Okay time for review:
Well, this a decent level. I'm not sure if the music fits in the overworld section. For the graphics, they look pretty good. Design was good, but also a bit empty, because it had some lack of BGOs in the screens, where the water is. The NPC variety and placement was good. The gameplay was also good, but was it interesting? I don't really think so.
There's one pipe, which leads to the cave, so why not check in? After exiting out of cave, I've seen lots of cutoffs in this screen and that's a bad thing to leave them like that! There may be more cutoffs in offscreen.
Anyways, in this cave, there was no emenies and coins. Why would you even do that? Also after riding a platform, there's no BGOs or whatsoever. That makes the level empty. In the next section, which is empty again, you fight against Roy Koopa(?) to get the star, no really,
a star. After exiting the cave, you came back where you enter the pipe.
So, is there anything to say in this? It feels like an average score, since the design in overworld worked okay and the graphics, not sure of the music. You pretty much ruined the level by making cave sections empty, and with cutoffs. Anyway, overall...
4.5/10