Shining Adventure

[Cidro]

This is my first project I'm working. It is Shining Adventure

Plot :

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Bowser has captured Princess Peach and scattered the stars all over the kingdom. You have to get the stars and defeat Bowser.

Amount of Levels :

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Around 30-60 levels. ( based on how much ideas I have.)

Worlds :

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World 1 : Grasslands ( 5/5 levels completed )
World 2 : Desert ( 2 levels completed )
World 3 : Beach
World 4 : Forest
World 5 : Icelands
World 6 : Darklands

Level Screenshots :

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[img]https://.postimg.org/6xpsiwpgr/screen2.jpg[/img]

Map Screenshots :

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Changelog :

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Coming soon!

Playable characters :

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Mario
Luigi
Toad

Progress :

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I already made world one. I'm currently working on world two.

[PixelPest]

For your first project, and it doesn't look like you have a lot of experience in SMBX either, I'd recommend you do 20-30 levels max.

[loop]

For your first project, it looks great. No cutoffs in the screenshots, great enemy placement, no spam... all these tell me this project has a high chance of succeeding. Keep it up!

[Cidro]

New screenshot!

World One - Grasslands

[CynicHost]

Looks pretty good. I know it's only world 1, but I recommend you have some branching paths to make things more interesting. That's all though!

[loop]

There is a cutoff on the worldmap at the small part of the island. I recommend making that spot bigger.

[Cidro]

Thanks for the feedback!

Anyways, here are more screenshots!

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Hope you like them.

[Snessy the duck]

Thanks for the feedback!

Anyways, here are more screenshots!

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Hope you like them.

That looks great! Only problem is that in the castle screenshot, the green Background Castle blocks (The ones behind the twomp) blend in with the Foreground blocks, try making the background blocks a little darker! Other than that, this looks like a really fun episode, good job with it!