1-2 Tidal Tunnel

Soronexle · Postby **Soronexle** » Sat Jun 17, 2017 7:06 pm

*Well, I'll try to use the screenshots again and see that it works.* Hi guys. I know, another shot at a level I failed to post. This always happens when I post and I'm forgetting 1 or a few details to get in, I know, worst poster in the world. It's been a while and I'm only a beginner. I'm going to try again to do this. I'm sorry.

Screenshots if it works for you guys.

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Here's the post link.

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SIKE! I was able to get it working. I just figured it out for my laptop.
Anyways...

Download Link!

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Sorry for trolling you guys. My suspicions saved my of my depression yet again.

Radiance · Postby **Radiance** » Mon Jun 19, 2017 12:11 am

This looks good! Might try this later. And also there is a cutoff in the fifth screen.

Postby **Noodle** » Mon Jun 19, 2017 9:21 am

Mr Briney wrote:This looks good! Might try this later. And also there is a cutoff in the fourth screen.

Where is it? I do not see a cutoff. If you are talking about the checkpoint, the cyan pole is the BG and the navy pole is in the FG.

HeroLinik · Postby **HeroLinik** » Mon Jun 19, 2017 11:25 am

Noodle wrote:
Mr Briney wrote:This looks good! Might try this later. And also there is a cutoff in the fourth screen.
Where is it? I do not see a cutoff. If you are talking about the checkpoint, the cyan pole is the BG and the navy pole is in the FG.

Look at the top of the ceiling pipe. There's a small gap being left between the ceiling and the pipe, which is unsightly.

Mable · Postby **Mable** » Mon Jun 19, 2017 11:51 am

That's the fifth screen though not the fourth

Postby **ElectriKong** » Mon Jun 19, 2017 12:51 pm

Mable wrote:That's the fifth screen though not the fourth

It is actually the 4th

Mable · Postby **Mable** » Mon Jun 19, 2017 12:58 pm

Mr Briney was talking about this cutoff in the FOURTH screen

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While Linik talked about this one about the ceiling pipe

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therefore i responded with "that is the fifth screen not the fourth" to liniks post since mr briney was talking about the fourth and not fifth.

Cedur · Postby **Cedur** » Mon Jun 19, 2017 1:12 pm

The pipe cutoff is in the fifth screen. And it's also not that hurtful.

As for that overly large checkpoint, I think that should be refrained from and be replaced with simply a normal checkpoint on the top or the bottom.

Radiance · Postby **Radiance** » Mon Jun 19, 2017 6:41 pm

Sorry, I've edited my post to prevent further confusions.

Kixubug · Postby **Kixubug** » Tue Jun 20, 2017 5:50 pm

This is really a Decent Level, I like how you have blue cave graphics and making more creativity I should give it a C Rank.

TDK · Postby **TDK** » Tue Jun 20, 2017 6:04 pm

The101MarioGuy wrote:This is really a Decent Level, I like how you have blue cave graphics and making more creativity I should give it a C Rank.

I don't think you should judge the level only on the graphics.

PersonNamedUser · Postby **PersonNamedUser** » Tue Jun 20, 2017 6:09 pm

The101MarioGuy wrote:This is really a Decent Level, I like how you have blue cave graphics and making more creativity I should give it a C Rank.

Your fucking kidding me right? You really are judging a level just based on it's graphics alone? There's also a million other things that
should go into judging besides that, such as the gameplay, level design, and execution.

Kixubug · Postby **Kixubug** » Tue Jun 20, 2017 6:12 pm

MosaicMario wrote:
The101MarioGuy wrote:This is really a Decent Level, I like how you have blue cave graphics and making more creativity I should give it a C Rank.
Your fucking kidding me right? You really are judging a level just based on it's graphics alone? There's also a million other things that
should go into a level's design besides that, such as the gameplay, level design, and execution.

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OK OK! I'll handle it! I know you guys said about my reviews and I will try to other things next time!

IAmPlayer · Postby **IAmPlayer** » Tue Jun 20, 2017 8:47 pm

Your level has a lot of downside,seriously. Here's some exploits/bugs i found.
Like this for example:

Seriously,that place is for dragon coins. You shouldn't place a bricks under a star/dragon coin. It will glitched and think it's a regular coin. Giving me ONLY 10 Points. Like seriously, that means i can't complete the Star Coin Collecting.

Here's another one:

This is what happens when you press the switch,right? Well, pressing it again will show what you've done down there.

Pressing it the third time,however,will make it gone but you can float in air. WTF? (i don't have the screenshot sorry)

Again,another bad thing:
Let me show you this screenshot. What do you think i'm doing?

Yep,it's going up. Why do you have to create a down pipe but the entrance is in the air?! That makes no sense at all! I tried to fix this but,eh, i give up. It was originally from this image into the one on top of the image.

You should at least. Fix something before publishing. Like seriously, this level is bad with those. The gameplay is decent enough, the graphics, you found a good choice,so good until it has a cutoff. And another thing, REMOVE THE SWITCH AFTER PRESSING IT FOR THE WATER!

EDIT: Ok, sorry for being mad and being a hypocrite here. But i can't take it anymore. I should give this level 2.5 out of 10 being how bad it is. Also, this is more like a rant than a review. Yeah, i know i'm short-tempered. Maybe i shouldn't post any mistakes in the level. I give up reviewing this.

TDK · Postby **TDK** » Wed Jun 21, 2017 10:29 am

Dark Soron wrote:*Well, I'll try to use the screenshots again and see that it works.* Hi guys. I know, another shot at a level I failed to post. This always happens when I post and I'm forgetting 1 or a few details to get in, I know, worst poster in the world. It's been a while and I'm only a beginner. I'm going to try again to do this. I'm sorry.

Once again, you didn't improve anything.
All it takes is a little effort on your level.
I could make a rant about it (not that you'll listen), but 1AmPlayer already did that (although I think a 1/10 is more suitable for the level). All of those issues that he mention could have been fixed if you tested your level.
If there's one thing that I would like to say is that decrease the size of your music file. Why is it 30 minutes long? It's really easy to shorten your music. Not to mention that you didn't even bother to make your custom music work in your level making it pointless.

Postby **krakin** » Wed Jun 21, 2017 11:53 pm

TheDinoKing wrote:
Dark Soron wrote:*Well, I'll try to use the screenshots again and see that it works.* Hi guys. I know, another shot at a level I failed to post. This always happens when I post and I'm forgetting 1 or a few details to get in, I know, worst poster in the world. It's been a while and I'm only a beginner. I'm going to try again to do this. I'm sorry.
Once again, you didn't improve anything.
All it takes is a little effort on your level.
I could make a rant about it (not that you'll listen), but 1AmPlayer already did that (although I think a 1/10 is more suitable for the level). All of those issues that he mention could have been fixed if you tested your level.
If there's one thing that I would like to say is that decrease the size of your music file. Why is it 30 minutes long? It's really easy to shorten your music. Not to mention that you didn't even bother to make your custom music work in your level making it pointless.

he probably has something else important to do, and hasn't got the time to fix his level yet. maybe give him a bit more time?

TDK · Postby **TDK** » Thu Jun 22, 2017 7:29 am

practicalshorty014 wrote:
TheDinoKing wrote:
Dark Soron wrote:*Well, I'll try to use the screenshots again and see that it works.* Hi guys. I know, another shot at a level I failed to post. This always happens when I post and I'm forgetting 1 or a few details to get in, I know, worst poster in the world. It's been a while and I'm only a beginner. I'm going to try again to do this. I'm sorry.
Once again, you didn't improve anything.
All it takes is a little effort on your level.
I could make a rant about it (not that you'll listen), but 1AmPlayer already did that (although I think a 1/10 is more suitable for the level). All of those issues that he mention could have been fixed if you tested your level.
If there's one thing that I would like to say is that decrease the size of your music file. Why is it 30 minutes long? It's really easy to shorten your music. Not to mention that you didn't even bother to make your custom music work in your level making it pointless.
he probably has something else important to do, and hasn't got the time to fix his level yet. maybe give him a bit more time?

I don't think you understand.
Regardless of his excuse, doesn't change that his level still suck, he shouldn't have published a clearly untested level. It's not like there's a time limit or anything.
Besides uploading this level would have taken longer.

IAmPlayer · Postby **IAmPlayer** » Thu Jun 22, 2017 8:30 am

TheDinoKing wrote:I don't think you understand.Regardless of his excuse, doesn't change that his level still suck, he shouldn't have published a clearly untested level. It's not like there's a time limit or anything.Besides uploading this level would have taken longer.

Actually,play-tested level that was good somehow got lower attention than the ones that never play-tested and bad ones. Honestly play-testing it will be much fair difficulty and much bugs fixed before publish period. And the question is : Why didn't he ever tested his level anyway? He just like "Okay. Put something here, Put a water summoning switch there,put the best transition here, and there we go. Enjoy it." or sometimes "Ok. Put this boss here. Players will be soo pissed." He build and publish work is not completed but yet, people seems to love doing that. And that's really annoying. Exploits and Bugs will be the easiest to find in those levels anyway.

Soronexle · Postby **Soronexle** » Thu Jul 13, 2017 4:48 pm

Alright, here's a more refined version of the level. Just in case you don't want to glitch the game.

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Your welcome Dinoking!

Soronexle · Postby **Soronexle** » Thu Jul 13, 2017 5:00 pm

practicalshorty014 wrote:
TheDinoKing wrote:
Dark Soron wrote:*Well, I'll try to use the screenshots again and see that it works.* Hi guys. I know, another shot at a level I failed to post. This always happens when I post and I'm forgetting 1 or a few details to get in, I know, worst poster in the world. It's been a while and I'm only a beginner. I'm going to try again to do this. I'm sorry.
Once again, you didn't improve anything.
All it takes is a little effort on your level.
I could make a rant about it (not that you'll listen), but 1AmPlayer already did that (although I think a 1/10 is more suitable for the level). All of those issues that he mention could have been fixed if you tested your level.
If there's one thing that I would like to say is that decrease the size of your music file. Why is it 30 minutes long? It's really easy to shorten your music. Not to mention that you didn't even bother to make your custom music work in your level making it pointless.
he probably has something else important to do, and hasn't got the time to fix his level yet. maybe give him a bit more time?

Well, in real life, when I posted this, I was a freshman in high school and I tried to get my grades up.