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PopYoshi
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Postby PopYoshi » Tue Jul 21, 2015 2:15 pm
Suckerman7 GM wrote:I think the dark silouhette in the logo can be Dark Sonic.
Lol XD, you read the first sentence of the project? says Just remember this name ...
Previously is saying Just remember this name G.....N. His real name will not be revealed until the episode is finished
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VaatiWindMage
- Swooper

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Postby VaatiWindMage » Sat Jul 25, 2015 1:32 pm
Flaws:
Name sounds a bit too cliche
Silhouette seems a bit out of place
For Darkyoshi:
The "Darkness" In the logo is spelled "Darknenes"
Other than that, seems good.
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DarkYoshi
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Postby DarkYoshi » Sat Jul 25, 2015 2:00 pm
Oh I feel so stupid now  Here is a fixed version and let's forget this ever happened
I will play your mini Demo by the way, and maybe leave a little review if I have the time. Good luck with your project!
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PopYoshi
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Postby PopYoshi » Sat Jul 25, 2015 2:01 pm
VaatiWindMage wrote:Flaws:
Name sounds a bit too cliche
Silhouette seems a bit out of place
For Darkyoshi:
The "Darkness" In the logo is spelled "Darknenes"
Other than that, seems good.
Thanks for the review. However, the name has already been decided and the silhouette, well, i think i need to removing the gray borders but I need a critique of the first level or what you think of the demo so far
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Suckerman7 GM
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Postby Suckerman7 GM » Sat Jul 25, 2015 2:04 pm
Great demo as I said before. Looking forward to see full game 
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PopYoshi
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Postby PopYoshi » Sat Jul 25, 2015 2:09 pm
DarkYoshi wrote:Oh I feel so stupid now  Here is a fixed version and let's forget this ever happened
I will play your mini Demo by the way, and maybe leave a little review if I have the time. Good luck with your project!
Heh, thanks for fixing the logo. Inform me of mistakes and if you want, you can be a beta tester (is your choice)
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Seedy Koopas
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Postby Seedy Koopas » Sun Jul 26, 2015 8:03 am
Rage quited in the first level due to:
-Unkillable (and kills you when touched INCLUDING the top) Shy-Guy near the checkpoint
-Lost the koopa shell to get the star and it didnt re-spawn
-LOOOOOONGGGGG loading times even when loading the world (I didnt have alot of programs open)
-Lot'sa (yeah...I dont need to say much)
Good stuff:
-Good and complex cutscenes
-Good CGFX (Note:16-bit Mario doesnt fit there!)
-Good level design (except for the enemy placement...)
-Good world design
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PopYoshi
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Postby PopYoshi » Sun Jul 26, 2015 9:15 am
Seedy Koopas wrote:Rage quited in the first level due to:
-Unkillable (and kills you when touched INCLUDING the top) Shy-Guy near the checkpoint
-Lost the koopa shell to get the star and it didnt re-spawn
-LOOOOOONGGGGG loading times even when loading the world (I didnt have alot of programs open)
-Lot'sa (yeah...I dont need to say much)
Good stuff:
-Good and complex cutscenes
-Good CGFX (Note:16-bit Mario doesnt fit there!)
-Good level design (except for the enemy placement...)
-Good world design
I fixed the level, do not worry and the Para-Shy Guy not are invincible, you can defeat him with a fire flower
Last edited by PopYoshi on Mon Jul 27, 2015 3:48 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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PopYoshi
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Postby PopYoshi » Sun Jul 26, 2015 10:16 am
Suckerman7 GM wrote:Great demo as I said before. Looking forward to see full game 
I plan to make a second demo with the complete world 1
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PopYoshi
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Postby PopYoshi » Tue Jul 28, 2015 11:43 am
New screenshot

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VaatiWindMage
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Postby VaatiWindMage » Sat Aug 01, 2015 2:24 am
Clash of the styles in that screenshot;
Im seeing SMB1, SMB3, And YI at once.
Or it could be a recolor and I blatantly didnt notice.
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LordYoshi999
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Postby LordYoshi999 » Sun Aug 02, 2015 11:38 am
I guess I could work on crystaline snow. I think thats the name I can't remember from 7 seconds ago jeez
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PopYoshi
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Postby PopYoshi » Sun Aug 02, 2015 11:00 pm
LordYoshi999 wrote:I guess I could work on crystaline snow. I think thats the name I can't remember from 7 seconds ago jeez
Good luck making the world
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LordYoshi999
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Postby LordYoshi999 » Mon Aug 03, 2015 12:33 pm
Pop Yoshi Bros wrote:LordYoshi999 wrote:I guess I could work on crystaline snow. I think thats the name I can't remember from 7 seconds ago jeez
Good luck making the world
Yeah.....I don't know about the whole world, :p may get too bored. Dunno yet :pppppppppp
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PopYoshi
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Postby PopYoshi » Tue Aug 11, 2015 2:34 pm
New screen

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PopYoshi
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Postby PopYoshi » Thu Aug 13, 2015 4:53 pm
VaatiWindMage wrote:Clash of the styles in that screenshot;
Im seeing SMB1, SMB3, And YI at once.
Or it could be a recolor and I blatantly didnt notice.
The episode will not have much of Yoshi's Island because some looks bad (except the koopas), so for recommendation I removed the YI style pipes. If there anything of YI will be a level that subject and indeed there are some recolors, there are not many but there
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PopYoshi
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Postby PopYoshi » Mon Aug 17, 2015 10:40 am
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LordYoshi999
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Postby LordYoshi999 » Thu Aug 20, 2015 7:34 pm
I'm sorry dude, but i'm gonna have to drop out of this, mainly because it's getting closer and closer to when my school starts again, and so I'm losing time, sorry.  :(:(:(:(:(:(:(
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PopYoshi
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Postby PopYoshi » Thu Aug 20, 2015 8:03 pm
LordYoshi999 wrote:I'm sorry dude, but i'm gonna have to drop out of this, mainly because it's getting closer and closer to when my school starts again, and so I'm losing time, sorry.  :(:(:(:(:(:(:(
Do not worry, I'll find someone else if someone want to be a level designer. If someone want to be a level designer send me a PM
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Alagirez
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Postby Alagirez » Fri Aug 21, 2015 12:26 am
i think i can send some levels for you.
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