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Suckerman7 GM wrote:I think the dark silouhette in the logo can be Dark Sonic.

Lol XD, you read the first sentence of the project? says Just remember this name ...

Previously is saying Just remember this name G.....N. His real name will not be revealed until the episode is finished

Flaws:
Name sounds a bit too cliche
Silhouette seems a bit out of place
For Darkyoshi:
The "Darkness" In the logo is spelled "Darknenes"
Other than that, seems good.

Oh I feel so stupid now Here is a fixed version and let's forget this ever happened


I will play your mini Demo by the way, and maybe leave a little review if I have the time. Good luck with your project!

VaatiWindMage wrote:Flaws:
Name sounds a bit too cliche
Silhouette seems a bit out of place
For Darkyoshi:
The "Darkness" In the logo is spelled "Darknenes"
Other than that, seems good.

Thanks for the review. However, the name has already been decided and the silhouette, well, i think i need to removing the gray borders but I need a critique of the first level or what you think of the demo so far

Great demo as I said before. Looking forward to see full game

DarkYoshi wrote:Oh I feel so stupid now Here is a fixed version and let's forget this ever happened


I will play your mini Demo by the way, and maybe leave a little review if I have the time. Good luck with your project!

Heh, thanks for fixing the logo. Inform me of mistakes and if you want, you can be a beta tester (is your choice)

Rage quited in the first level due to:

-Unkillable (and kills you when touched INCLUDING the top) Shy-Guy near the checkpoint
-Lost the koopa shell to get the star and it didnt re-spawn
-LOOOOOONGGGGG loading times even when loading the world (I didnt have alot of programs open)
-Lot'sa (yeah...I dont need to say much)

Good stuff:
-Good and complex cutscenes
-Good CGFX (Note:16-bit Mario doesnt fit there!)
-Good level design (except for the enemy placement...)
-Good world design

Seedy Koopas wrote:Rage quited in the first level due to:

-Unkillable (and kills you when touched INCLUDING the top) Shy-Guy near the checkpoint
-Lost the koopa shell to get the star and it didnt re-spawn
-LOOOOOONGGGGG loading times even when loading the world (I didnt have alot of programs open)
-Lot'sa (yeah...I dont need to say much)

Good stuff:
-Good and complex cutscenes
-Good CGFX (Note:16-bit Mario doesnt fit there!)
-Good level design (except for the enemy placement...)
-Good world design

I fixed the level, do not worry and the Para-Shy Guy not are invincible, you can defeat him with a fire flower

Suckerman7 GM wrote:Great demo as I said before. Looking forward to see full game

I plan to make a second demo with the complete world 1

New screenshot

Clash of the styles in that screenshot;
Im seeing SMB1, SMB3, And YI at once.
Or it could be a recolor and I blatantly didnt notice.

I guess I could work on crystaline snow. I think thats the name I can't remember from 7 seconds ago jeez

LordYoshi999 wrote:I guess I could work on crystaline snow. I think thats the name I can't remember from 7 seconds ago jeez

Good luck making the world

Pop Yoshi Bros wrote:

LordYoshi999 wrote:I guess I could work on crystaline snow. I think thats the name I can't remember from 7 seconds ago jeez

Good luck making the world

Yeah.....I don't know about the whole world, :p may get too bored. Dunno yet :pppppppppp

New screen

VaatiWindMage wrote:Clash of the styles in that screenshot;
Im seeing SMB1, SMB3, And YI at once.
Or it could be a recolor and I blatantly didnt notice.

The episode will not have much of Yoshi's Island because some looks bad (except the koopas), so for recommendation I removed the YI style pipes. If there anything of YI will be a level that subject and indeed there are some recolors, there are not many but there

I'm sorry dude, but i'm gonna have to drop out of this, mainly because it's getting closer and closer to when my school starts again, and so I'm losing time, sorry. :(:(:(:(:(:(:(

LordYoshi999 wrote:I'm sorry dude, but i'm gonna have to drop out of this, mainly because it's getting closer and closer to when my school starts again, and so I'm losing time, sorry. :(:(:(:(:(:(:(

Do not worry, I'll find someone else if someone want to be a level designer. If someone want to be a level designer send me a PM

i think i can send some levels for you.