Ragont's sketching thread

Ragont™ wrote:im back
and hoping FOR OSME COMMENTS THIS TIME (GOOD OR BAD IDC TBH JUST GIVE ME SOME FUCKING FEEDBACK)

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she gets uglier and uglier everyday
still, nice job tho

Danny · Postby **Danny** » Mon Sep 01, 2014 1:06 pm

Kep wrote:she gets uglier and uglier everyday

Don't we all though.

Also Ragont why do you start working on something and then never finish it.

ragont · Postby **ragont** » Mon Sep 01, 2014 1:13 pm

oh god im so fuckinbg bad at drawing eye whites

8bit: idk because im lazy
and no one ever comments on them so i can improve so idk why i even bother in the first place

ragont · Postby **ragont** » Wed Sep 03, 2014 1:22 pm

ive changed the most recent one up a bit
is it an improvement?

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http://i.imgur.com/4STSlWu.png

silent_ · Postby **silent_** » Wed Sep 03, 2014 5:07 pm

improve the size of her tits and u should be fine.

ragont · Postby **ragont** » Wed Sep 03, 2014 7:38 pm

So Valtteri-sized?

ragont · Postby **ragont** » Sun Sep 14, 2014 3:47 am

A NEW AGE DAWNS UPON US...
CONCEPT FOR "THE LEGEND OF THE CHAO MEIN BROTHERS" BEGINS ITS CONFOUNDED EXISTENCE.

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ragont · Postby **ragont** » Tue Sep 16, 2014 12:39 pm

more from previous post

i hate to sound like a hawkeyeone, but when i actually put effort into shit like this and never get comments or any criticism to let me know how it is, it kind of pisses me off.
please comment if you have any suggestions so i can improve.

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http://i.imgur.com/E7yVB1T.png

MistakesWereMade · Postby **MistakesWereMade** » Tue Sep 16, 2014 2:22 pm

Ragont™ wrote:more from previous post

i hate to sound like a hawkeyeone, but when i actually put effort into shit like this and never get comments or any criticism to let me know how it is, it kind of pisses me off.
please comment if you have any suggestions so i can improve.
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http://i.imgur.com/E7yVB1T.png

she looks pretty good, except you maimed her left leg:

it's too wide
it's also akwardly positioned

ragont · Postby **ragont** » Tue Sep 16, 2014 5:27 pm

her left or our left
i kind of fucked up the legs with all the resizing i did i think

XerX · Postby **XerX** » Tue Sep 16, 2014 7:18 pm

Here we go a review on your latest piece. Don't expect it to be a great review though.

First off, yes, from our viewing, the left leg looks thicker than her other leg, and looks awkward. Legs shouldn't be so square shaped either. The human body is pretty round, and it's usually made up of ovals, and triangles, not so much squares and rectangles.

Her hands look odd and mishapen. I can relate if you say they are a pain in the ass to draw, cause they are. Practice drawing hands on a blank canvas. Also, (again from my viewing), her right wrist shouldn't bend fully like that. It kinda looks like she broke it. Also, she is missing a sleeve on her right arm.

The torso is pretty okay, but it probably could be curvier due to the fact that she is female, but it's not my character so I have no say in this.

Her face looks too round in my opinion, but this is my opinion, and it could be just the way you draw heads, your own style.

If you want some help with poses, this is a great site for them : http://www.posemaniacs.com/archives/1514

That's all I got for you. Hope this helps and remember to never stop drawing. c:

ragont · Postby **ragont** » Wed Sep 17, 2014 9:46 am

FUCKING I HAD LIKE A WHOLE PARAGRAPH WRITTEN AND THEN THE WEBSITE CRASHED OR SOME SHIT
oh well, thanks a bunch for the review, XerX.
tell me what you think about this one: (ill do the hands later)

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