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Ness-Wednesday
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Postby Ness-Wednesday » Sun Jan 01, 2017 9:58 pm
The story after Shadow Kracko's defeat, but what will happen is quite amusing...

Chapter 1: Lucas Mucus
The night was long, and Ness-Wednesday was drinking a cup of water as he and his son picked up the last soccer ball.
Lucas-Thursday was pleased when it comes to playing, in casual moments, he would immediately like and play with nearly anyone he sees.
He was raised well, and Mayumi never failed to put him to sleep.
However, she went out for the new year, Ranai invited her you know?
Ness-Wednesday took Lucky outside, his mom would be gone until tomorrow night.
"Dad," The quiet one said.
"Why are we standing outside?"
Ness-Wednesday took him to the backyard, with a small grin.
"Son, you're twelve now," He started.
"I think it's time that you go out and explore the wild with plenty of people,"
"After all, I started when I was older and look where it got me."
Lucas-Thursday didn't understand everything his dad said.
"Do you mean I have to go out more?" He was confused.
"But mommy wouldn't want me to go out,"
"She says there are mean creatures and humans that are intended to harm the innocent,"
"Does this mean we're trapped in a world of Cannibals?"
Nessy checked his book, however he taught him plenty of things while he was younger and he didn't want him to become Wolfenstien.
"Yes, you could say that," He didn't want to get too complicated.
"Almost anything you think is impossible can happen,"
"The world is a mysterious and dark place at times,"
"Maybe I can take you on an adventure, follow me son,"
And with that, both royal beings went back into the palace of frames, the young Northern prince called Marina.
He wanted to ask if the night would be harsh.
"The mist isn't so bad, maybe I'll give my son an old jacket of mine,"
He gave Lucky an old jacket, the color of it was green, but he was scared when he put it on.
"Where are we going?" He asked his dad.
"It's only the beginning of-," Nessy interrupted him as he opened the back door, luckily he locked every other entrance so no one could enter.
Nessy left a note in case his wife returned early.
"Son, it's time to take you to a far away place," He replied.
"I'm taking you to an adventure, this time we'll both go through this journey together."
"Just be aware that you'll be stepping on Mountain dew until we reach the lake."
Lucas-Thursday and his parents sold their castle and used it to buy a land near a scout camp, but he dared not to harm nature.
He looked up, he saw small stars the showed off constellations, one of them was Draco and another was the Big Dipper.
He also saw a red gas of light, which questioned him.
"Dad, what's that red star?" He asked.
"Why, that's Mars one of our planets," His dad began.
"Now be careful where you step, you might trip over a branch,"
It wasn't long until they found a raft, Nessy checked to see if there were no boats or Kayaks nearby.
"Look here son, see this raft?"
"Well, Your adventure starts here and I'm going to take you too a far away place,"
"Remember son, I'm not going to let you lose,"
"I can't let you die easily, there is a lot you're going to learn, but safety first,"
Ness-Wednesday took his son and they both got on the raft, lifting the rope.
"But I wouldn't run away," Lucky shrugged.
"No matter what, I'll be the three A's and an E,"
"I'm the I, O and over, U and me, and Y am I talking?"
The letters made perfect sense, and Nessy taught him that.
They were on a new journey, and so far nothing was gonna stop them.
At least that's what they thought...
"I gotta get back to sleep," Ninten was awake, but he heard some crumbles and it kinda bothered him.
"What, is that the boy?"
"And he has a son?"
Janondorf wanted to track down Ness-Wednesday, but for Ninten to know that the possible king had a son?
Ninten wasn't too depressed, but when he and Ana lived in a more complex side far from SMBX's.
Each community had a place on it's own, but since Nintendo didn't really need him for much, he and Ana met Janondorf, they're currently ruled under her royalty.
"Ah, so this prince can be classified king, is that right?" Janondorf wanted to know about her foe.
"And he moved into a place near Dunowarce, is this what you're telling me?" Ninten nodded with fright.
"Rats, that boy seems to be up to something, and I'm not liking where this is going!"
Janondorf stood in the shadows, with only her legs and feet (which are powerful, like a warlock stomping on someone) showing.
"We must take this guy out, and his son would probably be good use in paint,"
"And maybe, fuel for the pet,"
"Ninten, get our high class eagles into our group, we need to talk!"
"Your majesty, I'm sure we can get the boy, but I'm sure you know what you're doing," Ninten put his hat down, taking it off with sorrow.
"Sure, after all I'm the queen of this castle," She gave Ninten an evil smile.
"I'll never stop until me and the king take him apart,"
Meanwhile, the two adventures were on a raft to an adventure they may never think of.
"Dad, can you tell me which berries are poisonous and which ones aren't?"
Lucas-Thursday wanted to study all the poisons of the world.
"I'm sure there's a lack of poisonous or deadly sea creatures below us,"
"But danger can be found anywhere really,"
"I mean, eating a poisonous berry is bad, I heard there's on the can paralyze you,"
"My son, the camp has been checked many times and it's been around for nearly 100 years,"
"Nothing deadly has been reported ever since a few years back," He replied.
"Besides it's Tent Mile River's camps, not Iwannapeepee," They both laughed as the sky shined with glorious stars.
And with that, what will happen to the boys?
Who knows really, maybe they'll meet a bear, and they might steal his/her honey?
Maybe not, but it's gonna be tough out there!
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FireyPaperMario
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Postby FireyPaperMario » Tue Jan 03, 2017 11:24 am
Let me guess, this SMBX story takes place at least 20 years after "Rise of Shadow Kracko"... 
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Ness-Wednesday
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Postby Ness-Wednesday » Tue Jan 03, 2017 2:58 pm
NintendoOtaku93 wrote:Let me guess, this SMBX story takes place at least 20 years after "Rise of Shadow Kracko"... 
Close, 15 years after the previous fanfic.
Good guess though.
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Postby TUWAN » Tue Jan 03, 2017 6:29 pm
can't wait for the next part
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Ness-Wednesday
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Postby Ness-Wednesday » Thu Jan 26, 2017 10:38 pm
Chapter 2 will be up soon, I'm working on a lot if things at the moment so it's difficult to focus on every single one of them at once.
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Postby FireyPaperMario » Fri Jan 27, 2017 6:50 am
Ness-Wednesday wrote:Chapter 2 will be up soon, I'm working on a lot if things at the moment so it's difficult to focus on every single one of them at once.
That's good, take your time! ^.^')
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Postby Alagirez » Fri Jan 27, 2017 6:01 pm
Another nessy story!
:D
Well the story is great as usual, keep up the good work!
- Waiting for chapter 2 -
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Ness-Wednesday
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Postby Ness-Wednesday » Mon Jan 30, 2017 8:56 pm
The wait is no more!
Chapter 2: Leave Abuse My Son!
As the water was calm, they followed along on the raft.
Nessy's warm hand around his son was quite comfortable, and the night sky was bright.
The trees looked like dark and giant bushes, it slightly caught him off gaurd.
"Dad, the why do I see dark spaces everywhere?" Lucas-Thursday was scared.
His dad just looked at him and smiled.
"Nature can be quite majestic during the day," Nessy started.
"But at times, the night can play tricks up your sleves, and even your eyes!"
"You don't have much to fear, although there are such live stock and animals that seem dangerous, but what's worse is a girl I know who dresses like a Dhelmise."
Lucas-Thursday looked up, he didn't know who was this girl that his dad was talking about.
"But there's not much to worry about, she's probably away,"
"Dad," Lucas-Thursday looked up at the stars, seeing a big spoon and a dragon like figure.
"Why do the stars connect into weird shapes?"
He starred at the constelations in the night sky, Ness told him about constelations.
His son started to understand more as he listened.
The trip was long, but his dad thought him many wonderful things.
"Maybe, we can explore more things in our path," he thought.
"Proud to be joyful son," Nessy replied.
And the two agreed, the water was also cool and slow.
Suddenly, the two went overboard and the raft fliped upward and crashed when it roughly landed on the ground.
They were both dirty, but still in fair condition, however Lucas-Thrusday went over to the Northern-Western Prince as he looked at the trees.
"Now son, you don't have to fear with me around," he stated being fearless.
The two walked together, they weren't aware of their surroundings, they didn't notice a single shadow.
"Dad, what if a bear attacks us?" The young child shimmered as his bones felt a small chill.
"Son, hurting animals isn't a right nor a soild, and it should never be anywhere in the world,"
"If one bear were to creep up, just play dead and never run away!"
His dad seemed to have enough information to keep him safe at all times, which is why he never took him to Australia and why he moved from New Donk to Canadiana.
"Just remember that a purple father with a gold belt will always be responsible when it comes to his own son."
His son felt better, but the night still made everything look scary.
Meanwhile, the Raichu had two sons, and one of them ran his own show that currently airs episodes on it's 23rd season, running for 15 years.
The son's brother had his own, special things so they both went in different paths.
However, Lucas-Thursday wasn't aware of this, and he was about to get surprised.
"Dad, you're hand is starting to feel a bit light," He looked back and got scared, his dad was gone!
"Oh no..." He jumped about but became calm afterwards.
"My dad is gone, I'm all lost in the woods and I don't know where I'm going..."
"Maybe I can find help, but I don't think anyone is here,"
However he thought wrong, three characters were walking to fetch wood, even though it was damp (really, they should've just cut the outer layer! Angry) and the air was filled with mist.
They finished pulling a prank on some inanimate objects who were in a log cabin.
"I don't have much to say really, I mean we're trying to look for water and you two are acting like if there's a creature trying to kill us," said Tennis ball.
"There is no assumable or accruate way that faceless man can exist,"
"Also, I think you don't understand the point of mothman's existence, as it hasn't been confirmed whether he really exists or not,"
"Tennis ball," Megaman wanted to shut him up.
"I think we get the point, but that still doesn't solve our problem that since we're trying to get some water."
"Thankfully we're near an old faucet, and that's a good thing!"
"Or is it?" Luigi said in a frightened tone, of course he was afraid of ghosts, especially boos.
"I don't like the sound of these evil creatures stalking about, maybe we should just use the water we took with us."
"That's for drinking, not playing or washing," Tennis ball replied.
Just then, they saw Lucas-Thursday, and he was looking at them with a shy and curious look.
"Where's my dad?" He asked as his bones felt cold again.
"He was at my sight and he was gone in a flash, I don't know where he is," Megaman thought of a story he was told at the end of 2016.
"Well youngster, I'm afraid your dad has been taken a by a girl from an underrated show, with an anchor as her right hand and a steering wheel on her back with chains around her body and a right eye-patch,"
With this much detail, someone had to burst out.
"7,8/10 Too much detail," Tennis ball continued.
"In other words, mind speaking a bit of english for us?"
"Well," Megaman began.
"Dhelumise is a girl who was once a self-proclaimed princess, but what made her like this was beyond her original show, thanks to a prince who cloned himself, the clone gave her powers."
"Her cousin and some foreign exchange student but she one of the unique Mikes, so we won't talk about her, although they also got powers."
"She was upset that she wasn't treated the way she wished, rumor has it that she roams this forest to this day."
"She will get her revenge on the ones who betrayed, lothated or tricked her."
Suddenly, Lucas-Thursday shrieked but what he didn't realize was the same girl that Megaman was reffering to was right behind the boy.
"Yeah, it was a true story, and you would want to turn your back, run for your life!" The three fled from the scene, and Lucas-Thursday looked behind him.
"What, it can't be!" What Lucas-Thursday saw was the exact same girl.
Meanwhile Ninten had a few things on his trip over a rock.
In fact, that's what exactly happened.
"Ouch, how can I scrape my knee?" Ninten didn't want to scream out loud.
"I'm glad to have a first aid kit just to be safe," Ninten was prepared and he wasn't going to cry.
"Maybe I can keep up with the two kids," Ninten jumped, but he fell into a trap!
He was grounded harshly, the dirt came down very fast that it buried him due to how small the trap was.
It took him a while to get out, but when he got up, he saw a prince who was holding his crown and was upside down.
"Having blood rushing through my head, yes I need to stay smart, but I can't be over doing it," Prince Northern-Western stated.
"However, if you mind giving me a hand, you can cut the vine wrapped aorund my..." He thought of an idea.
He reached for his left foot, but when got a bit too close...
"How long is this vine?" It pulled him up to a tree branch, forcing him up and making him land after a tight ride.
"Wait, why does that 90's kid look familiar?"
However Ninten kept moving, but he did find a log cabin.
"Gee, is this a camp I'm tresspassing through?" He thought.
"I mean, Janondorf told me to find the Prince and the child, but she didn't tell me to tresspass over a camp?"
However, he saw the haunted girl and was surprised.
"Oh my, not only that I've found the kid, but I've found a lonely girl who is trying to-" His eyes began to stare hard as he saw the girl with an anchor as her right-arm.
He gulped with fear, he didn't know what to expect from that little creep.
But what would happen to Lucas-Thursday, and what would Dhelumise do?
I'm sure the dad is safe, but if he can't make it in time who knows what will happen next?
These questions will be answered soon as Chapter 3 is coming up soon...
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Ness-Wednesday
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Postby Ness-Wednesday » Sat Apr 01, 2017 3:42 pm
Chapter 3: Running with Dhelumise.
Ninten wanted to shriek, he feared that the girl with a huge anchor and covered in seaweed might plan on killing Lucas-Thursday.
The three water whisperers hid behind a tree.
"WHY OUT OF EVERYTHING DO I HAVE TO DIE THIS WAY?!" the boy screamed.
His dad heard him far from the distance, he jumped into action!
"My son is in danger, what have I done?" Ness-Wednesday freaked.
"Time for plan number #701, the plan that's based of the Flying press!"
He jumped off the tree branch and he swung like Tarzan, but when he reached a really high level, his foot came loose and he flew in the air.
"This is not what I planned!" He was falling from 386 feet above ground level, and he was couldn't see because his glasses were foggy.
This caused him to get confused thinking he was about to land in the water, but that he was wrong.
"Keep your leg straight when you hit the water!" He said, but he wasn't going into the lake, in fact he about to crash into a chiminey of one of the cabins!
There were some campers in the cabin trying to set a fire, Mudkip and Pixelpest were two of them.
"Are these campers stupid, or did they ever learn to burn damp wood?" Pixelpest quietly spoke to Mudkip like if it was a private message.
"I mean, they should start by cutting the outside off." He started to get really concerned.
"I don't know," Mudkip replied.
"What I'm afraid of is if this will be as bad as watching Norm of the North, or someone talking about animal-" Just then, a cloud of soot and smoke appeared from the fireplace.
Ness-Wednesday came down from the chiminey and was covered in soot.
The three birds stared at the fainted being, the stork spoked.
"Can we use this as fuel?" He said, but when one of his feathers touched Nessy, he got up and turned his head in a rushed way.
"I have to go get my son!" He flipped and ran straight to the door, in front was a pail of water.
He threw the pail in his face and cleared his glasses and face from the dirty soot.
"What did I just throw?" He asked in a hurried tone and mood, Pixelpest could only shrug.
"You threw some water was going to be important to take out the fire we're trying to start, but I guess the we need to refill now..." Pixelpest didn't understand what was going on.
"Thank you!" Ness-Wednesday said as he ran out of the cabin and into the dark woods.
Meanwhile Lucas-Thursday was shaking in his shoes.
He could only see death in his eyes as Dhelumise was raising her right arm, ready to squeeze the boy like lemonade.
However, when she was about to do so, she had a brief thought.
"Man, this boy is cute and really a keeper if kept alive."
"Who am I kidding, what have I done to myself, I miss acting like if I was a princess, I don't want to hurt this poor guy!"
So she dropped the anchor, and Lucas-Thursday left a dolly eye with the rest of his face covered.
The three looked up and were shocked to see Dhelumise look so miserable and refuse to capture anyone.
"You mean, you're not going to hurt me?" Lucas-Thursday asked, Dhelumise nodded and was ready to speak.
However Ness-Wednesday came and took his son by the back.
"My son, I'm so happy that you're safe!" He wanted to cry, but Dhelumise cleared her throat.
"Excuse me," She spoke.
"But I'm not sure if you remember me back in the older Cartoon Network days?" Ness-Wednesday payed attention.
Ness-Wednesday stared at her, but his eyes opened.
"Lulu, it's you!" He screamed.
"I can't believe it, you're still around!" Tears began to drop from his eyes after seeing a long lost friend.
"I missed my old times when I was stranded in that island now," He hugged her, but Dhelumise was struggling to get out.
"Well, what do you know?" She fell on the floor.
"How long has it been?" She counted and it's been a total of over thirteen years!
"Would you look at that, we haven't seen each other past a decade!"
"Excuse me," Lucas-Thursday cleared his throat.
"Do you know the way out of the forest, we're on a journey to stop an evil being so she won't-" He was hushed by Dhelumise.
"Speak no more," She said.
"I've heard everything your dad told you, and I know the best path to go through."
Lucas-Thursday preached on her leading them, but he when he looked around, all the lights went out.
Everyone else was asleep in their cabins, but four people were wandering about tresspassing through the camp.
Ninten saw everything and shook his head.
He wrote it all down in a notepad, and this was the following text:
"The dude has a son, and he may become king!"
"But we may have to worry about three in one due to a young girl who is named Dhelumise and seems like an alternative Lulu from Mike, Lu, and Og."
"She has an anchor as a left arm that is powerful enough to kill a Humpack whale, which is in a higher tier of bulk than Janondorf."
"Would it be able to OHKO a Blissey who is the queen of bulk?"
Ninten looked back, a Chipmunk stared at him Ninten got scared.
"Oh no, a chipmunk!" He stepped back.
"It has been know to give people diseases, and If get bit I'll die!"
He ran away, but the chipmunk followed, him!
He looked back and sped up as fast as he can, but all of a sudden...
"I'll be in Smash!" He yelled as he fell off a cliff, however he didn't open an eye.
"So you're not familiar here are you?" Dhelumise asked.
"Well, my dad tought me about mafia echidnas, troops of birds, and a purple belching dinosaur," Lucas-Thursday answered, but all of a sudden...
Lucas-Thursday and Dhelumise both got smacked down as Ninten crashed on top of them.
"What can happen?" Ninten got off both of the youngsters, and they stared at him.
"Okay Ninten..." He thought to himself.
"Just act moronic!"
"Why hello there, say you-" Ninten was cut off as Dhelumise shut him up.
"You're a real stalker you know that, we may not be the best kids in the woods but we don't have the right to be looked as cuties?"
Dhelumise didn't wish to say anymore, Lucas-Thursday looked at her without word.
"Come on the two of you, you can adopt an imaginary friend when you get back," Ness-Wednesday didn't notice the Ninten dropped by.
Ninten got furious, he ran into Nessy and started to pummel and use his psi powers on him.
They both started rampaging each other leaving them both with bruises.
"Dad!" Lucas-Thursday yelled, he wanted to get rid of Ninten before he did anymore damage.
Dhelumise ran with him, however when the two stepped on a twig...
"Son!" The two stopped their horse play, but the younger beings have fallen into a dark, deep abyss.
"Well, I'm sure we'll meet again and let's not battle it out like lions next time." He gave Ninten an egg and he jumped into the abyss.
The two woke up two minutes after surviving the long fall, but a polar feeling struck them.
"Well, well!" An unknown voice claimed.
"It seems like more criminals want to rob my home again, is that right?"
"Robbers?" Dhelumise wondered.
"We didn't come here to steal anything, we slipped in by accident, we sware!"
"Oh, so is this another mafia situation, the one where you act innocent until the truth comes out?" He replied.
"Is there a much more, implying trap I'm not getting?"
"Are you trying to tresspass just to tell me about a not so amusing competiton, is the reason even diverting?"
"No sir, we don't mean any harm," Lucky answered.
"We'll like to ask where we can find the exit?"
"Oh sure, it's right beneath you..." And with suspicions, he spoke.
"Ice them!" Two guards came up and grabbed them, leaving an open space of icy water under the rug.
Just then Ness-Wednesday came up.
"Hold it sir, you have mistaken these travelers!" Ness-Wednesday shouted, however the strange man in the shadows didn't say anything.
"I'm the father of these little ones, and I can say what they stated is indeed, accurate!" He listened, the voice started to sound familiar.
"Now, I'll like you to come out and reveal who you are to all three of us..." The guy laughed with a convincing and overwhelmed mood, this was because...
"Brother..."
The two were shocked, and they high fived each other!
After a long time without seeing him, he finally met his brother!
"It's been at least a generation in which the legend states..." He smiled as his brother stepped up.
Lucas-Thursday looked up, and asked: "Who are you?"
"Guys, Meet my brother Jeff-Monday!" He answered clearly, but Nessy wanted his brother to continue.
"I think we should celebrate, don't you tink?" Jeff-Monday asked.
Except, how will they celebrate?
It's unfortunate to tell you that you'll have to find out in the next chapter which isn't to far from today.
Maybe They'll find a way to leave the woods and go into a restaraunt, or go to broadway?
Don't worry, you'll find out!
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Postby Ness-Wednesday » Sat Apr 01, 2017 3:58 pm
timocomsmbx2345 wrote:Copying the one from above:

GG 
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Postby timocomsmbx2345 » Sat Apr 01, 2017 4:00 pm
Ness-Wednesday wrote:timocomsmbx2345 wrote:Copying the one from above:

GG 
april fools!
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Postby Ness-Wednesday » Sat Apr 01, 2017 4:01 pm
timocomsmbx2345 wrote:Ness-Wednesday wrote:timocomsmbx2345 wrote:Copying the one from above:

GG 
april fools!
Dangit, I was going to say the same but, I'll just say it....
April fools!
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