Rise of the Shadow Kracko (SMBX community related)

[snoruntpyro]

The series continues.

Woah who is this sexy and attractive gal with the lovely voice

[underFlo]

The series continues.

Woah who is this sexy and attractive gal with the lovely voice

It's Pichu.

[Enjl]

The series continues.

Woah who is this sexy and attractive gal with the lovely voice

It's Pichu.

upvoted

[Alagirez]

]edit : why as303298 called captain 5-3?

I think it's because of his CC 11level, that DKC styled one.

Anyway, here's a 100% official artwork:

wow shadow kracko vs rinka
im hyped

[Ness-Wednesday]

Someone make this an episode or a level! That would be awesome. ^°^

What's this?
A smb3 overhaul based on this fan fiction?
What a leak... (No really this isn't a leak, it's real, there will be an episode!)

Edit: In addition, after the final chapter is released, I'll ask if anyone wants to voice act anyone who has appeared in this fan fiction (yes Lunalua will be used).
However, Ness-Wednesday's spot would be already taken because I would be voice acting myself.

[Enjl]

I want to voice-act Marina.

[underFlo]

I want to voice-act ultimate rinka

*rinka noises*

[snoruntpyro]

i want to voice act spinda

[Alagirez]

I want to voice act Psuedo-dino

[Julia Pseudo]

I'd be fine with that Harvey, but I'm not even in the story!

[Darkonius Mavakar]

I want to voice act chill clawbster

[Ness-Wednesday]

-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Chapter 4:

Flippy Ghost hut, buy aw s************!!

"We've been traveling for 3.... f***ing hours, no s***** events are in sight...." said Captain 5-3.

"Is Ness-Wednesday doing okay, he seems to go insane on the look." Skyler was quite concerned.

"I'm Usually LIke tHis...." Ness-Wednesday's eyes were a sight of something wrong with him, "I'm jUst like ThiS when I'M in A hot pLace wIth No water for A WhiLE!"

"I don't find this kid normal, his grammar being messed up is scaring my butt out!" Captain 5-3 whispered to Skyler, she shook her head.

"I'm gonna..... beee.... your....." Ness-Wednesday fell on the sand and fainted.

Skyler pouted, "Oh no, I knew this will happen sooner or later."

She picked up the fainted boy, "He's so heavy, he's not even fat and yet he weighs like a 160 lbs!" Skyler walked the last 56 miles with 5-3 and they made it.

"Who are you three people?" Pseudo-dino walked and noticed them asking them a serious question, "You shouldn't even be here, they'll erase your butts!"

"I'm Princess-Skyler, this 10 ton guy here is Ness-Wednesday, he passed out 57 miles from here."

"Captain 5-3, or off course as303.... just called me Wraith Adamknight okay?"

Pseudo-dino looked around the area, "listen you're wanted here, the leader is such a freak here. Do as I say got it?"

"Oh... What? Ness-Wednesday got up and rolled on Skyler back, "butt...."

"Here you go pal, fresh water 100% from the Enchanted Undergardens." Pseudo-dino gave the boy a glass, Ness-Wednesday drank it and he seemed calm.

"Aw come on, did I wet myself?"

"Man, I need to stop drinking water evry 20 minutes!" Ness-Wednesday looked up at the three users.

"No, you haven't." Skyler answered, "If you don't want to think like that every time you get up, don't be drinking 7 cups a day."

It's no wonder why the 3- "Ah faw!" Spinda stopped.

"Why yeou still here, you shawldn't have cawmed!"

"What?" Ness-Wednesday saw a poster and....

Spoiler: show

"Hey, that's poorly made and it's obvious that it was done in MS Paint!"

"That looks like Lucas but with hair colored brown and a poorly executed "You tried!" star." Skyler replied.

"You understand why?" Pseudo-dino asked.
"Becuase you literally tried, but failed to escape from us!"

The ground started to shake!
The floor dropped open, the four have fallen into a trap!

It was quiet for another minute, he got up and noticed people trapping him around the quiet dusty place.

"Why are we here, I see like a dozen of people I don't even know!" said Captain 5-3.

"You have brought chaos to this town, therefore you shall be erased!" Deviantart user Choko-Chakku spoken.

"We shall use a Ban Flower on them, Bias shall be renewed!" Mudkip requested.

"Silence!" "Bring them over here.... like now!"

"Something doesn't seem right." Ness-Wednesday wondered.

"Am I missing out on something?" Skyler replied.

"None shall speak behind her back!" Zeldamaster12 ordered the four to do so.

Some ? blocks were upside down, a boo was twisted somehow.

"D***it, it's this b**** I knew something was up!" Captain 5-3 yelled.

"Why would I think someone would be controlling this over a dumb ban?!"

"I shall not recommend the 5-3 guy, only the two guys up to the danger."

The ruler stepped out, it was such a surprise that it was....

"Vinyl?"

"Yeah, you'd think Shadow Kracko wouldn't hire a banned user?" Vinly answered.

"What's your problem, thought the gimmick was still a crappy dead meat thing?"

"No, in fact I don't even know what the heck happened in Knux's forum!" Ness-Wednesday replied.
"Knux is also a banned user, yet he's already fled!"

"Who's Knux?" questioned Skyler.
"And what's this stuff about him having a forum?"

"Well...." Captain 5-3 began, "Knux's forum ran for a few years before the SMBX forums was started by Joey, and I'll tell you that-"

"Enough, you shall suffer from faith!" Vinly praised her arms, "Behold your new nemesis!"

Bossedit8 stepped out, his hair was purple and his body was tan instead of white.

"Gack, what happened to you?" Ness-Wednesday stepped behind Skyler, "You're insanely scary now!"

"I shall skip all of your things, and judge your levels so I can't do butt on you!"

"Ummm... I-" Bossedit started attacking the boy as he was a CinematX boss thing.

"Oh, you're just one of those things...." Ness-Wednesday didn't really need to move a lot.

Bossedit8 jumped, dashed and ram into the boy unfortunately missing.

He attacked, Flip Guide but Bossedit8 jumped at the same time!

He got hit as well, but Bossedit8 still kept on attacking!

He summoned fireballs, Iceballs and Hammers!

"Okay, what's the point of that?" Ness-Wednesday didn't understand what it was.

Bossedit8 spin-jumped three times making the ground shake nervously.

He then dashed again, Ness-Wednesday countered but Bossedit8 kept on going!

"He must be immune to flinching if so!" Ness-Wednesday wondered.

Then, Bossedit8 skipped a platform, it was quite a weird thing.

"So I guess we now know his attack pattern." Skyler spoken out loud.

"Why not?" Ness-Wednesday, using Bloodthirsty dance.

Needaleaf, Ness-Wednesday became light as a pillow!

Wow, I can float with this thing?

Ness-Wednesday floated slowly, and all of a sudden he stomped on him.

"Ow..... you...." Bossedit8 began to turn into normal.

"He's starting to invert back to normal, keep on attacking!" Skyler yelled.

Ness-Wednesday attacked, and all of sudden it was only two more hits left!
The dark possessed side was quite mad, he started to perform a new attack!
He was spinning around in midair, and when stopped, he was set to come crashing down!
He was suddenly fooled into a pit, defeating him instantly!

"I guess I don't have to do any stuff about him...." Ness-Wednesday pouted.

"What? Should I do now?" Vinyl questioned.

Ness-Wednesday came up with a sneaky idea, "Just say.... you're an Audino!"

And so he did, but all of a sudden Captain 5-3 attacked Vinly, "GIMME EXP, GIMME EXP!"

Captain 5-3 kept on leveling up!

"Why not?" Ness-Wednesday joined him and they were both attacking her!

Later, Vinyl Scratch despawned and Bossedit8 respawned, "You've beaten another one of whoever are those nasty gang members are, now I've got a request for you, please flip this coin over at Knux's forum."

"But it's dead now, Knux fled anyways." Ness-Wednesday replied.

"Just, don't mind the ruins even though that's pretty much everything that his forum is now." Bossedit8 quoted.

"I think I'll find a way to go upside-down for the exit." Ness-Wednesday started to walk after he said his quote.
"Too bad, this could now be done with Lunalua right?"

The four members shook their heads and left the area, and headed their way to Knux's dead forum.

"I don't even know why we need to go a disabeled forum if there's no one there anyways?" Captain 5-3 replied.

"Since I'm now a Lv.3, it's best to help him out." Ness-Wednesday lead them on his walk to the old, long gone forums.
"People really need to stop humiliating themselves though, it's not worthy for me to see."

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Next Chapter: Flip the coin, it won't do a thing to you!
Chapter 5 will be released after CC12, I thought I would release this for something.

[Alagirez]

chapter 4?

ok let's see
-_-
no H36D -5
good story +1
other comments : nice la
6/10
moved to pretty good
-_-
I hope chapter 5 contains animal jam reference

[Mable]

The censoring destroy it for me.

If you don't like swearing or don't want others to see it just replace the words with something else in the story. Imagine someone wrotes a book and censores it.

[Enjl]

I think this fanfiction could use a bit less public humiliation and a bit more funnies.

[snoruntpyro]

fyi i'm older than you

also fuck you

[Julia Pseudo]

lmao i'm in this now? will do a dramatic reading later

[Lukas Old Account]

*Still saved from being in.

Also, this fanfic gets better every chapter. Keep the funnies salty.

[Alagirez]

------------------------------- Eagerly waiting for chapter 5 -----------------------------

[Ness-Wednesday]

-----------------------------------------------------------------------------Chapter 5: Flip the coin, it won't do a thing to you!-------------------------------------------------------------------

"Forum down?" Princess Skyler stopped seeing a sign saying "Forum Down!", this looked creepy to her.

"Ah, this is sad, I thought his forum went well." Prince Northern-Western kicked a sign, only to say more.
"But this was closed over a year ago, and no one has done anything about it!"

"I guess with Joey destroying it and banning Knux, this is what happens." Captain 5-3 stopped by to see the pile of uncollected scrap.

"But what does that have to do with the fact his forum died?" Skyler asked, "did they ever see the existing Lunalua?"

"I doubt that, and I certainly think this forum died when Lunalua was a thing."


"If I try to get any of it, I get launched back?" Ness-Wednesday wondered as he tried to collect a thread.
He got launched harshly, he crashed on his head when landing.

"Well, you're mental now." Skyler answered.

"Excuse me? Girl I've been hit in the face by a bowling ball and did that kill me?" Ness-Wednesday is hard-headed, eh?

"I have my phone with me, I'll call my friend Jack and he'll hit you harder!" Skyler replied.

Spinda wanted to say a comment, but her loud and beautiful voice made him think twice about speaking.
"Oi, won't say anitheyng thawn."

Wraith typed "shadowstar" just to get the problem over with.
"Hey, I've got something for you!"

It was one of the reviews from CC6, Ness-Wednesday's least favorite CC only being close to CC3 on his least favorite list.

Spoiler: show

Ragont™'s review for MECHDRAGON777's CC6 level:
This one needs a lot of fixing. For one, there are quite a few random, "filler" areas. For instance, the sign on the third level up in the second section says "Hope you are able to survive!".
Another thing, you can easily get stuck if you accidentally hit an elevator block on your way out dodging the balls bouncing towards you.
As a side note to that, when you press the blue switch block, the elevator blocks both become "OFF".
...Yeah, I'm honestly confused as to where to go after I activate the second elevator and hit the blue switch again.
At the very least the tileset was nice (but the pirahna plants clash a bit...)
Better luck next contest.

1.75/10

"Wait?" Ness-Wednesday looked at him, " Did you say, MECHDRAGON777?"

"Oh come on, don't start this trash again!" Yeah, he shouldn't have said his name out loud because.

"Hah, MECHDRAGON, MECHRAGON, MECHDRAGON777!"

"Stop that, it's overused already and he got 11th in CC12!"Wraith replied.

....

Skyler loved what he said, so therefore, she stepped slowly and....
"MECHDRAGON777!"

"Skyler?"

They both laughed and kept on saying the username's well... name until a voice interrupted their fun.

"Look at the unmature people you guys are." said Wrath.
"I think you two should relax or else-"

"It's not fair...."

"Is that Sux?" Ness-Wednesday wondered when he saw a user on top of a pile of archived threads.

"Is the community, chainging to something worse?"
"Where has all the hyped for non linear levels gone too?"
"41rst, out of 83 contestants?"

"No." Skyler replied.
"But tells young pal, what's wrong?"

"I submit my best level yet to CC12, and I get the worst score I've gotten so far!"

"But wasn't your worst, Lava Hole in Tournament 3?" Wraith asked.

"That was before, I mean right now, Kunx's forum is gone for good, the SMBX forums is today."

"I'll accept the CC12 reviews, so I can improve, but I have a feeling something will go wrong."
"I can see a very bad designed, linear level winning an official contest."

"Are you kidding about a linear level?" Ness-Wednesday shouted, "I love non linear levels with bgo spam, "They're my favorite!"
"We should start a riot against who ever decided to turn this community into the talkhaus!"

"And also stop Shadow Kracko?" Skyler asked.
"You should be focused on that, before you go into a drama fest!"

"Why do you think I still have this coin to flip?" He flipped the coin and it smacked his nose hard.
"Ouch?"
"How about we don't start a riot about design, and just focus on our Journey."

"Oi, that saunds leik a gohd idea." Spinda replied.

"Can I come with you guys?" Wondered Sux.
"Shadow Kracko would apparently send out linear levels, so I think I can help you guys and stop linear levels for good."

"Why not?" Captain 5-3 replied.

"What ever he said." Ness-Wednesday continued.

"Why someone your strength fighting over results?"Skyler asked.

"If I had to stay here, I would've had no buisness with you."

Ness-Wednesday replied calmly, "Please stop worrying about scores and join us, if you don't have limbs what do you want to me?"
He started to climb on his back.

"My guts won't harm a happy relation-"

"BTW, I'm married with this Villager and Skyler here has a guy already." Ness-Wednesday wanted to clear that out again.
"Captain 5-3 had went through this with both of us."

"Therefore, I do have a choice." Sux replied.

They all cheered followed by Sux with Prince Northern-Western on his back, "We should head to the Department of Joke Levels, someone might be there to help us find the Talkhaus!"

"But don't you hate the Talkhaus?"

"Only the levels from them." Sux replied to Ness-wednesday.
"Why would I hate the Talkhaus themselves?"

They head on their way to find some directions in the Department of Joke levels.
Five traveling wanderers, all laughing and enjoying a walk while the sun rises, not like the Shadow Kracko....
But the way Radiant-Wednesday feels in Spring 2k14.

"Who is Radiant-Wednesday?" Skyler asked.

"Well..." Ness-Wednesday began, "There are a ton of mes, there's Dark-Wednesday, Radiant-Wednesday, Retro-Wednesday and Sledge-Wednesday for example."

"I'm not sure how that works?" asked Captain 5-3.
"But I don't think we'll be going to somewhere I like."

Next chapter: Well I love Joke levels!
When.... Idk, obviously!