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Inflation

Postby ShadowStarX » Sat Dec 12, 2020 5:35 pm

Level and recolors by me
P-Balloon by MrDoubleA
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Re: Inflation [WIP]

Postby MrCaves » Tue Dec 15, 2020 5:15 pm

Some nit picks:
- An oversaturation of coins
- The Third Thwomp setup in the graf section is a bit busy
- Some of the grafs blend too well with the coins

Good level so far, but what problem is being solved?

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Re: Inflation [WIP]

Postby ShadowStarX » Tue Dec 15, 2020 5:39 pm

MrCaves wrote:
Tue Dec 15, 2020 5:15 pm
Some nit picks:
- An oversaturation of coins
- The Third Thwomp setup in the graf section is a bit busy
- Some of the grafs blend too well with the coins

Good level so far, but what problem is being solved?
It'll unfold when the story elements are added along with the final section.
Also oversaturation? The regular coins are kept the vanilla color and the worthless ones are desaturated.
I'll change the Van de Grafts to purple though.

And thanks for the feedback.

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Re: Inflation [WIP]

Postby MrCaves » Tue Dec 15, 2020 5:54 pm

I just think the coins should be reduced a bit, if not, solely focused on the regular coins in order to make the path foward in the level more focused.

Ok what I meant to say was the level has an oversaturated AMOUNT of coins. Not the coins themselves being saturated is the problem.

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Re: Inflation [WIP]

Postby ShadowStarX » Wed Dec 16, 2020 7:45 am

MrCaves wrote:
Tue Dec 15, 2020 5:54 pm
I just think the coins should be reduced a bit, if not, solely focused on the regular coins in order to make the path foward in the level more focused.

Ok what I meant to say was the level has an oversaturated AMOUNT of coins. Not the coins themselves being saturated is the problem.
The thing is, the worthless coins serve a purpose story-wise and I think the regular golden coins are pretty distinct from those.
Like, the level's name is literally Inflation, which has two meanings.
Not gonna lie though, even regularly coin placement is not my strength, admittedly.

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Re: Inflation

Postby ShadowStarX » Sat Dec 19, 2020 4:52 pm

And it's finished, presumably!


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