level 1-1 my first level

[minus220]

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Hey guys this is my first level. let me know what you think. good bad or otherwise. I've used only smb3 elements to keep things simple while I get the hang of the editor.

http://www.mediafire.com/download/uscytkq0g2eudeg

[ShadowStarX]

Minus220's first level review
Since it's a vanilla level, I won't seperate atmosphere and design

The level had alright difficulty in my opinion. I also haven't found any cutoffs and the music fits well enough.
This level had okay gameplay and I didn't find it unfun. The NPC placement is decent. The level also has a fair amount background objects.
This level was really short. The bricks around the sizeables (after the first pipe) are placed weirdly. The bonus room also has clash between the blocks and the background. You should place less coins near to each other but there should be more bunches of coins. (for example: 15 times 4 is better than 3 times 20)

Score: 3/10
Decent first level with some flaws, but not game-breaking ones
Moved to 'Average'