Character Creation/Approval Thread

[Shadow Yoshi]

Not what I was saying at all. I was making a point that those species are not genderless by providing examples from both genders.

[Mighty.EXE]

Not what I was saying at all. I was making a point that those species are not genderless by providing examples from both genders.

by calling them all males. 10/10

[FanofSMBX]

Seriously guys even I can tell it goes male/female.

[Bomber57]

Seriously guys even I can tell it goes male/female.

[Choco]

Seriously guys even I can tell it goes male/female.

[John The White Yoshi]

I'm new to this thing, so don't hate on me for trying.

Name: Frost
Gender: Male
Age: 16
Species: Yoshi (White)
Appearance a White Yoshi with a dark green Mario cap, dark green shorts, a red shirt, red Yoshi boots, and a pair of black frame glasses and a white glove on his right hand.
Personality: Likes most forms of music and playing video games on his own time. Can get very creative. He likes most people. The only exception is when someone makes funny of him, his friends and family. Hates Bowser with a passion.
Background: His past is mostly unknown, but we do know this. He lost his family and the village he grew up due to one of Bowser's invasion at a young age. Because of his odd behavior, no bother to care the little dino. One day, he meet Yoshi and became friends with him instantly. After that his life changed for the better, but he still wanted vengeance on Bowser and anyone who serves him. He's been trained by Yoshi's tribe, and recently Mario himself. He's mostly quiet, only speaking when it is his turn or gets out raged by someone's nonsensical judgement. His main form of combat is melee, a large copper hammer (The size of the ones the Mario Brothers carry), fist fighting, and has the ability to throw iceballs without the use of an Ice Flower, however can use an Ice Flower to power up the strength of his ice attacks. He is also able to run as fast as Yoshi and jump high as Mario. He prefers not to use his tongue to fight, and his eggs are explosive.

Better?

[SilverDeoxys563]

Seriously guys even I can tell it goes male/female.

I wonder how time consuming RPing is, hmm I've never done anything like this before

[MECHDRAGON777]

I will update this when I an at school since It would be a pain o scroll through all of this on a phone! If I say Toad(ette) indtead of human, would that be enough to get her aprroved?

[SilverDeoxys563]

wait guys how did we forget Vinyl's new character :((((

http://www.smbxgame.com/forums/v ... 30#p140615

[MECHDRAGON777]

wait guys how did we forget Vinyl's new character (((

http://www.smbxgame.com/forums/v ... 30#p140615

Name: Willard
Gender: Male
Age: 16
Species: Underground-Variant Goomba
Appearance: Pale blue skin, black shoes, orange headphones, shades strapped around his neck with a string, and a blue baseball cap with an yellow trim on it.
Personality: A pretty chill Goomba who normally runs on the neutral side of things. Isn't afraid to get involved in things, but won't start a fight on his own terms. Enjoys playing with his Goomba friends, mainly in a friendly game of street Basketball.
Background: Willard was once your average, run-of-the-mill Goomba, he loved living with his mother out in the sewers of Brooklyn, New York. He went to school, he got average grades in the Bowser Academy for Goombas. He went home and talked with his Mother about how his day was, ate the Mushrooms she made for him and her while his dad was out in the military, serving under Bowser. One day though, they got a message from the Paratroopa mail saying his Father died to the boot of one of the plumber brothers. Willard was saddened, and so was his Mother. He suggested the idea that he should go to the military to take revenge for his Dad. His Mother didn't like the idea, so she refused the idea. This only enraged Willard, thinking that his Mother thought weakly of him. The next day, he decided to play with his friends while at the park, telling them about his dad and how he wanted to enlist in the military. One of his friend's just scoffed, saying that he WAS indeed too weak to go, even for a subspecies of a Goomba. This angered Willard even more, and so he begin to attack his friend who called him out. He got in one little fight and his mom got scared, she said 'You're movin' with your auntie and uncle in Bel Air'. He begged and pleaded with her day after day, but she packed my suit case and sent him on his way. She gave him a kiss and then she gave his ticket. He put his Walkman on and said, 'I might as well kick it'. First class, yo this is bad, drinking orange juice out of a champagne glass. Is this what the people of Bel-Air living like? Hmmmmm this might be alright. But wait I hear they're prissy, bourgeois, all that, is this the type of place that they just send this cool cat? I don't think so, I'll see when I get there, I hope they're prepared for the prince of Bel-Air. Well, the plane landed and when I came out, there was a dude who looked like a cop standing there with my name out. I ain't trying to get arrested yet, I just got here, I sprang with the quickness like lightning, disappeared. I whistled for a cab and when it came near, the license plate said fresh and it had dice in the mirror. If anything I could say that this cab was rare. But I thought 'Nah, forget it' - 'Yo, holmes to Bel Air'. I pulled up to the house about 7 or 8, and I yelled to the cabbie 'Yo holmes smell ya later'. I looked at my kingdom, I was finally there,to sit on my throne as the Prince of Bel Air.

I personaly like Vinyl's characters! Though the first is better! Only thingI find idd is the reall wirld places, and slang!

[John The White Yoshi]

wait guys how did we forget Vinyl's new character (((

http://www.smbxgame.com/forums/v ... 30#p140615

Oh look....a new enemy I have to smash with my hammer..

[Shadow Yoshi]

Better?

Better, but still a little bit overpowered. You have some spelling/grammar errors in your post as well.

[Vinyl Scratch]

inb4 the RP will only have like 4 characters

[Danny]

inb4 the RP will only have like 4 characters

It's because Joey is so damn nitpicky about pretty much everything.

That and how the hell do you figure a Marioverse-only RP to work.

[Shadow Yoshi]

Without a necessary level of detail this whole thing will go straight to hell.

[Bomber57]

I'm gonna be entering with a character, as soon as I figure out his name ;~;

[Danny]

Without a necessary level of detail this whole thing will go straight to hell.

And with being overly detailed we won't have any mysterious characters. See: mine.

[Shadow Yoshi]

I'm not saying you need to document the entire life of your character. You just need to be detailed in what you do document.

[Vinyl Scratch]

I'm not saying you need to document the entire life of your character. You just need to be detailed in what you do document.

Background: Who is your character? Where did they come from? What friends and family members do they have? What was their childhood like? This section should be a substantial description of your character (at least 2 paragraphs) that provides outlook on what makes them unique. Develop this as much as you want, but keep it PG-13.

Please edit the OP if you're going to say that then
The OP says that you want us to detail our character's lifes, but this post says you just want us to make the character different
I'm honestly guessing this is literally your first time ever running an RP in a forum, which, if that's the case, then I can understand you making some mistakes here and there
But being nitpicky to the point where there is about 9 characters that have been requested and only 3 have been confirmed to actually be in the RP is not really fun
Mario-Only characters? Okay fine, RPs do these kind of things all the time.
Engrish please? We're not writing a novel here, we're just trying to have fun.
Quality-Control AKA Overpowered characters? Entirely fine if you want them out.
If this REALLY is your first time running a forum RP, then I think you know the responsibility of doing things as such, and you need to know that there is going to be a fine line between being fun with it and being in complete control to the point where it isn't fun at all
I'd suggest making things simplier without being completely nitpicky with it if this really is your first time, it's all I can advice to you
If not, then I'd honestly suggest that someone else run this

The only real reason people would probably join this is because that this is literally the only RP on the forum ever since the other ones have been shut down
If this was just another normal RP post without forcing people to either "Join this RP or don't RP at all", then I can honestly guarantee you that not very many people would like to join this one and would rather feel more unbound instead of tied to a fence. It's like saying to your kids that you're going to the park but they're only allowed to be in this 1 area while everyone else's families are over partying and getting the full extent of the park

[MECHDRAGON777]

I'm not saying you need to document the entire life of your character. You just need to be detailed in what you do document.

Background: Who is your character? Where did they come from? What friends and family members do they have? What was their childhood like? This section should be a substantial description of your character (at least 2 paragraphs) that provides outlook on what makes them unique. Develop this as much as you want, but keep it PG-13.

Please edit the OP if you're going to say that then
The OP says that you want us to detail our character's lifes, but this post says you just want us to make the character different
I'm honestly guessing this is literally your first time ever running an RP in a forum, which, if that's the case, then I can understand you making some mistakes here and there
But being nitpicky to the point where there is about 9 characters that have been requested and only 3 have been confirmed to actually be in the RP is not really fun
Mario-Only characters? Okay fine, RPs do these kind of things all the time.
Engrish please? We're not writing a novel here, we're just trying to have fun.
Quality-Control AKA Overpowered characters? Entirely fine if you want them out.
If this REALLY is your first time running a forum RP, then I think you know the responsibility of doing things as such, and you need to know that there is going to be a fine line between being fun with it and being in complete control to the point where it isn't fun at all
I'd suggest making things simplier without being completely nitpicky with it if this really is your first time, it's all I can advice to you
If not, then I'd honestly suggest that someone else run this

The only real reason people would probably join this is because that this is literally the only RP on the forum ever since the other ones have been shut down
If this was just another normal RP post without forcing people to either "Join this RP or don't RP at all", then I can honestly guarantee you that not very many people would like to join this one and would rather feel more unbound instead of tied to a fence. It's like saying to your kids that you're going to the park but they're only allowed to be in this 1 area while everyone else's families are over partying and getting the full extent of the park

I have to agree with Vinyl here, the only reason I am joining or trying ti join is that I have not gotten into an fight with Kōri in two or three years because we had to move here! I love RPGs, and tried out RPs about three years ago, I enjoyed it and eventually made an original character (Kōri is not based off of anything or anyone) and yet she is not allowed. The "Grammar pefectiönist" is not helpin either since it fells like one typographical error ruins your chances! I typed all of mine in a moing vehical as well on a touch screen! No one is a perfectiönist ; or atleast they should not be! I personally think 8bitmushroom or Vinyl should be in charge of this! Even FanofSMBX! I know the first two can do it perfectly or near perfectly! It matters more about fun then perfectiönisim. Do you know how hard it is to edit a sinle letter on a touch screen phone in the middle of a paragraph or sentense? Tha us one of my issues! Vinyl's reason is the most logical thing I heard on this thread (kind of)! If this is your [Joey] first time hosting this, you should know how it is run mostly first! About Quality Control, you can specify what things are overpowered or give a strength limmit! I can weaken Kōri accordingly and still maintain who she is, but not when I fo not know whag is overpowered! Also, the limmite species is more of a nuciance! Since when can you not Role play as a Hume? If I rememer correctl, that is the only reason you tirned her down was because "No Humans allowed" when there are at least seven in the Mario Universe! That is why I think tha is unjustified!

Thank you Vinyl Scratch!