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Chocolate Wonderland

Posted: Thu Dec 10, 2015 6:26 pm
by YellowMe
"I'll post levels soon" he said. He lied. Yeah, I know it's actually been a long time since I've introduced myself, but... I just didn't have time.

Anyways, I have finally uploaded a level. I think it's okay. Here is the link:
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And here are the screenshots:
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Enjoy!!!

Oh and can someone tell me if I did the uploading right?

Re: Chocolate Wonderland

Posted: Thu Dec 10, 2015 7:24 pm
by SanicHegehog
I am having some problems with downloading the level, but I think it is just me

Re: Chocolate Wonderland

Posted: Thu Dec 10, 2015 8:29 pm
by PixelPest
Please upload the level and it's files in a .zip or .rar format. No one wants to download individual files for every custom used.

Re: Chocolate Wonderland

Posted: Thu Dec 10, 2015 10:43 pm
by Enjl
PixelPest wrote:Please upload the level and it's files in a .zip or .rar format. No one wants to download individual files for every custom used.
Upper right corner: Download as a zip file. It's not even hard to find.

Re: Chocolate Wonderland

Posted: Fri Dec 11, 2015 3:30 am
by Alagirez
Judging for the screens, this level looks nice. The design looks pretty nice and like the chocolate atmosphere because they look delicious tbh.

Re: Chocolate Wonderland

Posted: Fri Dec 11, 2015 4:09 am
by YellowMe
PixelPest wrote:Please upload the level and it's files in a .zip or .rar format. No one wants to download individual files for every custom used.
Figures. I actually thought of that just as I was about to go to sleep. I'll fix it now.

Re: Chocolate Wonderland

Posted: Fri Dec 11, 2015 4:28 am
by Reiuji Utsuho
YellowMe wrote:Figures. I actually thought of that just as I was about to go to sleep. I'll fix it now.
Thank you for fixing that. ~ ^_^

Re: Chocolate Wonderland

Posted: Fri Dec 11, 2015 4:30 am
by PaperMarioFan
Mmmmm... chooocolate))) This level looks very sweety ;)

Re: Chocolate Wonderland

Posted: Fri Dec 11, 2015 3:16 pm
by SanicHegehog
I found a bug
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I can not read the text, because it is not centered, I don't know if it is just me but yeah

Re: Chocolate Wonderland

Posted: Fri Dec 11, 2015 4:09 pm
by YellowMe
SanicHegehog wrote:I found a bug
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I can not read the text, because it is not centered, I don't know if it is just me but yeah
Actually, I experienced this before in SMBX, but not on this level. I just restarted my computer and it worked just fine.

Re: Chocolate Wonderland

Posted: Wed Dec 23, 2015 11:58 am
by Cedrik
SanicHegehog wrote:I found a bug
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I can not read the text, because it is not centered, I don't know if it is just me but yeah
Did you use cheats?

Re: Chocolate Wonderland

Posted: Sat Jan 02, 2016 3:34 pm
by ShadowStarX
Chocolate Wonderland

Design & Gameplay: Okay
+ This level had a fair length, it wasn't long but it wasn't too short either. The coin placement is p. nice. I also like the way you did the sky bonus room with the cloud replacing the boo graphics.
| The level was quite enjoyable, but not that fun. The NPC placement was mostly moderate too, but at some points it wasn't that good. For example, the parakoopas at the slope weren't really easy to see, they can cause a sudden cheap hit. The level's difficulty was also a bit random. It was mostly medium but sometimes it became harder than necessary (I mean, it's not way too hard, just not too fitting)
- The chocolate platforms shouldn't be solid from the bottom, because it looks and plays really awkward, I'd recommend to have invsible smb2 or smb3 bridge pieces, or sizables. Also, you should make the water go off-screen on the bottom, because the player can die very easily when he/she sinks down a bit too much. (it should go off-screen by 1 or 2 blocks)

Atmosphere & Visuals: Okay
+ The level didn't have any clashy graphics or cutoffs, at least I didn't find any.
| The level's atmosphere was moderate, but the music didn't fit the level too well. The graphics were decently looking, though.

Score: 5/10
An enjoyable, moderate quality level with some flaws in it
Moved to 'Average'