Pepper Pyramid would like a review)

Postby **ShadowStarX** » Thu Jun 18, 2015 7:06 am

A pyramid level for my project.
Old screenshot:
[rimg]http://kepfeltoltes.hu/150617/w2-4_www. ... es.hu_.png[/rimg]
New screenshot: (using this tileset for the previous screen too)
[rimg]http://kepfeltoltes.hu/150618/w2-4_www. ... es.hu_.png[/rimg]
Download level

Postby **PROX** » Thu Jun 18, 2015 2:01 pm

the screenshots are so small

Superiorstar · Postby **Superiorstar** » Thu Jun 18, 2015 2:25 pm

You have to click them.

Enjl · Postby **Enjl** » Thu Jun 18, 2015 2:29 pm

The new screen hurts my eyes. Tone down the colours a bit.

Postby **ShadowStarX** » Thu Jun 18, 2015 3:26 pm

Enjl wrote:The new screen hurts my eyes. Tone down the colours a bit.

So the opposite stuff with Tropical Tower.
(I hope it's still better than Superior's yellow outline tileset)

Superiorstar · Postby **Superiorstar** » Thu Jun 18, 2015 3:39 pm

Tervantez2345 wrote:
Enjl wrote:The new screen hurts my eyes. Tone down the colours a bit.
So the opposite stuff with Tropical Tower.
(I hope it's still better than Superior's yellow outline tileset)

Would you kindly shut up about it, I told you I deleted the level.

zlaker · Postby **zlaker** » Thu Jun 18, 2015 3:47 pm

Superiorstar wrote: Would you kindly shut up about it, I told you I deleted the level.

Would you kindly use the report button if you have an issue with something Tervantez2345 said?

Superiorstar · Postby **Superiorstar** » Thu Jun 18, 2015 3:52 pm

zlakerboy357 wrote:
Superiorstar wrote: Would you kindly shut up about it, I told you I deleted the level.
Would you kindly use the report button if you have an issue with something Tervantez2345 said?

we settled this in chat. plus the report button is somewhat useless for me anyways since Nobody listens to me when I use it.

zlaker · Postby **zlaker** » Thu Jun 18, 2015 3:58 pm

Superiorstar wrote:
zlakerboy357 wrote:
Superiorstar wrote: Would you kindly shut up about it, I told you I deleted the level.
Would you kindly use the report button if you have an issue with something Tervantez2345 said?
plus the report button is somewhat useless for me anyways since Nobody listens to me when I use it.

That doesn't justify you doing what you just did.

Postby **ShadowStarX** » Fri Jun 19, 2015 2:16 am

Visually updated bc the blocks were bright. Download link in the main post.

Superior: ok, I won't mention that tileset again. (as I said in the chat)

Postby **glitch4** » Sun Jun 21, 2015 11:11 am

Pepper Pyramid by Tervantez2345 - Review

Starting off inside the pyramid. This level has switch blocks, which activates the blocks, and some moving ones, at least you made pipe shortcuts, which they lead to the place where the activation blocks are, so that doesn't make level tedious. There are some bonus rooms, but only coins and no extra lifes or powerups, so that's okay at least. The difficulty was fair, and so some good replay value. The music fits very well. There's nothing in this level that would interest me much. The design was a bit flat and the graphics were a bit bland. In one of these sections, player can glitch through the tiles when you're big (usually it leads to the pit). Well, after that, the level deserves a pretty good score.

Good:
- Fair difficulty.
- Replay value.
- Music fit.
- Gameplay was okay.

Bad:
~ Design is a bit flat.
- Can glitch through tiles.
- No interests.
~ Graphics were a bit bland.

7/10

Suckerman7 GM · Postby **Suckerman7 GM** » Thu Jul 02, 2015 12:08 pm

Yeah, I'm not actually a level judge but I played your level. It's good enough. Everything is actually showing SMB1 Pyramid (the second time) and puzzles. But, when I play it, I found something strange that didn't fit the level:

- You can use SMB1 Mario and Luigi instead of SMB3 Mario and Luigi (That looks a bit odd.)

- You can use recolored SMB1 Hammer Bros. from Chad's project SMSE. (That looks a bit odd too.)

- The exit can be like SMB1-styled. (You can get it from SMSE.)

But besides this, here's my rating:

Aesthetics (10/10)

Blocks and NPC placing (9.5/10)

Music (9/10) (Classic, but it's custom music all along.)

TOTAL: 9.5/10 (Fantastic!)

Postby **ShadowStarX** » Fri Jul 03, 2015 4:32 pm

Suckerman7 GM wrote:Yeah, I'm not actually a level judge but I played your level. It's good enough. Everything is actually showing SMB1 Pyramid (the second time) and puzzles. But, when I play it, I found something strange that didn't fit the level:

- You can use SMB1 Mario and Luigi instead of SMB3 Mario and Luigi (That looks a bit odd.)

- You can use recolored SMB1 Hammer Bros. from Chad's project SMSE. (That looks a bit odd too.)

- The exit can be like SMB1-styled. (You can get it from SMSE.)

But besides this, here's my rating:

Aesthetics (10/10)

Blocks and NPC placing (9.5/10)

Music (9/10) (Classic, but it's custom music all along.)

TOTAL: 9.5/10 (Fantastic!)

Thanks, glad you enjoyed the level. Also it's a project level so an SMB1 Mario wouldn't look good. But I'll change the HB if really necessary.