. ;)
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Re: Rise of the Shadow Kracko (SMBX community related)

Postby Alagirez » Fri Mar 25, 2016 11:53 pm

You didn't tell me that you released Chapter 6 (part 1) ....
I'm hyped for chapter 6 part 2...

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Re: Rise of the Shadow Kracko (SMBX community related)

Postby Ness-Wednesday » Sat Mar 26, 2016 12:03 am

Camacho wrote:You didn't tell me that you released Chapter 6 (part 1) ....
My mistake....

Also inb4: No Camacho 0/10, you didn't send a joke level.

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Re: Rise of the Shadow Kracko (SMBX community related)

Postby Alagirez » Sat Mar 26, 2016 12:04 am

Ness-Wednesday wrote: Also inb4: No Camacho 0/10, you didn't send a joke level.
ahhhhh

totally fitting video lmao
still waiting for chapter 6 part 2
don't worry i will maek an aj level

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Re: Rise of the Shadow Kracko (SMBX community related)

Postby Ness-Wednesday » Mon Mar 28, 2016 8:54 pm

So where's my feedback?
Is it at least better now that the crappy "before the story" thing is now gone for the better?
Joking.
Anyways, stay tuned for some more information about the SMBX episode version of this fanfic, I've gotten something "okay" going on.

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Re: Rise of the Shadow Kracko (SMBX community related)

Postby SMBXxer » Wed Mar 30, 2016 9:12 pm

Tinkerbell wrote:
Superiorstar wrote:

I would except it if it were in a better, much less taken seriously context, but it's not, so it comes off to me as weird high school drama.
oh boy I do hope this doesn't end up like Kep X Panda.


Though it would be funny if it did, to me at least.
Why kep? Wasn't it SMBXXER who made the thread that he doesn't love Panda.

Good study.
That's still somehow being talked about? Lol.

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Postby Ness-Wednesday » Sat Apr 09, 2016 11:27 pm

-------------------------------------------------------------------------------Chapter 6: Well I love to play joke levels! (final)--------------------------------------------------------------------
Spoiler: show
"Living rooms, bed rooms, diners, oh yeah, you can find them at the market!"

As the old Flea Market song played Ness-Wednesday had an old thought.
"I remember this...." he said.

"Okay, with all of those power-ups, it dosen't really make this level decent at all." Sux spoken.

"It's just like, it's just like a mini MOLE!" sang wraith.
Skyler and Sux laughed.

"Well, we still have all of these power-ups to pick up, let's just take them all and leave to the next section." said Skyler.

"Temmies shap es bettr then dis." Spinda replied.

"Temmie shops weren't even a thing until Halloween Hypnosis." said Ness-Wednesday.

Bowser was then for what reason again?

"Welcome to the Mushroom Kingdom's flea market!"

Skyler took all of the Fire Flowers, Sux took all of the Ice flowers, Wraith took all of the Tanooki suits, and Ness-Wednesday took all of the Hammer Suits.

"You all are such greedy People you know that?" said Bowser.

"I ges I'll tak te rest." said Spinda grabing the other left over power-ups, Ness-Wednesday grabbed a stop watch before Spinda took the very last one.

"Why I guess I can choose one egg." Skyler thought, taking a Yellow egg in which a yellow Yoshi spawned out of it.

"I'm going for a red..." Sux sighed and slid it on his back, the egg hatched and a red Yoshi spawned.

"I think I'm better taking a Blue yoshi, since they have better uses in challenges." Wraith took the blue egg and of course, a blue Yoshi spawned right after the egg hatched.

"Oi, sav purpol fr mi!" Spinda took the purple egg, but if you know what I was going to say, the egg hatched and a purple Yoshi spawned.

"I don't know about you guys, but I'm going with black." Prince Northern-Western, took the egg, and it hatched and as obvious, a black Yoshi spawned.

"Well, why not get to the third room, let's see what is going on in this level that is just, ironic...." Skyler rolled her eyes.
"I guest we could just go for a life farm in another place and find Snifitguy."

They exited and found the next Toad saying another message.
"This is the chicken room."

"I don't know what he means, but this would be dumb, I guess." said Skyler.
They entered the room and started to hear some dumb remix of a song that dubbed by chickens, even the enemies were Sidesteppers replaced with Cuccos.

"What?" Sux and Wraith wondered as they heard such ironic music and noticed Bowser was there again, why is he there?

"These are some really pissed off cuccos maaaaaan, i wouldn't try killing by jumping m8888888888!"

They came down and found a cucco walking.
"So they are sidesteppers right?" Skyler spoken.

"No one really uses Sidesteppers in a normal way any way, they are always replaced by another graphic!" Ness-Wednesday replied.

They kept on going, Sux and Wraith weren't pleased with such empty design, and also had a comment.

"Ugh, this is really trollish design, I must say this is a joke!" said Sux.

"Oh, the enemies in this level and the spam in this level look ahead of you guys!" Wraith contiued as they looked up at the many cuccos in one group.


"I think the pipe generator up ahead is good enough, fact there's one with a misplaced vase block." Ness-Wednesday replied.

They ran along up the stairs, and they found a set of character blocks that represented Mario, some made a really rude, American gester.

"How rude!" Sux yelled.

"What?" Skyler replied, "I don't know why you guys say that it's rude?"

"I know that the finger is different in your eyes becuase of fact you're from Japan, and I live in America, well you know on how you say sticking your pinkie out is rude?" Wraith asked.
"Well it's exactly like that."

"Rude?" Skyler asked.

"Oi vey..." Prince Northern-Western sighed, face palming his huge face in addition.
"Can we just get going, I really don't want to hear this...." and so, they continued onward.

They were met with some friendly Lakitus that were invisible and a bunch of enemy spam.

"Horros, lag!" said Sux.
"There are too many enemies in this level!"

"I can preach that..." replied Skyler they had to ride along, to be fair it wasn't really a long ride, and with their Yoshis, they were able to passby the enemies.
"By the way, these Ace shell generators are literally pointless."

"Yes, I don't have the decency to be here anymore." Ness-Wednesday said in a sacastic way.

An old YouTube comment appeared, "Unable to go up? Awww, that is sad and also weird."
Written by Bossedit8.

"Weee, I fall and collect different coins and hit these two switches." Wraith followed with Ness-Wednesday sarcastic voice.

After this, they left the room and entered the last door.

"This is the bathroom."

Skyler and Sux laughed out loud, leaving the other three looking at each other in wonder.

And there was a Toad with a crappy message, no really it was literally crappy, just look!
"dsafzdgxcbdfsxghhgfdxcvinyldasfgsdfergssucksfsgyzsfds"

"Excuse me?" Skyler spoken.

"Oi, dis is anothr ideot." Spinda said, as Wraith defeated the Toad and he flew offscreen.

"I enjoy bashing Toads the more I do it." Wraith spoken happily.

Skyler was the last one to enter the gray warp pipe, but the first to notice the color on the Aces, making her ready to get sick.
Ness-Wednesday had the same feeling.

"At least the Blocks and the background are trying to give out a good idea here." Wraith thought.
"P.S., the music is like true Justin Beiber is a faggot!"

"You know you pointing out one of the most obvious things in the world isn't gonna get the fact that we are still playing these levels and we haven't caught Snifitguy yet!" Ness-Wednesday raged at Wraith.
"Well, I do have an idea for a pardoy of this song."

"You make parodies?" Sux wondered.

"Only the lyrics are changed for good reasons for the better." Prince Northern-Western replied.
"That reminds me, have you guys heard of my song Shut up and Warlock Punch?"

After such clusters of narrow and cramped areas, they found a star, but what the response to Ness-Wednesday was pretty much the same.
"No!"
They continued to dive down, until the found a Key and later a key hole.

"Hey, I never knew you could do that." Skyler thought with an art style look.

"Yeah, you just have to spam the jump button." Sux replied.

Spinda tried to exit, until warps attacked once more and....

"This background again?" wondered Ness-Wednesday.

"ARE YOU READY FOR A-" Spinda was speaking with such good english yet he was stopped when a bron Valtteri TAOK thingy appeared.

"It's been a loooong time, how have you been?"
"I've neem really busy being dead."
"You know, after you killed me."

"Who?" asked Sux, Skyler and Wraith came up with the same.

"I have no idea...." Ness-Wednesday replied, leaving Spinda being shutted up.

"Sorry, but having to crush us with switch blocks is bull crap." Skyler spoken and started to stab him.

One... Two... Three... Do we even need to go through this?
Four... Five... Six... "Yes this music is from the Mother series." Ness-Wednesday interrupted the narrator.
Anyways....

The Valtteri guy was dead, but what came?
Well Snifitguy that's for sure.

"So you didn't grab the secret star?" Snifitguy asked.
"That was your only chance."

"Well I do-" Ness-Wednesday was stopped with Skyler interrupting him.

"Fine then, it's time to show off a level made by one of the best Talkhaus level designers there are, Willhart." Snifitguy pressed the usual button, leading them to CC7, Willhart- Reetusmanslevel 70th place 3.652, first entry to the contest.

"Um, this is only SMB1 platforming, I don't find this to be a joke level, nor I think it looks great." said Sux.

"Oh, this is that one level..." Ness-Wednesday spoken.

"The music is nice at least." said Skyler as they continued on.
Clouds and ? blocks were quite decent together.

As they continued on, they found a vine which was SMB3 styled.
"Okay, I'm not going to complain about it not being smb1 recolored." said Wraith.
"I've seen enough clash already i.e. SVLC 2016!"

Prince Northern-Western looked up, noticing a floating mushroom platform, and more clouds.
"Okay that's not looking good." he said.

They jumped from one cloud to the other, the upward section was a little too crowded with clouds.
"That's also bad design." Skyler spoken as her eyes focused on what was further ahead.
"The blocks seem to be a little too close and are also a little bland at times."
"I don't think it's far enough for a challenge, also I think it looks a little short."

They suddenly approached a cat like rainbow head.
Skyler's eyes sparkeled.

"Etz teh Temmie wah!" Spinda yelled memeisticly.
Ness-Wednesday stopped and tried to grab leading the five to a rainbow pit.

In the snap of two seconds, the level was a complete mess of Vanilla graphics, and randomly a dog.
Ness-Wednesday refused to watch the blind visuals.
"Horros!" he cried and shut his eyes.

"I've never on my life had my eyes go blind from rainbow road." Skyler said sacrastically.
Sux suddenly slipped as everyone but Wraith wanted to ride throughout the rest of the level.
They were followed by a sudden fall, where they met a dog and a checkpoint.

"I see a door, this that simple?" asked Wraith.
They entered the door and found a cat king.

"Ah no!" Wraith yelled.
As he noticed the SMB3 Bowser, which was ready to ground pound after shooting three fireballs.

"RUN!" Ness-Wednesday yelled at Skyler as he pushed her from getting hit by the SMB3 Bowser, leading in a rainbow effect.
"Wow that's actually a cool idea, I think I might use that for something."

"This is actually pretty easy, I don't have to use wariotime on this boss, and it's actually fun." Wraith thought.
"Compared to the others that only make you throw bombs at the same AI."

After three sets of two blocks were destroyed, a ?ball appeared.
However, it despawned as Snifitguy appeared once again.

"Bravo five group, or whatever you're called, you only have one level left for a big surprise!" He said trying to pretend to be delighted.

"What about CC5-CC1?" Ness-Wednesday asked.
"Was there even a joke level in CC1?"

"Well just surprass your question, it's time to play my CC6 joke level, Fun Dark Grass level!" Snifitguy hit a button and the group was transported to the old 2013 level.

"Well I guess I'm not the only one who knows Kevin Macleod's songs in the community, at least outside of Talkhaus." Ness-Wednesday implied the comment.
"Let's start off by saying that this level is bland, and empty."

"Go on-" replied Skyler.

"There is an unfair Banzai bill.... A horribly placed grinder along a blind jump..." he continued.
"Only one Rex..."

"I think you're a little-" Sux was interrupted as Ness-Wednesday continued.

"Why in the world is there lava... and also nice platform btw!"
"Oh and look at the 61-up in total because of the dragon coins!"

"Finally, this is the end!" Wraith yelled.

"... Short goal tape."
Everyone was onTicked in reply to the final quote.

"STOP!" Snifitguy flew and stopped them.
The visuals changed to a normal SMB3 airship.

"I think you guys had enough fun for the better, time to reveal the power behind you!"
Ace stepped out ready to attack.

"HOLY!" Skyler freaked out.

"Everyone all aboard the Sux train!" All five but prince Northern-Western got on his back and the four fled, suddenly falling down on two sudden beings.

"Your gun isn't gonna scare me." Ness-Wednesday stepped back ready to fight him.

"Oh so brave, you know if you get hit from a these special type of bullet bills, they'll all be hearing the BBC video 1990 tune like in your-" as Snifitguy was talking, Ness-Wednesday dashed into him slashing his sword downward.

"OIOIOIOIOI!!!" possessed Ace yelled fighting back, trying to shoot the boy, holy crap!

"YAY!" Ness-Wednesday yelled, doing a Flip Glide by passing the deadly npcs.
He enjoyed running about avoiding all of the bullet bills that were shot.
Meanwhile the four recovered from a fall on top of someone who was Camacho.

"Apologies from that." Skyler began, "We were running from a sudden death by what ever those TAOK tofu people are."

Ness-Wednesday is a really jumpy boy, running fast and soon stopping in the middle only to say-
"TAOK SUCKS!" he said while performing a Flying Scotsman Attack.
Crashing through the glass window, leaving Snifitguy shocked and Ace in wonder.

He snuck behind Ace, poking his back, Ace fired but he countered on time!
Ace wasn't going to give up, he was ready to fire even more!

"HAHAHAHA!" Ness-Wednesday laughed running around the airship causing it ready to explode in two.
Upside-down, he glew in purple again, Ace shot three times but the projectiles got reflected.
Ace was launched along with Ness-Wednesday as the ship exploded leading Snifitguy fleeing.

"You are lucky he isn't a swordsman!" said Snifitguy.
"You won't be so lucky next time!"

Ace being in prince Northern-Western's hands in result of Ace ready to fire one last time along with a quote.
"Why do I even-" SLAM!
They fell on top of a dead building, in which idk what it was.

"Nessy, are you okay?" Camacho asked in worry.

"Sure I am."

"Are you hurt?" Skyler was also concerned.

"Of course I am, what do you think I am a whimp?"

"Thas mein he isn't humawn!" Spinda spoken.

"You know..." Ness-Wednesday was confused.
"I don't have the same blood type so I can't really answer that."

"What just happened?" Ace wondered.

"You were captured by some bandits working with this evil thing named Shadow Kracko, he had sent seven people to posses seven of you guys and you were on of the unlucky seven people." replied Wraith.

"I only remeber Knux being there?"

"At last, he is one of the bandits and it is a true thing!" Ness-Wednesday said.
"We are on our way to the Talkhaus, they have a hospital there and they'll be sure you're okay, that was a mighty fall on my arms if you'll like to question me."

"That was what I was going to tell you." said Sailor Catastrophe.
"We could take you in our Animal Jamobile."

"Well, I think a tedious walk is like a year far so anyone preaches my opinion on going is a good idea?" said Wraith.
All but Ness-Wednesday agreed, who he is a walker not a driver.
They all traveled in the strange mobile.
Meanwhile a parasol Shadow Doo was spying them, only to know they had were close to meeting his master.

"Master, Master!" said the dark Waddle Doo.
"The three have teamed up with two other people, and are close to defeating all of your army!"

"Drat!" Shadow Kracko was dissapointed.
"Only three are left as of now!"
"I need to find a distraction before they reach the Racko;hub source!"

On camera came several people doing a thing, listen do you think I even care what they are doing alright?

"I think I've just found the right source!" he focused on who where to be Zlakerboy357 and Darkonios Mavakar, flying over the Templet sea.
"If I spawn this poison Tomato on top of him, he'll swallow it and he'll become Zlakershadow604!" he laughed evily, preparing to fire.

"So you think Quill will be mad that we blew up ToB?" asked Darkonious.

"Totally with you and your Chill Clawbster arm!" yelled Zlakerboy357.
"You should know that other people like to play the older episodes, and ToBX is the current lead of the number of entries."
"If I was to ask a person who is unfortunately dumber than you to do so, it would be-" a poisonous object spawned and in his mouth it went.

The two started to fall in doom into the ocean, with Zlakerboy in danger of being treasure of the future.
Shadow Kracko watched the two fall possibly to their doom...
Suddenly, a purple bubbling flying Megaman flew into the sky, Shadow Kracko was real lucky.

"HAHAHAHA, it worked, Nessy and those four brats won't be finding a good challenge anymore!" he said.
Darkonious fainted from inhaling the poisonous bubble's fume.

"And we've got some company when our delivery arrives." said Shadow Doo.
The two both laughed evily, with some voices in the background following along.
Has Shadow Kracko finally got what he needed to Destroy the 5/6 heroes?
And who is the person they'll meet in the Talkhaus.

Find out in the next chapter of Rise of the Shadow Kracko!
Chapter 7: The visit to butt city!
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