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Hello again!

So last year I started to draw a series of colour-less comics about the Shy Guy I had created (back when his name was ShyGuy37, not Bill). I decided that it'd be quite cool if you'd read them!

I will eventually continue, so hold on.

The DeviantART page contains some behind-the-scenes facts, but if you want to read the comic uninterrupted, read it here.

If you want to read them on my DeviantART page, here's the link to my account- http://www.shyguy37.deviantart.com

If you want to read it here-
The Map Page 1 Page 2 Page 3 Page 4 Page 5 Page 6 I know the quality's not too great, but a drawing book and a pencil are basically my only tools.
Please provide feedback to help me improve my comics!
More coming soon!

This is pretty cool! DRAW ON!

Here's some feedback: the lines are messy and many limbs are wibbly-wobbly in ways that arms don't wibble-wobble. There are many lines that are curved that should be straight. Now that I got all the bad out of the way, though, I'd like to tell you that you have tons of potential. Your proportions and bodies are pretty good. Just keep on drawing and you'll keep on improving.