WIP Graphics Showcase 2

arcade999 · Postby **arcade999** » Tue Mar 14, 2017 3:01 pm

Snessy the duck wrote:
kojimkj wrote:
DarkWolf658 wrote:I decided to finally finish these. Feel free to rip (enlarged 5x)
Spoiler: show

Doki Doki Panic?
Yes, that's it.

Ooooh, it look interesting.

FanofSMBX · Postby **FanofSMBX** » Tue Mar 14, 2017 4:07 pm

DarkWolf658 wrote:I decided to finally finish these. Feel free to rip (enlarged 5x)

I would recommend to submit those to MFGG and Spriter's Resource!

Postby **PROX** » Tue Mar 14, 2017 11:45 pm

fixed the floor finally.

TLtimelord · Postby **TLtimelord** » Wed Mar 15, 2017 12:18 am

RPG_Magician wrote:

Dungeon Tileset I made yesterday. Still expanding it.

Pillars are a little dark, I'd add a bit more contrast to your bricks too.

Alagirez · Postby **Alagirez** » Wed Mar 15, 2017 2:30 am

PROX wrote:fixed the floor finally.

I really like the filler (or what called is it), the texture is really smooth. Also really like the shading ok the fence and the pillar. Good job :)

FireyPaperMario · Postby **FireyPaperMario** » Wed Mar 15, 2017 8:28 am

PROX wrote:fixed the floor finally.

These tiles look like something from Wario Land 2 imo.

PersonNamedUser · Postby **PersonNamedUser** » Wed Mar 15, 2017 9:48 am

Yeah, I finally Redesigned More Of My Giant SMB3 Custom Giant Insects:

Big Creepy-Crawlies: show

FireyPaperMario · Postby **FireyPaperMario** » Wed Mar 15, 2017 12:06 pm

I was gonna save this for the 3rd WIP Graphics Showcase thread, but screw it! The most Cartoonish Super Mario Bros. X Monochrome graphics I ever made! (Grass Tileset with palette for Snow tiles):

What do you guys think I should improve on?

Valentine · Postby **Valentine** » Wed Mar 15, 2017 3:25 pm

But why is it monochrome? That just limits possible uses of it. Not to mention that your light source is inconsistent at best.

The top of the grass should be lighter not darker than the rest.

FireyPaperMario · Postby **FireyPaperMario** » Wed Mar 15, 2017 4:03 pm

Sanct wrote:But why is it monochrome? That just limits possible uses of it. Not to mention that your light source is inconsistent at best.

The top of the grass should be lighter not darker than the rest.

Let me tell you 3 things:

I chosen to make monochrome graphics because of my *Work in Progress* episode, Super Monochrome Land X! *Tbh, making 16-bit monochrome is easier for me than making full colored 16-bit. So cut me some slack.

Dude, it's my first time making official custom graphics for an SMBX episode, I know they suck. But I'm still learning.

I already changed the top of the grass to a lighter shade of gray the moment I read your comment.

Emral · Postby **Emral** » Wed Mar 15, 2017 4:57 pm

Getting defensive when faced with critique is literally the worst thing you can do. Sanct wasn't even being agressive.

PersonNamedUser · Postby **PersonNamedUser** » Wed Mar 15, 2017 6:09 pm

So... No feedback on my redesigns?

FireyPaperMario · Postby **FireyPaperMario** » Wed Mar 15, 2017 6:24 pm

MosaicMario wrote:So... No feedback on my redesigns?

Here's my feedback on your redesigns. They're GRRRReat!

Emral · Postby **Emral** » Wed Mar 15, 2017 6:28 pm

MosaicMario wrote:So... No feedback on my redesigns?

Not a big fan of them. Their colours are very basic, the shading is overly simple and there are more outlines on the sprites themselves than there need to be. Contrast on the ladybug is especially bad.

PersonNamedUser · Postby **PersonNamedUser** » Wed Mar 15, 2017 6:30 pm

Enjl wrote:
MosaicMario wrote:So... No feedback on my redesigns?
Not a big fan of them. Their colours are very basic, the shading is overly simple and there are more outlines on the sprites themselves than there need to be. Contrast on the ladybug is especially bad.

So, Detail the shading and have less outlines and more detail is what your saying right?

Emral · Postby **Emral** » Wed Mar 15, 2017 6:34 pm

MosaicMario wrote:
Enjl wrote:
MosaicMario wrote:So... No feedback on my redesigns?
Not a big fan of them. Their colours are very basic, the shading is overly simple and there are more outlines on the sprites themselves than there need to be. Contrast on the ladybug is especially bad.
So, Detail the shading and have less outlines and more detail is what your saying right?

Don't detail arbitrarily. Also look into colour theory and how to make more organic colours. These critters all look rather mechanic to me.

PersonNamedUser · Postby **PersonNamedUser** » Wed Mar 15, 2017 6:36 pm

Enjl wrote:
MosaicMario wrote:
Enjl wrote: Not a big fan of them. Their colours are very basic, the shading is overly simple and there are more outlines on the sprites themselves than there need to be. Contrast on the ladybug is especially bad.
So, Detail the shading and have less outlines and more detail is what your saying right?
Don't detail arbitrarily. Also look into colour theory and how to make more organic colours. These critters all look rather mechanic to me.

Okay, I'll do that

PersonNamedUser · Postby **PersonNamedUser** » Wed Mar 15, 2017 6:38 pm

Wait actually, what,s color theory?

PixelPest · Postby **PixelPest** » Wed Mar 15, 2017 8:27 pm

Something not SMBX-related that I've been working on. Two things I'm wondering, do the top red pieces look better or the bottom ones and do you think the far right tilesets or overworked?