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Re: CONTEST: Want to work on something that'll be featured on the SMBX website?
Posted: Sat Oct 08, 2016 5:16 pm
by ElectriKong
Enjl wrote:King of Eterity wrote:OK, I know this is not SMB3 but is it still acceptable?
Consider how it looks like when offset by 480 pixels:
The coin pattern isn't a bad idea, but I feel like it would look nicer if it was symmetric to the ground it's hovering over.
Also I think the ceiling could be a tile higher. The narrow passage looks a bit a lot cramped.
How about now.
Re: CONTEST: Want to work on something that'll be featured on the SMBX website?
Posted: Sat Oct 08, 2016 5:35 pm
by Emral
I was thinking more like this
Re: CONTEST: Want to work on something that'll be featured on the SMBX website?
Posted: Sat Oct 08, 2016 5:39 pm
by Ness-Wednesday
I don't understand the white boxes, are those for some kind of spacing?
Re: CONTEST: Want to work on something that'll be featured on the SMBX website?
Posted: Sat Oct 08, 2016 5:40 pm
by Emral
ctrl x leftovers
Re: CONTEST: Want to work on something that'll be featured on the SMBX website?
Posted: Sat Oct 08, 2016 8:39 pm
by PixelPest
The coins should still be spread out more, not just clustered in one spot
Re: CONTEST: Want to work on something that'll be featured on the SMBX website?
Posted: Sun Oct 09, 2016 12:20 am
by Ghostly_Guy
Using the tileset from zlakergirl357's Cloudtop Castlewalls, I made this:
Sorry about the red lines.
Re: CONTEST: Want to work on something that'll be featured on the SMBX website?
Posted: Sun Oct 09, 2016 12:23 am
by Shadow Yoshi
Is that fortress or sky? If it's a fortress level it needs to not have a sky background, and if it's a sky level it can't have blocks or BGOs on top. Also, the red lines will have to go.
Re: CONTEST: Want to work on something that'll be featured on the SMBX website?
Posted: Sun Oct 09, 2016 12:38 am
by Ghostly_Guy
Joey wrote:Is that fortress or sky? If it's a fortress level it needs to not have a sky background, and if it's a sky level it can't have blocks or BGOs on top. Also, the red lines will have to go.
It's a sky level. I made some edits and removed the red lines.
Re: CONTEST: Want to work on something that'll be featured on the SMBX website?
Posted: Sun Oct 09, 2016 5:09 am
by Snessy the duck
King of Eterity wrote:OK, I know this is not SMB3 but is it still acceptable?
That's completely acceptable! My entry is SMB1 styled too, and Joey only said SMB3 was the preferred style, not the only one!
Re: CONTEST: Want to work on something that'll be featured on the SMBX website?
Posted: Sun Oct 09, 2016 5:35 am
by ElectriKong
Enjl wrote:I was thinking more like this
Does this make you happy?
Re: CONTEST: Want to work on something that'll be featured on the SMBX website?
Posted: Sun Oct 09, 2016 6:08 am
by Emral
I'm done giving feedback.
Re: CONTEST: Want to work on something that'll be featured on the SMBX website?
Posted: Sun Oct 09, 2016 6:11 am
by Alagirez
Ghostly_Guy wrote:
Looks nice btw ;)
Re: CONTEST: Want to work on something that'll be featured on the SMBX website?
Posted: Sun Oct 09, 2016 8:50 am
by PixelPest
King of Eterity wrote:
That looks a lot better
Re: CONTEST: Want to work on something that'll be featured on the SMBX website?
Posted: Sun Oct 09, 2016 11:21 am
by Snessy the duck
Camacho wrote:Ghostly_Guy wrote:
Looks nice btw
Hey, that screen doesn't look that ba...
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Re: CONTEST: Want to work on something that'll be featured on the SMBX website?
Posted: Sun Oct 09, 2016 12:47 pm
by ElectriKong
Snessy the duck wrote:Camacho wrote:Ghostly_Guy wrote:
Looks nice btw
Hey, that screen doesn't look that ba...
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You probably should fix it.
Well, ghostly Guy should
Re: CONTEST: Want to work on something that'll be featured on the SMBX website?
Posted: Sun Oct 09, 2016 1:07 pm
by Ghostly_Guy
Snessy the duck wrote:Camacho wrote:Ghostly_Guy wrote:
Looks nice btw
Hey, that screen doesn't look that ba...
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I actually didn't notice that. Thanks!
Fixed:
Re: CONTEST: Want to work on something that'll be featured on the SMBX website?
Posted: Sun Oct 09, 2016 7:53 pm
by Ness-Wednesday
Ghostly_Guy wrote:
Ah, those baseballs bring back good memories.
Well, the screenshot looks good, but I think the lamp (middle one) in the clouds looks a bit too short.
Re: CONTEST: Want to work on something that'll be featured on the SMBX website?
Posted: Tue Oct 11, 2016 2:27 am
by Owenxm
Re: CONTEST: Want to work on something that'll be featured on the SMBX website?
Posted: Tue Oct 11, 2016 7:10 am
by PixelPest
Owenxm wrote:
This looks very bland and it breaks the rule regarding how the top and bottom must both be solid
Re: CONTEST: Want to work on something that'll be featured on the SMBX website?
Posted: Tue Oct 11, 2016 3:27 pm
by Cedur
PixelPest wrote:This looks very bland and it breaks the rule regarding how the top and bottom must both be solid
Where is there actually such a rule?
It's obvious though that this is quite bland, with the only custom graphic being the purple water.
