My first level!

[jtfgames]

Hello I'm new an I need peoples advice so here's my first level hope you like it!!!
https://www.mediafire.com/?iufaj5pxdhvcsg7

Spoiler: show

Please be honest i'm not the best i'm pretty new!

[Erik]

Okay let's give you advice:
-Use one style per level, no SMB3+SMW+SMB2, that doesn't look that good.
-Remove those pillars and desert BGO's, those aren't that good either.

Overall it's not that bad for a first level though

[glitch4]

Review of dis level

This level messed up a lot. I know that this is your first level, but it needs more work. There's lots of cutoffs, mostly with SMB1 grass. It has very bad design. The various game styles don't fit and they're not good, recolored graphics would help. Also a pillars don't fit in a grass-themed level. There's 2 stars in the first section, which the second star won't work when you collect the first one (meaning the star counter won't count the second). Lack of NPCs, such as bullet bill spam at the end of the level, placed bullet bill cannon on the grass, and the coins...ugh, looked terrible. This, however, I have no idea how to get the 3-up up there, unless you're supposed to typed scret code to get there. Also there's fake pits, which isn't that great.

Overall Score: 1.1/10
Section: The Trash Can

[Mable]

Okay let's give you advice:
-Use one style per level, no SMB3+SMW+SMB2, that doesn't look that good.

Smb3+Smw can look fine together. The Invasion and 2 uses smb3 and smb2 looks good. Two styles can look good if you use them right.