Hills With Flowing Pipes And Fish( Requesting Re-Review)

They're not that bad, but they're not that good either.
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Hills With Flowing Pipes And Fish( Requesting Re-Review)

Postby Dog of Annoyance » Mon Jul 20, 2015 11:38 am

This is the first level I'm making public. Graphic Credit goes to Valtteri.
Screenshots:http://imgur.com/a/86nzD
Download:http://www.mediafire.com/download/gqz1b ... d_Fish.zip
Update Features:
-LuigiFan2010's Timer You will need this in the luascripslib if you want to use it:http://www.supermariobrosx.org/forums/v ... 51&t=10228
-Coins that i forgot to add first time around.
-Red coins secret star
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Re: Hills With Pipes And Fish

Postby Mable » Mon Jul 20, 2015 12:12 pm

So i looked at the screens and... where them coins at?

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Re: Hills With Pipes And Fish

Postby glitch4 » Tue Jul 21, 2015 5:00 pm

Review of Hills With Pipes And Fish by Daemon64

Um, that was a short level, very short, I beat it under 30 seconds or less so. There are no coins in this level, which isn't that sorta good. The graphics are good and the design wasn't flat at least. The STH1 music, ugh, I'm not really sure if it does fit here, since it's a grass level. The emeny placement was good. There's really nothing to say about it, because it's short, and it didn't even need a midpoint. Overall, you should extend the length much more.

3.5/10

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Re: Hills With Pipes And Fish

Postby Dog of Annoyance » Wed Jul 22, 2015 9:11 am

glitch4 wrote:Um, that was a short level, very short, I beat it under 30 seconds or less so. There are no coins in this level, which isn't that sorta good.
Will be fixing these in the next update.
glitch4 wrote: The STH1 music, ugh, I'm not really sure if it does fit here, since it's a grass level.
Not trying to argue,but i chose a Green Hill Zone SMW remix. Green Hill was a grass level.
glitch4 wrote: Emenies are unhurtable when you touch them, but you still can kill them, unfortunately it wasn't good to place them because they're friendly and that would make some player confused. Also this level didn't even need the midpoint in here if it was so short.
I never made the enemies friendly, you sure you didn't have donthurtme on?

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Re: Hills With Pipes And Fish

Postby glitch4 » Wed Jul 22, 2015 9:17 am

I forgot that the cheat was still on, damnit! Nevermind about that con, removed it and moved up to average section.


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