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I decided to experiment with the way I drew a tree trunk. It looks kinda rocky though. Oh well. At least the leaves turned out ok.

PROX wrote:
I decided to experiment with the way I drew a tree trunk. It looks kinda rocky though. Oh well. At least the leaves turned out ok.

The leaves look a bit flat but it works. Your other forest tileset was better tho.

PROX wrote:
I decided to experiment with the way I drew a tree trunk. It looks kinda rocky though. Oh well. At least the leaves turned out ok.

If you accept the trunk as being rock, which it is, you can turn this into a pretty neat overgrown temple tileset.

[quote="Yahochi-1359"]Here a W.I.P. Raccoon Galoomba:
[img]http://pic.prepics-cdn.com/yaya17526/47266819.gif[/img]
Walk Animation:[img]http://pic.prepics-cdn.com/yaya17526/47267072.gif[/img]
Jump/Fall Animation:[img]http://pic.prepics-cdn.com/yaya17526/47267184.gif[/img][/quote]
I love this. Can I make a tail swing Animation?

REDBIRD0305 wrote:

Yahochi-1359 wrote:Here a W.I.P. Raccoon Galoomba:

Walk Animation:
Jump/Fall Animation:

I love this. Can I make a tail swing Animation?

You don't need his permission to make it, you can make it if you want.

Enjl wrote:

PROX wrote:
I decided to experiment with the way I drew a tree trunk. It looks kinda rocky though. Oh well. At least the leaves turned out ok.

If you accept the trunk as being rock, which it is, you can turn this into a pretty neat overgrown temple tileset.

I could do that. I was planning on redrawing the trunk the way I usually do except with less colors anyway, but I could recycle the fill.

I made more of These Giant Insect Enemies I not going to beg for feedback, but it would be nice.

Don't abuse dithering as much as you do. It gives everything a weird, checkered texture. Dithering should be used with care only in places which need it. Also, the shape of your enemies seems very sluggishly done.

Enjl wrote:Don't abuse dithering as much as you do. It gives everything a weird, checkered texture. Dithering should be used with care only in places which need it. Also, the shape of your enemies seems very sluggishly done.

I was going to improve on them later anyway. I knew the scorpions definitely needed to be improved.
And That I probably didn't do that good on drawing the ant, but i'll improve it later.

My main gripe is actually with the slugs.

Enjl wrote:My main gripe is actually with the slugs.

They probably need improvement the most because i actually thought they didn't look that well-shaped either.

SuperMario12345 wrote:

Enjl wrote:My main gripe is actually with the slugs.

They probably need improvement the most because i actually thought they didn't look that well-shaped either.

The shape isn't the problem, it's the amount of dithering used.

PROX wrote:

SuperMario12345 wrote:

Enjl wrote:My main gripe is actually with the slugs.

They probably need improvement the most because i actually thought they didn't look that well-shaped either.

The shape isn't the problem, it's the amount of dithering used.

I'm no snail expert, but I think the part of them which touches the ground should be flat.

I made this Pokey by scratch and pretty much based from the Paper Mario series.

GameClip477 wrote:I made this Pokey by scratch and pretty much based from the Paper Mario series.

It's a rupee pokey lol. Anyway the pokey should be more circular. Also the outlining is inconsistent, and there's hardly any shading in it.

GameClip477 wrote:I made this Pokey by scratch and pretty much based from the Paper Mario series.

It's okay, but the segments are a little too hexagonal, and it needs some more shading on the outsides to make it look rounder. The red colouring also doesn't look very good. I like the idea bit it still needs a bit of work in my opinion.
Edit: Pretty much what Prox said.

PROX wrote:

GameClip477 wrote: It's a rupee pokey lol. Anyway the pokey should be more circular. Also the outlining is inconsistent, and there's hardly any shading in it.

PixelPest wrote:

GameClip477 wrote: It's okay, but the segments are a little too hexagonal, and it needs some more shading on the outsides to make it look rounder. The red colouring also doesn't look very good. I like the idea bit it still needs a bit of work in my opinion.
Edit: Pretty much what Prox said.

Okay, thanks for the criticism! : )

Updated Rupee Pokey:



What do you guys think now?

that is a lot better, I think the pupils in the eyes should be more toward the center though

I think the pupils should in general be a tad smaller. If I was a player breezing past this enemy I'd think this is a cyborg pokey.

Please make a cyborg pokey someone. The world needs this.

Enjl wrote:I think the pupils should in general be a tad smaller. If I was a player breezing past this enemy I'd think this is a cyborg pokey.

Please make a cyborg pokey someone. The world needs this.

On it. Stay tuned.