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Yep. I honestly never thought I would do some, but I eventually did.
Check out my first drawing for my account here.

http://johnthewhiteyoshi.deviantart.com ... -564941223

It can be quite addicting to be honest, so don't be too surprised if you make more in future. It looks good in terms of proportion, though the feet may be a little bigger than normal. Though large feet such as those are common in more abstract drawings and artworks, so that isn't a big issue at all. I can see you've got a good sense of dimensions so far too, which will help make drawings stand out much more. Good luck with anything else you add to your account, and of course happy drawing!

Here's another one...I don't know if PaperPlayerX copied my style or I copied his...but this is the feedback we got.

http://johnthewhiteyoshi.deviantart.com ... -565030629

to be blunt:

1-your coloring needs a lot of work, you're leaving tons of blank spaces.
2-work on the shoe proportions, i know they're yoshis, but since you're giving them an anthro body, you should reduce their feet size.
3-draw on white paper and scan it, to improve uploading quality
4*) please don't describe poses or where they came from, it's unecessary

... uuhhh.. the tails look like theyre growing out between your legs out of nothing

miracles

Nien wrote:to be blunt:

1-your coloring needs a lot of work, you're leaving tons of blank spaces.
2-work on the shoe proportions, i know they're yoshis, but since you're giving them an anthro body, you should reduce their feet size.
3-draw on white paper and scan it, to improve uploading quality
4*) please don't describe poses or where they came from, it's unecessary

1-Not trying to.
2-I know, I'm working on it.
3-Don't have in my house, nor does my mother want to use the print.
4-...This was the only unnecessary one to complain about.

On the top of that, no compliment? That doesn't look good on you in anyway, just to let you know.

John The White Yoshi wrote:

Nien wrote:to be blunt:

1-your coloring needs a lot of work, you're leaving tons of blank spaces.
2-work on the shoe proportions, i know they're yoshis, but since you're giving them an anthro body, you should reduce their feet size.
3-draw on white paper and scan it, to improve uploading quality
4*) please don't describe poses or where they came from, it's unecessary

1-Not trying to.
2-I know, I'm working on it.
3-Don't have in my house, nor does my mother want to use the print.
4-...This was the only unnecessary one to complain about.

On the top of that, no compliment? That doesn't look good on you in anyway, just to let you know.

Don't expect to be complimented just because you drew something, that's not how critiscism works.

John The White Yoshi wrote: On the top of that, no compliment? That doesn't look good on you in anyway, just to let you know.

why would i compliment something that isn't very good?