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This is a jungle level i made that was going to be for a contest on my forum. But since the forum is closed now and it closed before
the actual deadline, i decided to post the level here. Basically the level has a WIDE enemy variety and the level is
around 10 to 20 minutes long. So enjoy!
Screenshots: Reghrhre - Jungle Grass Tileset
Legend-tony980 - SMB3 Recolors
Sednaiur - Cobrat Replacing Grand Goomba, SMB2 X( Ninjis, and Tall Piranha Plant
Sednaiur and FanOfSMBX - Friendly Shy Guy
Mario Jr - Spiny over Koopa Troopa
Darkchao - Dancing Flowers
Cosmic - Lakitu's Cloud
Valtteri - Lakitu, spinies, hammer bros., Sideways Piranhas
AirShip - Goombas
??? - SMW Styled Koopas
Yoshi64 - Original Running Ninji Sprites
Download:
http://www.mediafire.com/download/yccpb ... Jungle.zip
And I would like feedback and a review.

Protip: Make your levels shorter in the future. Nobody wants to sit through 20 minutes of gameplay unless at least 4 midpoints are provided.

Enjl wrote:Protip: Make your levels shorter in the future. Nobody wants to sit through 20 minutes of gameplay unless at least 4 midpoints are provided.

or unless you are me... 20 minute level! I should Speed-run this on camera.

MECHDRAGON777 wrote:

Enjl wrote:Protip: Make your levels shorter in the future. Nobody wants to sit through 20 minutes of gameplay unless at least 4 midpoints are provided.

or unless you are me... 20 minute level! I should Speed-run this on camera.

But when it comes to SMBX being you is the worst thing that can happen.

Don't listen to mechdragon, enjl's right, don't make 20 min. Long levels

Darkonius Mavakar wrote:

MECHDRAGON777 wrote:

Enjl wrote:Protip: Make your levels shorter in the future. Nobody wants to sit through 20 minutes of gameplay unless at least 4 midpoints are provided.

or unless you are me... 20 minute level! I should Speed-run this on camera.

But when it comes to SMBX being you is the worst thing that can happen.

Don't listen to mechdragon, enjl's right, don't make 20 min. Long levels

Okay, listen up.
There's this weird little thing called "Having an opinion."
Keep in mind that people won't always agree with you. There are some out there who enjoy 20 min. long levels, and just because you don't like 'em, doesn't mean they're bad. I'm genuinely impressed when someone manages to keep a level interesting for 20 minutes.

Next time make a 5 minute level and see how it gets a score 2 points higher

REVIEW OF WATERFALL JUNGLE BY SUPERMARIO12345

TOO LONG
This level is too long and because of the length it gets really uninteresting and boring as you just keep seeing basic platforming and enemies so the gameplay doesn't get different and it's just 15 minutes of being bored. The little detour keys don't really help the length or the fact that it's uninteresting, they just feel tacked on.

GAMEPLAY
Aside from getting boring quickly because you didn't put enough interesting variety into the gameplay, It's good. There is also a part with 2 trouters that is basically impossible if it was done correctly, but you can stand on them when they're under the screen. Also the first key is in a separate section which is not a problem but at the end of the section there is 2 chasing koopas (which i mean, is a bit overkill).

SCORE:
5/10
Your level design is definitely getting

I guess the review was okay, but i actually DID take into account that this level could be too long so i was trying to make not
too long.

MECHDRAGON777 wrote:

Enjl wrote:Protip: Make your levels shorter in the future. Nobody wants to sit through 20 minutes of gameplay unless at least 4 midpoints are provided.

or unless you are me... 20 minute level! I should Speed-run this on camera.

Looks like Mechdragon found his soulmate.

Waddle Derp wrote: Okay, listen up.
There's this weird little thing called "Having an opinion."
Keep in mind that people won't always agree with you. There are some out there who enjoy 20 min. long levels, and just because you don't like 'em, doesn't mean they're bad. I'm genuinely impressed when someone manages to keep a level interesting for 20 minutes.

It a lot harder to make a genuinely good level that's 20 minutes long.