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[Sky/Bonus] Bonus Area

Postby KateBulka » Tue Jun 18, 2019 1:18 pm

- has one exit
- has no dragon coins
- player is mario
- player powerup is.. small state
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Download link - https://www.dropbox.com/s/af3pxkhec566d ... 1.zip?dl=0
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Re: [Sky/Bonus] Bonus Area

Postby Valentine » Tue Jun 18, 2019 1:19 pm

(could you format it a bit more normally for clarity's sake)

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Re: [Sky/Bonus] Bonus Area

Postby Emral » Wed Jun 19, 2019 10:49 am

My notes:
- I went and cooked lunch while playing this level
- Then I died right before the checkpoint. WELP. See you in 3 minutes.
- This name is fairly unimaginative too... Not judging but... definitely judging.
- Suddenly the level turns from the easiest level in the world to a stressfest?
- Noticed that the background lines up almost perfectly here... I usually offset closer layers by some y-value and an uneven x-value to prevent that. Or sometimes I mirror them. Looks odd.
- Fuck you (@ending). My mood is sour now.

It had some nice ideas but oh boy did it go from 0 to 100 fast. The first half is an absolute joke if you manage to not die to the admittedly cool penultimate setup, but then the 2nd half just kinda kicks your ass unless you do everything in one go, especially during the up n down zigzag iwannabetheguy corridor. Fairly neat, but I wish it didn't autoscroll.

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Re: [Sky/Bonus] Bonus Area

Postby KateBulka » Thu Jun 20, 2019 2:27 am

Enjl wrote:
Wed Jun 19, 2019 10:49 am
My notes:
- I went and cooked lunch while playing this level
- Then I died right before the checkpoint. WELP. See you in 3 minutes.
- This name is fairly unimaginative too... Not judging but... definitely judging.
- Suddenly the level turns from the easiest level in the world to a stressfest?
- Noticed that the background lines up almost perfectly here... I usually offset closer layers by some y-value and an uneven x-value to prevent that. Or sometimes I mirror them. Looks odd.
- Fuck you (@ending). My mood is sour now.

It had some nice ideas but oh boy did it go from 0 to 100 fast. The first half is an absolute joke if you manage to not die to the admittedly cool penultimate setup, but then the 2nd half just kinda kicks your ass unless you do everything in one go, especially during the up n down zigzag iwannabetheguy corridor. Fairly neat, but I wish it didn't autoscroll.
I'm sorry that level was too long. It could be much shorter, but i had nothing really to do with my free time soo. And i'm so fucking sorry for abrupt change of difficulty, and difficulty curves in my levels overall, it seems like i can't get it under control..
As for background, you could take a look into .ini files:
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[background2]
name = "SMW Clouds"
fill-color = "#000000"

[bg1]
name="bg1"
depth=INFINITE
frames=4
priority=-100
img="3.png"
repeatX=true
alignY=BOTTOM
parallaxX=0.48
parallaxY=0

[bg2]
name="bg2"
x=256
y=128
depth=INFINITE
priority=-99
img="2.png"
repeatX=true
alignY=BOTTOM
parallaxX=0.48
parallaxY=1

[bg3]
name="bg3"
y=136
depth=INFINITE
priority=-98
img="1.png"
repeatX=true
alignY=BOTTOM
parallaxX=0.64
parallaxY=1
But yeah, higher y value would be a nice thing to add.

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Re: [Sky/Bonus] Bonus Area

Postby Emral » Thu Jun 20, 2019 4:17 am

You don't have to apologize for anything other than the earrape.

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Re: [Sky/Bonus] Bonus Area

Postby KateBulka » Thu Jun 20, 2019 7:38 am

Enjl wrote:
Thu Jun 20, 2019 4:17 am
You don't have to apologize for anything other than the earrape.
I'm sorry for earrape, and okay. Thanks for review btw!

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Re: [Sky/Bonus] Bonus Area

Postby Valentine » Thu Jun 20, 2019 11:00 am

I'm gonna label this level as "WIP" until the obvious issues are sorted out (Namely the earrape because that's not acceptable for the collab, but the design issues such as the difficulty curve should also be sorted out)

I haven't played the level yet but I find there being earrape in the level as reason enough for rejection until an update for it.

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Re: [Sky/Bonus] Bonus Area

Postby KateBulka » Thu Jun 20, 2019 11:53 am

Level is updated:
-Second part is easier now, i hope.
-No more autoscroll.
-No more earrape.
Download link in the topic.
I'm especially sorry for earrape, i never thought it would be so bad, and that's my mistake, my bad.


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