BUZZY n SPINY Adventures series

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BUZZY n SPINY Adventures series

Postby Tarkan809 » Sun Jun 18, 2017 9:28 am

i finaly made my first series.

here's episode 1:


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Re: BUZZY n SPINY Adventures series

Postby HeroLinik » Sun Jun 18, 2017 9:32 am

Well, it's good for a first attempt, but the animation is just all over the place at some points, as the Buzzy Beetle isn't walking straight. Also, some of the acting is quite bad, especially in the lines being used.

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Re: BUZZY n SPINY Adventures series

Postby DJFMHD » Sun Jun 18, 2017 9:36 am

This would probably work a little better if this was a complete comedy also I am assuming you got insperation from SMG4
HeroLinik wrote:Well, it's good for a first attempt, but the animation is just all over the place at some points, as the Buzzy Beetle isn't walking straight. Also, some of the acting is quite bad, especially in the lines being used.
It's not animated it's a game I think and he carrying the characters with some sort of thing in that game.

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Re: BUZZY n SPINY Adventures series

Postby Tarkan809 » Sun Jun 18, 2017 9:39 am

DJFMHD wrote:This would probably work a little better if this was a complete comedy also I am assuming you got insperation from SMG4.
well yeah. but i don't know who put a dislike in my video?

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Re: BUZZY n SPINY Adventures series

Postby PixelPest » Sun Jun 18, 2017 9:41 am

Tbh it's very poorly done. Spelling mistakes, poor voices, bad-looking animation, and weird camera movement

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Re: BUZZY n SPINY Adventures series

Postby Tarkan809 » Sun Jun 18, 2017 9:42 am

HeroLinik wrote:Well, it's good for a first attempt, but the animation is just all over the place at some points, as the Buzzy Beetle isn't walking straight. Also, some of the acting is quite bad, especially in the lines being used.
well i walking straight ain't that easy.
the acting is funny.
the lines ? i did that people who will understand.

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Re: BUZZY n SPINY Adventures series

Postby Tarkan809 » Sun Jun 18, 2017 9:43 am

PixelPest wrote:Tbh it's very poorly done. Spelling mistakes, poor voices, bad-looking animation, and weird camera movement
well is hard to camera.
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Re: BUZZY n SPINY Adventures series

Postby PixelPest » Sun Jun 18, 2017 9:44 am

What you use and whether it's difficult or not doesn't justify poor quality. And also why are the characters always floating?

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Re: BUZZY n SPINY Adventures series

Postby HeroLinik » Sun Jun 18, 2017 9:46 am

Tarkan809 wrote:
HeroLinik wrote:Well, it's good for a first attempt, but the animation is just all over the place at some points, as the Buzzy Beetle isn't walking straight. Also, some of the acting is quite bad, especially in the lines being used.
well i walking straight ain't that easy.
the acting is funny.
the lines ? i did that people who will understand.
YouTube isn't a place to share videos to your age group, it's a place to share videos with the world. You can't control who watches your videos on YouTube.

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Re: BUZZY n SPINY Adventures series

Postby Tarkan809 » Sun Jun 18, 2017 9:50 am

PixelPest wrote:What you use and whether it's difficult or not doesn't justify poor quality. And also why are the characters always floating?
well poorly i accidentally destroyed the table so yeah.
HeroLinik wrote:
Tarkan809 wrote:
HeroLinik wrote:Well, it's good for a first attempt, but the animation is just all over the place at some points, as the Buzzy Beetle isn't walking straight. Also, some of the acting is quite bad, especially in the lines being used.
well i walking straight ain't that easy.
the acting is funny.
the lines ? i did that people who will understand.
YouTube isn't a place to share videos to your age group, it's a place to share videos with the world. You can't control who watches your videos on YouTube.
well ok.

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Re: BUZZY n SPINY Adventures series

Postby FireyPaperMario » Sun Jun 18, 2017 9:55 am

Looks like something made with MMD models imo

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Re: BUZZY n SPINY Adventures series

Postby PixelPest » Sun Jun 18, 2017 9:56 am

Tarkan809 wrote:
PixelPest wrote:What you use and whether it's difficult or not doesn't justify poor quality. And also why are the characters always floating?
well poorly i accidentally destroyed the table so yeah.
What is that even supposed to mean

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Re: BUZZY n SPINY Adventures series

Postby Tarkan809 » Sun Jun 18, 2017 9:59 am

PixelPest wrote:
Tarkan809 wrote:
PixelPest wrote:What you use and whether it's difficult or not doesn't justify poor quality. And also why are the characters always floating?
well poorly i accidentally destroyed the table so yeah.
What is that even supposed to mean
oh. well that when i broke the table

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Re: BUZZY n SPINY Adventures series

Postby HeroLinik » Sun Jun 18, 2017 10:10 am

Tarkan809 wrote:well poorly i accidentally destroyed the table so yeah.
Breaking the table is no excuse to make poor animation, it's a mark of poor skill. If anything, you really should wait until you get the hang of GMod before you make your own videos based in it.

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Re: BUZZY n SPINY Adventures series

Postby Tarkan809 » Sun Jun 18, 2017 10:25 am

HeroLinik wrote:
Tarkan809 wrote:well poorly i accidentally destroyed the table so yeah.
Breaking the table is no excuse to make poor animation, it's a mark of poor skill. If anything, you really should wait until you get the hang of GMod before you make your own videos based in it.
ok.

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Re: BUZZY n SPINY Adventures series

Postby Kley » Sun Jun 18, 2017 10:27 am

Tarkan809 wrote:
PixelPest wrote:Tbh it's very poorly done. Spelling mistakes, poor voices, bad-looking animation, and weird camera movement
well is hard to camera but i used gmod.
Careful not to double post.
just edit your previous one to include more substance next time.
Also, this was comedic as hell haha

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Re: BUZZY n SPINY Adventures series

Postby Tarkan809 » Sun Jun 18, 2017 10:29 am

Kley wrote:
Tarkan809 wrote:
PixelPest wrote:Tbh it's very poorly done. Spelling mistakes, poor voices, bad-looking animation, and weird camera movement
well is hard to camera but i used gmod.
Careful not to double post.
just edit your previous one to include more substance next time.
Also, this was comedic as hell haha
ok.

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Re: BUZZY n SPINY Adventures series

Postby DJFMHD » Sun Jun 18, 2017 1:15 pm

People are giving him a hard time about the characters walking. He is using Gmod it not easy the make the characters walk right but this still is kinda poorly made.

Also I realized you can't speak with good English.


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